四级作文评分标准及几篇范文

四级作文评分标准及几篇范文

Composition 1
Digital TV
Television has already presented a vivid
world in front of the people. And now, with the
development of modern sciences, a new type of
TV—digital TV has taken the place of
traditional TV. It not only plays the role of the
old-fashioned color TV, but also challenges the
old ways of TV station broadcasting programs
and the viewers receiving.
For example, one ex-change digital TV has
one part of the screen which can show a menu,
like news, TV program schedule, net work etc,
while people can watch the ordinary TV
programs at the same time.
Digital TV can also play roles of
program-picking-up, advertisement-choosing,
game exchange play, internet on line,
shopping-on-TV, electric- commercial TV,
remote TV education program, remote TV
medical care, long distance working office, TV
banking system, visual telephone, and

TV-conference, etc.
Although digital TV will be very popular in
the near future, and people will benefit a lot
from it, it will also be very beneficial to the TV
producers. The TV buyers will pay more and
spend more time in front of the new toy. Also
some people would commit some new kinds of
TV crimes on them. The solution is to restrict
the dark side and broaden the bright side of the
modern digital TV.
Composition 2
CET-4作文评
分样卷
题目：My Ideal
Job
样卷1 2分
——条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部
分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。
. There are all kinds of job on world. So
people have different ideal to job. The teacher
told me that should have a ideal job when I’m a
child. So I choice my ideal job in all kinds of job.

My ideal job is become a economicer.
Because everyone have itself think. So their ideal
job is different. I choice the job because it fit to
me. This job have more money. This is real. But,
it useless to our country important. Our country
is a developing country, need economicer very
much. So, I choice this job.
My ideal job is become a economicer, so I
musty learn economic knowledge work hard.
Learn knowledge from teacher in the class.
Learn knowledge from myself after class. Look
at book about economic. Ready for my ideal job.
use my knowledy about economic in practis.
Become a real useless men.


样卷2 5分
——基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性较差。
有较多的严重语言错误。
There are a lot of job, such as teacher,
work, doctor, nurse, driver and so on. People’s
ideal job are difficutly. Some want to be a

teacher, teach a lot of students, some want to be
a bus-driver, help other people go the place
where they intend to go, …
What is my ideal job? Sometimes I ask
myself the question. I like my teacchers very
much. So I think, My ideal job is teacher. I teach
my knowlage to my student, they can be a useful
people.
I think, I will teach my student the books
and many other knowlage. So, now, I am
studying hard and studying other knowlage.


样卷3 8分
——基本切 题，有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文
字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严
重错误。
Every people when he grows up, will have
a job. People have various aims. Some people
want to earn a lot of money. Some people want
to be famous … So people have various ideal
jobs: manager, doctor, actor, teacher and so on.

I don’t want to earn a lot of and to be
famous. I hope I can enjoy my job. My ideal job
is teacher. If I were a teacher, I would always
young. Because I will be able to often stay with
youth.
Now I must study hard, and I ought to
learn a lot from my teachers besides knowledge.
I should learn their virtue. Thus, I will be a good
teacher.




样卷4 11分
——切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯。但有少量
语言错误。
Each person has his or her own ideal job.
For instance, men might want to be sailors,
sportsmen, scientists, businessmen, etc.
Meanwhile, many young girls would like to be
nurses, film stars, teachers, etc.
To be frank, my ideal job is business, that

is, I want to be a businesswoman. This job
belongs to men for many centuries. Although
there are more women in this field than ever
before, men are still the majority. Therefore I
want to be good example for women.
Now my specialization is Industry and
Foreign Trade. I’m sure it can give me great
help and good preparation for my future job.
What’s more, I have joined the student centre to
get some experiences about selling thing, which
may be useful. On the other hand I know that
my English still left much to be improved, and I
must and will study harder.
样卷5 14分
——切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较
好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错误。
When we are asked about what we want to
be in the future, we have different answers. We
may want to be a doctor, a lawyer, a politician, a
scientist or a worker and so on.
My ideal job is to be an excellent teacher.
This idea came into being when I was very

young. No one is born with knowledge. If I am a
teacher, I will be able to turn an ignorant man
into a learned person. I will teach what I know
to my students. Sometimes I will be able to learn
something from them because students are
always active and creative. So life will be
interesting and meaningful.
But I know it isn’t easy for me to be a
good teacher. Being a teacher needs knowledge,
patience, skills etc. First, I must study very hard
so that I will be able to answer most of my
students’ questions. Second I must learn to be
patient. I shall tolerate students’ slowness in
accepting now knowledge. I shall not be rude to
them. Third, I shall have good skills. It doesn’t
follow that a teacher with great knowledge can
make himself understood quickly and clearly.
Perhaps students may still be puzzled because
they don’t understand what he says at all!
So, you see, different jobs require different
talents. I will live up to the name of a teacher.

