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个人陈述范例(英文版)
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Personal StatementI am
the applicant Wang Ming.
From September
2002 to July 2006, I studied the specialty of
Financial Manag...
Personal Statement
I am the applicant Wang
Ming. From September 2002 to
July 2006,
I studied the specialty of Financial Management at
Beijing
University
of
Chemical
Technology.
Through
undergraduate
studies,
I
contacted
such
disciplines
as
accounting, international finance,
securities investment and so
on;
however,
keenly
conscious
that
my
current
acquisition
is
far
from
enough
for
me
to
meet
the
needs
of
the
fast
developing
economy,
I
am
eager
to
pursue
further
studies.
Through various channels, I know about
your world-renowned
program,
and
I
am
now
applying
for
MA
Finance
and
Investment offered by University of
Nottingham.
1
At university, I gained a
full understanding of accounting
and
finance.
In
specialized
studies,
I
obtained
excellent
academic
records.
Paying
attention
to
the
balancing
development
of
financial
and
managerial
disciplines,
I
attended
those
selective
courses
including
Fiscal
Science,
Human Resource
Management, Monetary Banking, Insurance
and the like, knowing about the
application of accounting in
various
aspects. In this way, when I do relevant topics,
in face
of real voucher, bill and
account book, I have experienced the
whole process of keeping accounts and
working out financial
statement and
deepened my understanding of the importance
of accounting in enterprises.
In the process
of studies, I preferred such teaching mode
as case class, group discussion, PPT
representation and the like,
and I
always took active part in them, acting as group
leader
and leading the members to
select topic, collect materials and
make
topic
report.
We
once
analyzed
the
successful
development
of
Nokia
in
China,
the
mobile
telephone
magnate.
While
Motorola
and
Samsung
had
laid
a
solid
2
foundation
in
China,
how
did
Nokia
establish
fine
financial
system
to
support
its
development?
Based
on
the
uniform
framework
of
global
financial
management,
Nokia
took
Chinese characteristics
into full consideration in the aspects of
account
procedures
and
coordination
of
headquarters
and
branches, and only in
three years, its headquarters gained the
right and opportunity to control its
branches, promoting the
smooth
connection of local places and the globe and
seeking
expansion.
Through
such
case
analysis,
I
obtained
further
understanding
of
the
vital
position
of
financial
analysis
and
accounting
systems
in
enterprises.
The
choice
of
investment
and
the
opportunities
to
operate
fund
can
always
change
inutility into wonder.
In Baring Bank bankruptcy
discussion in class, I developed
an
unquenchable interest in financial derivatives.
The power of
double-edged sword became
extremely mighty in market full
of
competitions.
Through
this
case,
I
realized
the
great
importance of balance
sheet and its check, and if there were
strict
auditing
system
and
clear
division
of
rights
and
responsibilities, the result may
probably be totally different. In
3
this
sense,
the
function
of
accounting
could
not be
ignored.
After
knowing
about
accounting
and
financial
knowledge,
I
stressed
more
on
the
absorption
of
knowledge
in
various
aspects, starting to
dabble in a variety of aspects, studying the
English
original
books
of
accounting
and
comparing
the
differences of accounting standards in
a wealth of countries.
When foreign
enterprises enter China, how shall we interpret
the financial reports of them so as to
compare the accounting
modes
and
make
the
correct
decision?
After
analyzing
Daimler-Benz
AG,
I
found
out
that
on
account
of
the
differences of accounting statement, a
loss-making enterprise
could represent
profit in another accounting mode, and I was
again
startled
by
the
function
and
position
of
accounting
in
economy. My eagerness to make certain
achievements in the
field increased day
by day.
Despite
of
academic
studies,
I
was
also
keen
on
participation
in
association
activities,
joining
in
Debate
Association,
English
Club
and
other
associations
of
the
university and winning
the Third Place in Debate Competition
of
the
college.
I
am
also
fond
of
drawing
and
calligraphy,
4
devoting a
majority of spare time to them. My drawing works
won awards in competitions of the
university many times.
