最新中考英语书面表达难题及答案(word)1

一栏用

2―3

句话展开 合理想象。作适当发挥。

3.

词数在

90

个左右，文章的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。

Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.

【答案】

Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high

praise since they appeared.

Shared bikes have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it's easy for

us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can

help reduce pollution. What's more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.

But there are some problems too. Some people can't return shared bikes in time. Sometimes

shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.

I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, it's a way of

living a green life.

【解析】这篇作文要求我们给《

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世纪英文报》投稿 ，谈一谈自己对共享单车的看法。题

目中利用表格的形式给我们列举了短文的主要内容， 包括：共享单车的优势；存在的问题

以及你自己对这件事情的看法。前两个内容我们需要 根据表格的提示用正确的英语表达，

而自己的观点则需要学生们自己发挥想象力，组织语 言，并表达出来，要求至少两点。通

过审题可知，这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时态，第 三人称来叙述，短文可以分成两段或

者三段，一个内容一段或前两个内容合到一段。写作 时，应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不

同，不能逐词翻译，而应从句子的整体考虑，简单句 、并列句和复合句交叉使用，改变文

章句式节奏，使用不同的句式，避免单调。语句之间 注意使用恰当的连接成分，使整篇文

章意思连贯、表达流畅。

点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目要求的所有信息。短文分成

了四段，第一段引出话题共享单车；第二段讲述了共享单车的一些优点；第三段介绍了一

些问题；最后一段作者提出了自己的看法。分段叙述使文章的结构清晰，主题明确，有层

次性。其次短文中使用了恰当的时态和人称，文章以第三人称、一般现在时态为主，语法

规范，用词准确，句式富于变化。例如

They can be seen everywhere so that it's easy for us to

get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help

reduce pollution. What's more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.

这几个长

句； 另外文章中还使用了恰当的连接成分，如

Al

so, What’s more, But, sometimes, After all

等

等。正确文章行文连贯、语句通顺、表达流畅。

4

．

自信赋 予人力量，带给人快乐。拥有自信，人生处处是舞台，生活越来越精彩。

假如你是李华，请你为校刊英语园地

“

自信助我成长

”

专栏写一篇短文，谈谈自信的重要

性 ，分享一次使你更加自信的经历，并说说我们如何更加自信。

提示词语：

powerful

，

hap py

，

believe in

，

keep doing

提示问题：

Why is it important to be confident?

What experience made you more confident?

How can we become more confident?

It's very important to be confident

【答案】

It’s very important to be confident. Self

-confidence can bring us courage to stick to

what we do. So it’s valuable to us.

When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced

it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I

breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I re

called the

speech and finished it teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much

encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have become more and more confident.

To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop

them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can

finally make it and gain more confidence.

【解析】

本文内容应包含表格中所提供的所有信息。灵活运用各种句式，采用不同的表达方式将各

个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确，简洁。最后必须认真

查验是否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

点睛：这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如

at the beginning of

；

know about

；

make a speech

等；

When

；

Although

；

Then

；

From then on,

等的运 用，使文

章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范 文。

5

．

环境保护人人有责，

如果我们每一个人都能珍爱美丽地球

保护自然资源，相信我们的

家园会越来越美好。

某英文网站正在开展以

“Going Green”

短文投稿，谈谈我们面 临的主要环境问题是什么，为改善环境我们能做什么，以及你的期

望。

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提示词语：

pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action

提示问题：

● What are the main environmental problems we have?● What can we do in our

daily life? ● What’s your wish?

Now there are many environmental

problems.________________ __________________________________________________ _____

__________________________________ _____________________________________________

____ __________________________________________________ _________________________

______________ __________________________________________________ _______________

________________________ __________________________________________________ _____

__________________________________ _____________________________________________

____ __________________________________________________ ______

【答案】例文

Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.

I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to

school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth,

and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into

different bins.

I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can

make a big difference. Let’s work together to make a better place to live.

【解析】

【详解】

题干解读：该题目属于说明 文写作，写作时要把我们面临的主要环境问题是什么，为改善

环境我们能做什么，以及你 的期望全部包括。