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The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields

is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.

范文：

It is universally acknowledged that a well-developed sense of competition can contribute much to success in

different areas such as government, sports and industry. Changing conditions, however, are creating the

atmosphere wherein cooperation, not competition, is the quality most useful for success. As a result the best way

for a society to prepare its young to lead in the world is by instilling them not only with a sense of competition, but

also a sense of cooperation.

The spirit of competition is a driving force in individuals. The competitive impulse fosters the desire for

dominance. However, the world we live in doesn’t offer the same zero

-sum game that it used to. For this reason,

governments should take a more proactive role in creating an atmosphere of competition and cooperation. In this

environment can the leaders of tomorrow learn the skills they will be required to employ when working in a fully

globalized world. This can be illustrated by the transformation of Chinese market policy. Decades ago, the planned

economy policy was praised by Chinese leaders. This policy in which government played a key role to run entire

business of nation is featured as absolute equality and eliminates any chance for competition. Unfortunately, these

government-run businesses were ineffective due to lack of competition. In the end, the result was low productive

capability. Realizing the disadvantages of such policy and desiring to reverse the straggling situation in China and

catch up with developed countries, leaders have decided to transform the old economic system. Individuals and

companies alike, for sake of survival in competition, must continue to improve their services and products, and

consequently, the entire society prospers, at least economically. Owing to the vitality of competitiveness, China

can experience the prosperity than ever before.

In today’s world, competition requires more and more cooperation. Competition is not always a good thing to

have, especially when it makes one party the winner and one party the loser. Through cooperation with others, all

participants can benefit. In business, teamwork can naturally produce an overall greater productivity through

synergy. The task of a good business leader is to set a common goal and corresponding rewards by which his

teammates are motivated to interact with their colleagues towards collective efforts. Zhang ReiMing- CEO of

Glanze and a very famous entrepreneur in China states that there is no special knack for success. What I have done

is just to make my employees feel better about themselves and let every single person in the company understand

the essence of the business. After that, I create an environment in which they respect and cooperate with others to

meet objectives. As we can see in this example, it is cooperation, not completion that makes success.

A sense of competition and cooperation are not mutually independent. Actually, as an excellent competitor,

not only can one compete with others who exceed him in some aspects but also he should breed the spirit of

cooperation and develop, in others, a willingness to nurture weaknesses. It is the increasingly fierce competition in

society that acts as the catalyst promoting a desire to cooperate.