Along with deepening my academic
studies, I find that the
function of
accounting far exceeds commercial field. How to
carry out individual financing so as to
maximize your assets?
How to judge the
profit-making condition and financial risks
of a company from its financial
statement in securities market
so as to
optimize your investment? How the feasibility of
an
item
is
reflected
in
accounting
language?
Can
it
bring
you
prospective
profit
as
you
expect?
With
strong
desire
for
knowledge and curiosity, I firm my
determination to study a
postgraduate
program. Yours, boasting academic strength in
accounting
and
financial
fields,
rich
teaching
resources
and
excellent curriculum setting, is my
ideal destination to pursue
further
studies,
and
the
practicability
of
courses
and
authenticity
of
cases
will
enable
me
to
apply
my
future
acquisition to work. In this manner, I
will lay a solid academic
foundation
and cultivate strong practical capability for
future
engagement
in
economic
field
in
China.
With
all
sincerity,
I
hope
you can take my application into serious
consideration,
5
and I shall appreciate you if you grant
me an opportunity for
further studies.
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:
PS
的写作方式
个人陈述,
(PERSONAL STATEMENT
,
以下简称
PS)
是申
请美国,加拿大,英国等西方国家的大学
/
研究生
录取时由申请人
...
PS
的写作方式
个人陈述,
(PERSONAL
ST
ATEMENT
,以下简称
PS)
是申
请美
国,加拿大,英国等西方国家的大学
/
研究生录取时由申请人写的关
于自我的一篇漫谈体文章。当然有的学校要求的文章题
目不一定叫
PERSONAL
STATEMENT
,如有的学校让你写出动机
(Motivation)
兴趣,经历等。由于在中国的升学体制中,基本上是唯分数论的,因
此中国的申请人
对这类文件的写作和思维方式不熟悉。
而欧美大学录
取学生,发
放奖学金,是通过全面综合考察申请者的条件来决定的。
所谓留学文书,如
PS
,推荐信,
RP(Research prop
osal),CV
等是一
套文件系统,用以向
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录取
院校从各个角度展现您的求学动机,
学术学习能力,
工作和
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研究经历,结合一系列更“客观”
,可量化的指标:如
GRE
,
TOEFL
,
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IELTS
,
GPA
等构成您的全貌。留学文书在西方的文化背景下是申请
入学
(
奖学金
)
的极为重要的组成部分。其中
PS
往往对您的申请是否
成功起到很大
的作用。
笔者在为数百计的申请人进行留学文书的咨询
和写作过
程中发现,
由于中西方教育体制的差异和网上各种良莠不齐
的“
范文“的误导,许多申请人的
PS
写作理念非常混乱,本文结合
中国申请人文书写作的常见弊端,简述
PS
的写作要领。
PS
的长度
在欧美,
PS
归为
ESSAY(
漫谈
)
类,是一种短小精悍的文体。笔
者曾深入研究过
欧美出版的优秀
PS
文选,无不短小精悍,内容却非
常丰满,文笔优美。一般来说一篇
PS
的正常长度
为
600
—
800
英文
单词,
而相当多的中国申请人的
PS
超长。
笔者甚至见到某些人的
P
S
写到
3
千多字。
7
很多中国申请人试图把自己的方方面面的优点和成绩展示出来
,
须知
PS
不是简历的详细补充,
p>
许多信息可以通过其它文件展示