Making Friends
Friends are very important in our daily life.
For one thing, friends play an important role in
one’s character training. By making friends, one
learns how to love, care and help other. While
those who grow up without friends tend to be
lonely and selfish and they are anything but
easygoing. For another, when in trouble, one can
turn to his friends for help or advice.
A true friend should be loyal. Whoever can
share with us the joys and sorrows of life is our
true friend. That is to say, he is proud of us
when we are successful (wealthy), and when we
are in need (poor) he is still ready to support us
without betraying us or deserting us. Just as the
saying goes, a friend in need is a friend indeed.
Then, how to make friends? The following is
my personal opinion: above all, we should
choose good people to make friends with
because making bad friends is worse than
having no friends, but that does not necessarily
mean our friends are perfect. Secondly, the only

way to have a friend is to be one. In other words,
we should be honest, considerate and
understanding, and treat our friends the way we
want to be treated.
6 On Paying University
Tuition
Although it has been argued that the
university tuition will add up to the already
heavy burden of the parents, it is essential that
university students in China pay their own
tuition.
Since China is a developing country with the
largest population in the world, it is impossible
for the government to allocate enough funds to
support the development of higher education. To
charge for tuition will partly solve the problem.
The money raised could be used to accelerate
the academic researches and to improve the
housing condition on the part of both teachers
and students.
On the other hand, with tuition being
collected, Chinese universities will gradually

establish a sound system of scholarships,
fellowships and loans, which will encourage
students to work harder in their chosen career
and help those poor but talented students finish
their undergraduate studies.
7 My Attitude toward Keeping
Pet Dogs
In the past few years, the number of pet
dogs has increased so rapidly in China that it
has exceeded 100 million. Pet dogs might be
good companions to some, while to the others,
they are nightmares. It seems to me that the
disadvantages of keeping dogs outweigh the
advantages.
First, keeping pets is just a waste of time
and resources. When you are tired of a day’s
work, you will have to take care of your dogs to
keep them clean. In addition, pet dogs consume
a lot of grain products each year.
Second, the growing number of pet dogs
has caused serious hygiene problem, which adds
to the environmental pollution in the cities.

Third, pet dogs in public places may
frighten other people; besides, a pet dog bite
may lead to hydrophobia, a deadly disease.
In a word, keeping pet dogs should be
forbidden or at least restricted in China.
8 Self-respect and
Respectability Are Not to Be Confused
Self-respect and respectability are not to be
confused. To have Self-respect means to like
yourself, to be comfortable about your values
and the way you practice them in your life. It is
entirely an inner judgment you make of yourself,
which no one else can make of you.
Respectability, on the other hand, is a judgment
others make of you. The person with
respectability is one who, in the eyes of the
others, adheres to conventional and accepted
values. For example, a teacher with a sense of
duty, responsibility and gentle dignity is often
looked up to by his students and the woman
with respectability may be regarded as a good
mother, a faithful wife of a conscientious career

woman. Of the two judgments, self-respect is
psychologically healthier and of utmost
importance. Only when one shows self-respect
can he be honored by the others.

Social Activities
1. 社会活动对我们大有裨益。2. 但过多则有负
面影响。3. 因此, 明智的做法是…
Social Activities
Social activities benefit us in many ways.
To begin with these activities can widen our
knowledge, because we can learn what we
cannot learn from books. Second, these activities
can serve as a bridge between theory and
practice, because we can learn now to put our
book (theoretical) knowledge into practice.
Lastly, these activities can enrich our experience,
in that we can get to know the society so well
that we can adapt to it easily when we graduate.
Too many social activities, on the other hand,
will cause many problems. Study is the most
important task in our daily life and social

activities can only, and should always be a
supplement. If we include in these activities, we
will never be able to learn knowledge well.
Consequently, we won’t be well-qualified
students.
Therefore, it is suggested that we students
spend most of our time and energy studying,
and once in a while participate in some social
activities. Only in this way can social activities
benefit us a lot.
12 Health
As the proverb says: “No one knows the
value of health until he loses it.” In other words,
nothing is more valuable than health. It is clear
that health is the foundation of one’s future
success. If you become sick, it is nearly
impossible to pursue your career effectively,
much less make your dreams come true. On the
other hand, if you are stout and strong, you can
go all out to overcome the obstacles that lie
ahead of you.
Now that we know that health is the

resource of our energy, what should we do to
maintain and enhance our health? First, we
should exercise every day to strengthen our
muscles. Second, we might as well keep good
hours. If we get up early, we can breathe fresh
air and see the sunrise. This habit can do
wonders for our outlook on life. Third, there is a
proverb that says: “ Prevention is better than
cure.” If we pay close attention to our health, we
can avoid getting sick, or at least cure ourselves
of a disease while it is still in its early stage.
In conclusion, health is more important
than wealth. Those who are rich but lose their
health are no more fortunate than those who are
poor. If you want your wish to come true, health
is the most important part of your success.
13 Prospects of Private
Cars in China
At present private cars in China are far less
popular than those in developed countries. As
China is still a developing country, most people’s
income is not high enough to afford a car. Only

a small number of movie stars, famous singers,
rich managers and businessmen can enjoy such
a luxury. Besides, in densely populated cities,
people can hardly find any parking space even if
they could afford to buy cars.
But with the rapid development of our
economy, people’s income has been steadily
increasing. It is quite possible that in a few years
city dwellers with a higher income will be able to
buy cars on their own. Then, they will not be
satisfied with their small apartments in crowded
cities. They will prefer to live in big houses in
open suburbs though they may still work in the
city. As a result, more and more bicycle users
may become owners of private cars in the near
future!
This will give rise to a series of problems. For
instance, the streets will be jammed with cars
and traffic accidents may increase accordingly.
In addition, more cars will make greater noise
and send off more poisonous gases into the air.
That will do a lot of harm to people’s health. To

avoid such consequences, effective measures
should be taken in advance. On the one hand,
old narrow highways should be broadened and
now broad ones should be built; on the other,
the number of cars imported or produced
should be controlled; and if possible, new cars
which do not produce any pollution should be
developed.