prize-西塞
准留学生们在动手写
个人陈述
(
Personal Statement
)
的时候往往
摸不着头脑,
不知
如何下手,
其实留学
个人陈述只要在写之前理清思路和重点,
就能下笔如有神助哦。
专门提
供留学资讯的
Hotcourses
中国小编就以一篇留学个人陈述范文为例,为大家解析一下留学
个人陈述模板的框架
和语言风格。
留学个人陈述模板的开头部分
留学个
人陈述在开头需要直奔主题,
因为外国老师不喜欢绕来绕去的措辞,
最好在开始就表
现出积极的态度,
以及表明自己为什么想要
学这个专业,
同时也不要忘记了阐述自己的独特
之处。当然,因
为这个是开始,所以要以简单明了为主。
以下就是英文的模板例文:
I
graduated from xxx university with a degree in xxx
(subject). I would like to apply xxx
at
youruniversity. With my great passion in the area,
I hope to become an expert in xxxx
industry. Iunderstand that xxxx university is
famous for xxxx, it has established a great
r
eputation in thexxx industry with lots
of graduates from becoming leaders in the field. I
want to become one ofthem, and
therefore, I am very interested and keen to be
involve
d in your
university…
译文:
p>
我是某某大学某某专业毕业的学生,
想申请贵校的某某专业。
我对某某专业很感兴趣,
希望将来能成为这个行业的专家。我知道贵校
的这个专业十分出名,在业界有很高的声誉,
也培养了很多此行业的精英。
我想成为此行列中的一员,
所以我很想成为贵校的一份子,
< br>在
该专业领域深造。
分析:这
个开头的语言简练,并以第一人称为主,能让招生老师一目了然。留学生们切记,
开头段
不要写太长太复杂的句子,因为长难句不仅会显得啰嗦,还会让人失去阅读兴趣。
留学个人陈述模板的主体部分
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/p>
需要开始阐述留学生的学术背景,
如果有工作经验的话,
需要描述一下工作背景如何和此专
业相关
英文模板例文如下:
My
preparation for your programme has been expansive
and thorough. First, I have a
sol
idbackground in xxx and xxx. Second,
during my undergraduate years, I joined a club
cal
led xxxwith the focus on xxx. Our
projects dealt with xxx, and other xxx. My work
outsid
e the campus,in job placements
through xxx university, granted me excellent
opportuniti
es for real-worldexperience.
While exploring the possibility of
graduate-level work, I discovered that my
interests are
perfectlymatched with
your programme. My interest in xxx, especially,
was piqued during
my xxx aspects of
the xxx fascinated me and made me long to
supervise a lar
ge project in this
fieldone day. Although I realise my current
limitations, my whole-hearte
d
enthusiasm, combined withguidance from your
exceptional faculty, will carry me
throug
h the rigors of studying and
forge meinto an expert xxx after the one/two year
master co