(
如学
p>
习成绩等
)
。美国大学的招生人员曾谈到:
在留学申请旺季时,面对
堆积如山的文件,一般他们审查一个
P
S
的时间只有
2
、
3
分钟,那
种长篇大论类的
PS<
/p>
只能让人心生厌烦。
PS
必须紧扣所要申请那个专业的主
题写,主线要明确,不要盲
目的个性化
许多人都一知半解地听说
PS
需要
“独特个性”
(unique)
,
和
“煽
情”
(Emotional),
因此挖空心思地找
自己的“独特“点和乱“煽情“,
结果往往南辕北辙,
许多中国
申请人往往用大段篇幅写一些不相干的
个性,
在招生者眼中,<
/p>
这完全不着边际
(make no sense)
。
必须明确,
PS
这样一篇短
短数百字的文章是没有地方去说不相干的废话的。通
过
PS
p>
您必须让招生者知道您选择该专业的明确和强烈的动机,同时
具备充
分的条件完成该专业的学习。
当然在这个基础上每个人都可以
通
过很独特而有个性的文字来表达自己。
如笔者曾经修改过一份申请
CS(
计算机专业
)
的
PS
,原文用了数百字描述他如何开展班级工作的
经
历。笔者将其改为:我喜欢思考,如何让事物运转得更有效率。在
大学期间我担任班级文
艺委员职务。
在工作初期,
成员经常因为性格、
8
工作方式各异产生矛盾。后来我根据每个人情况
,让性格外向,善于
与人交际的人做外联及工作将协调沟通的工作;
让善于思考、
思维活
跃、勇于创新的人做各项工作的筹备及
策划工作;让有远见、有凝聚
力的人做整个工作的进度安排、
及
分配各项任务。
这样安排的结果是
系统发挥了最佳效率。既突出
了个性,又紧扣申请
CS
专业应具有的
严谨的系统思维能力这一重要素质体现了出来。
结构简单,衔接紧密,
主线明确,便于理解
“
Simple is the b
est
”请记住,招生人员每天要读大量的申请
资料,
只有那种简单有力重点突出的的文章才能打动招生人员。
留学
文书其实是您个人的广告,
您仔细想想,
给您留下
深刻印象的广告哪
个不是简明而有力的?中国申请人往往倾向于把自己的优点不分主
p>
次全都告诉招生人员,
导致的结果就是招生人员对您的整体印象的模
糊。笔者认为,
PS
中什么都是重点,
就等于没有重点。
9
编者按:个人陈述,
(PERSONAL STATEMENT
,以下简称
PS)
是申请美国,加拿大
,英国等西方国家的大学
/
研究生录取时由申请
人写的关于自我的一篇
...
个人陈述,
(PERSONAL
ST
ATEMENT
,以下简称
PS)
是申
请美
国,加拿大,英国等西方国家的大学
/
研究生录取时由申请人写的关
于自我的一篇漫谈体文章。当然有的学校要求的文章题
目不一定叫
PERSONAL
STATEMENT
,如有的学校让你写出动机
(
Motivation
)兴趣,经历等。由于在中国的升学体制中,基
本上是唯分数论的,
因此中国的申请人对这类文件的写作和思维方式
不熟悉。而欧美大学录
取学生,发放奖学金,是通过全面综合考察申
请者的条件来决定的。
所谓留学文书,
如
PS
,
推荐信,
RP(Research
proposal),CV
等是一套文件系统,用以向录取院
校从各个角度展现
您的求学动机,学术学习能力,工作和研究经历,结合一系列更“客<
/p>
观”
,可量化的指标:如
GRE
,
TOEFL
,
p>
IELTS
,
GPA
等构成您的全
貌。留学文书在西方的文化背景下是申请入学(奖学金)的极为重要
p>
的组成部分。其中
PS
往往对您的申请是否
成功起到很大的作用。笔
者在为数百计的申请人进行留学文书的咨询和写作过程中发现,
由于
中西方教育体制的差异和网上各种良莠不齐的“范文“的误
导,许多
申请人的
PS
写作理念非常混
乱,本文结合中国申请人文书写作的常
见弊端,简述
PS
的写作要领。
10
PS
的长度
在欧美,
PS
归为
ESSAY
(漫谈)类,是一种短小精悍的文体。
笔者曾深
入研究过欧美出版的优秀
PS
文选,无不短小精悍,内容却
p>
非常丰满,文笔优美。一般来说一篇
PS
的
正常长度为
600--800
英
文单词
,而相当多的中国申请人的
PS
超长。笔者甚至见到某些人的<
/p>
PS
写到
3
千多
字。
很多中国申请人试图把自己的
方方面面的优点和成绩展示出来,
须知
PS
不是简历的详细补充,许多信息可以通过其它文件展示(如
学习成绩等)
。美国大学的招生人员曾谈到:在留学申请旺季时,面
对堆积如山的文件,
一般他们审查一个
PS
的时间只有
2<
/p>
、
3
分钟,
那种
长篇大论类的
PS
只能让人心生厌烦。
PS
必须紧扣所要申请那个专业的主
题写,
主线要明确,
不要盲
目的个性化
许多人都一知半解地听说
PS
需要
“独特个性”
(
unique
)
,
< br>和
“煽
情”
(
< br>Emotional
)
,
因此挖
空心思地找自己的“独特“点和乱“煽情
“,
结果往往南辕北辙
,
许多中国申请人往往用大段篇幅写一些不相
干的个性,在招生
者眼中,这完全不着边际(
make no sense
)
p>
。必
须明确,
PS
这样一篇短短数百字的文章是没有地方去说不相干的废
话的。通过
PS
您必须让招生者知道您选择该专业的明确和强烈的动
机,
同时具备充分的条件完成该专业的学习。
当然在这个基础上每个
人都可以通过很独特而有个性的文字来表达自己。
如笔者曾经修
改过
一份申请
CS
< br>(计算机专业)的
PS
,原文用了数百字描述他如何开<
/p>
11
展班级工作的经历。笔者将其改
为:我喜欢思考,如何让事物运转得
更有效率。在大学期间我担任班级文艺委员职务。在
工作初期,成员
经常因为性格、工作方式各异产生矛盾。后来我根据每个人情况,让
p>
性格外向,
善于与人交际的人做外联及工作将协调沟通的工作;
p>
让善
于思考、思维活跃、勇于创新的人做各项工作的筹备及策划工作
;让
有远见、有凝聚力的人做整个工作的进度安排、及分配各项任务。这
样安排的结果是系统发挥了最佳效率。既突出了个性,又紧扣申请
CS
专业应具有的严谨的系统思维能力这一重要素质体现了出来。
结构简单,衔接紧密,主线明确,便于理解
“
Simple is the b
est
”请记住,招生人员每天要读大量的申请
资料,
只有那种简单有力重点突出的的文章才能打动招生人员。
留学
文书其实是您个人的广告,
您仔细想想,
给您留下
深刻印象的广告哪
个不是简明而有力的?中国申请人往往倾向于把自己的优点不分主
p>
次全都告诉招生人员,
导致的结果就是招生人员对您的整体印象的模
糊。笔者认为,
PS
中什么都是重点,
就等于没有重点。
编者按:
Personal StatementI am
the applicant Wang Ming.
From September
2002 to July 2006, I studied the specialty of
Financial Manag...
Personal Statement
12
I am the
applicant Wang Ming. From September 2002 to
July 2006, I studied the specialty of
Financial Management at
Beijing
University
of
Chemical
Technology.
Through
undergraduate
studies,
I
contacted
such
disciplines
as
accounting, international finance,
securities investment and so
on;
however,
keenly
conscious
that
my
current
acquisition
is
far from enough for me to
meet the needs of the f...
范文。
Dear sir or madam,
As
the
Vice
Dean
of
School
of
International
Business,
Tianjin
ForeignStudiesUniversity
(TFSU),
I
am
writing
with
pleasure to recommend Wang Ye to
youresteemed university.
I
got to know her personally since 2007 as I was her
class
advisor.
And
I
taught
her
International
Economics.
In
my
course, she
showed her craving for knowledge. She often read
relative economic books to enrich
herself. And she also asked
me
to
recommend
some
text
books
and
materials
to
study.
When she had
confusion, she always tried her best to figure
out the question.
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Miss Wang is a
self-motivated student. For all I know, her
average score is over 85 and she won
scholarships every year
in
the
past
three
years.
Therefore,
she
was
selected
into
the
experimental
class
in
the
third
academic
year.
This
class
consists
of
the
best
students
of
Department
of
International
Economics
and
Trade,
Department
of
Economics
and
Department of Finance.
What
’
s more, she practiced
in a small
company
to
gain
experience
during
the
winter
and
summer
vacations.
I am
confident that she will be qualified and perform
as
well
as
she
did
in
TFSU.
Therefore,
I
recommend
her
with
enthusiasm.
I
hope
that
you
will
consider
her
application
favorably.
Please
don
’
t
hesitate
to
contact
me
if
you
need
more
information.
Yours
Sincerely
XXX
有几个小建议。
学生可能很难知道从哪里开始自己的个人陈述,或者如何不傲
慢的描述你的技能和经验,
但同时也能确保你在其他申请者中脱
颖而
出。出国留学网有些建议。
1.
写之前要计划
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在
你开始之前,简要概述一下你想在你的个人陈述中提出的观
点,并确保你回答了这些问题
;是什么,为什么,怎么做。你想学什
么?你为什么想学英语?你的技能和过去的经验如
何证明这一点?
要做到这一点,一
个好办法是拿出你认为与你所选学科相关的
几个关键技能,并举例说明你是如何使用这些
技能的。
2.
格式正确
正确的格式会让你的个人陈述看起来整洁而专业。把它分成几
个段落,包括引言和结论。
每一段都应该讨论一个不同的主题,
这样
你的个人陈述才能读起来清晰流畅。
比如:
段
1
:介绍
段
2
:教育
教学
段
3
:你为什么感兴趣,如何证明
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段
4
:兴趣爱好(包括相关工作经验)
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段
5
:结论
很重要的一点是,每一段都要很好地衔接到下一段。
3.
介绍清晰而直接
从一开始就抓住读者的注意力,用一个强有力的开头句突出你
的主要技能,并概述你为什么要申请这门课程。
你必须讲得具体,迅速切入要点。不要花时间为你的第一句话
想半天,也绝对不要使用“这是我从小就想做的事情”这样的陈词滥
调。这些东西不会给招生人员留下深刻印象,而且经常被滥用。
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很
多人觉得先写其他段落,然后再写引言和结论更容易。把引
言和结论联系起来会让你的个
人陈述更流畅。
4.
有例子(但要确保它们是相关的)
当然,如果你做了很多课外活动是很好的,但是记住要把它们
和
课程联系起来——如果它们不相关,就不要写进去。
你说的话后面可以跟一个:
“
so w
hat
?”在这个的后续,你可
以谈论你因此发展的技能,以及
你从这个经历中学到了什么。
把你
做过的每件事都塞进文章是很多人想做的,但是有选择性
的假例子会更有效。你可以在面
试中,或者当你申请未来的工作时,
谈论这些事情。它们迟早会派上用场,只是现在不行
!
5.
在“个人陈述”中加入“个人”
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使你的申请个性化,确保它听起来不是虚假的或通用的。是什
么让
你与众不同?要勇于打破常规,招生老师会阅读数百份个人陈
述,所以说一些稍微不同的
东西会让你的申请脱颖而出。
不要
引用别人的话——招生老师想听的是你要说的话,而不是
比尔·盖茨曾经说过的话。
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6.
如果你已经做了你的研究——说出来
这听起来一点也不谦虚,但是在写个人陈述的时候,重要的是
要
表现出你对这个主题的热情。
如果你读过任何相关的书,
简要地
谈
谈你从他们那里学到了什么,
以及他们为什么培养了你对这个
主题的
兴趣。
如果你花时间阅读了这门课程,
< br>它会向你的招生导师表明你对
知识扩展的渴望。
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但
你没有必要谈论你读过的所有可能有点相关的东西。选择性
是关键。
7.
结论要简短,但内容要丰富
结论是你给招生导师留下印象的最后机会。用它来总结和探索
你之前提
到的主题,
并将它们应用到更广泛的环境中。
确定你的个人
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陈述的主要信息是什么,并在结论中重申这一点。
如前所述,将你的结论与你的引言段连接起来。回顾你在第一
段所说的内容,并展示你是如何在你的个人陈述中体现出来的。
记住——结论不需要太长——一两句话就可以了。
8.
完成后再校对
必须强调这一点。核查你的个人陈述,然后把它发送给朋友或
家人检查。
一般人很容易漏掉自己工作中的错误,
所以最好在寄出之
< br>前让别人通读一遍。
个人陈
述中最差的就是拼写错误。在阅读你的个人陈述时,这
一点会一直留在读者的脑海中。<
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范文。
STATEMENT OF PURPOSE
’
For
Knowledge
Itself
Is
Power
’
.
This
is
one
of
my
favorite
precepts and at this point in my life when I am
about
to complete my graduation and my
future spreads in front of
me like a
dream
,
this adage
has never influenced my life more
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than this before.
Knowledge and proper
training are essential to succeed
in
today
'
s highly competitive
world. The best place where I
can
achieve
this
is
in
the
United
States
of
America
-
the
undisputed
leader in developing new products and processes.
Not
only
is
America
the
birthplace
of
my
chosen
field
of
study
,
it
has
also
nurtured
it
for
it
'
s
full
growth
and
continuous
development.
To
achieve
my
goals
,
I
want
to
pursue a Master
'
s
program in Computer Science. It is the ideal
way for me to gain the knowledge and
skills to stand tall as a
computer
professional.
During
my
undergraduate
studies
,
I
acquired
a
comprehensive
knowledge
of
computer
hardware
in
all
its
complexity.
I
also
learnt
of
diverse
software
and
their
applications. The highly dedicated
teaching staff of my college
taught
me
the
various
concepts
involved
in
the
field
of
computer
engineering.
Some
of
the
subjects
I
studied
were
computer
graphics
,
computer methodology and
algorithms
,
logic
circuits
,
principles of communication
engineering
,
C
programming
,
object
oriented
programming
as
well
as
programming using different tools.
I
take
a
keen
interest
in
Networking
and
Database
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Management Systems. As a part of my
final year curriculum
,
I
am
working
on
a
project
with
one
of
the
India
'
s
finest
web-site designing
companies - MicroGiga Info. Sys. Ltd. The
aim
of
the
project
is
to
create
a
web-
site.
The
web-
site
,
called
"
Jobs4All
",
aims
to
provide
the
user
with
a
job
depending
upon
his
qualifications.
Various
database
concepts
'
,
programming
scripts
and
the
maintenance
of
a
server are some of the features
included in our web-site. Some
of the
products and tools used are ASP
scripts
,
Java
scripts
,
Microsoft Access
'
97
,
Personal Web
Server
,
etc. I am
also
interested
in
System
Programming.
For
this
very
reason
,
I
have
selected
Compiler
Construction
as
the
elective
subject
for my final year.
There is truly no end to
learning
,
as this
has become a
world
where
a
constant
addition
to
abilities
is
the
key
to
growth
in
a
dynamic
world.
I
am
fortunate
to
belong
to
a
family that places a high value of
education. I have been given
all the
encouragement and facility to develop my talents
and
interests. I have completed several
courses in public speaking
and
leadership training. Sports
,
music and reading also fill my
life. I was also one of the
organizer
'
s for the Open
Software
competition in TECHNOMANIA
'
98
,
which is an inter-college
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festival
annually
,
organized annually by my college. I am
also
an active participant in various
events held in other institutes.
I
seek
to
fulfill
my
goals
in
an
environment
that
encourages creativity
and motivation. I feel confident that the
staff and facilities in your institute
will provide me with such an
environment. I am well aware of the
demands of studying in
the more
competitive American environment. I am certain
that
I
am
mentally
and
physically
competent
to
succeed
at
your
school. I am basically
a hard working and a sincere person. My
enthusiasm and urge to excel will help
me to make the best
use of every
learning opportunity.
In
conclusion
I
would
like
to
say
that
the
knowledge
gained
from
4
years
of
engineering
has
provided
me
with
a
solid
foundation.
This
will
certainly
help
me
in
my
desire
to
specialize in my chosen field. My
country India has a thriving
software
industry. I aim to study abroad and return with
the
skill and competence to find my
mark and be a vital part of
this
booming
,
futuristic industry. I assure you of my
sincerity
,
dedication and hard work.
详细介绍一下如何写一篇好的个人陈述。
前言:除了学术能力之外,你还必须展示你与其他学生的不同
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