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(
二
)
描写的种类
回目录
1.
人物描写
(1)
人物外貌描写
(2)
语言行动描写
(3)
心理活动描写
2.
景物描写
(1)
动态描写
(2)
静态描写
3.
场面描写
Sample 1
Directions: For this part, you are
allowed thirty minutes to write a composition of
no less than 150
words on My English
Teacher. Remember to write clearly.
My
English Teacher
My English teacher is a
woman of medium-height. She is in her thirties.
She always has a smile on
her
face
and
a
kind
word
for
her
students.
As
she
is
also
a
little
plump,
she
gives
people
the
impression that she is a
patient, responsible and easygoing teacher.
This picture of my teacher is true. She
devotes herself to the cause of education. She
prepares and
organizes her lessons so
well that we are fully attentive in her class.
After class she often gives
lessons to
the students who have been absent from school
because of illness. With her help we
have become more and more interested in
our English study. Whenever we have problems we
will
turn
to
her
for
help.
As
a
matter
of
fact,
she
is
more
an
intimate
friend
to
us
than
a
respected
teacher.
We have learnt a
great deal from her devotion to her work, her
conscientiousness in teaching, and
her
readiness to help others.
Sample 2
Directions: For this part, you are
allowed thirty minutes to write a composition of
no less than 150
words on The Spring
Festival. Remember to write clearly.
The Spring Festival
The
Spring Festival is the Chinese Lunar New Year.
It
’
s the most important
holiday in China.
People usually
celebrate and spend the Spring Festival together
with their parents and children at
home.
With the New Year
round the corner, every family is busy getting
ready for it. All the housewives
at
this
time
would
give
their
house
an
extra
cleaning,
make
al
the
things
clean,
tidy
and
keep
everything in its right place.
On New
Year
’
s Eve,
every
family
makes
dumplings
and
cook
many
delicious
dishes.
All
the
members
of the family gather together and have a family
dinner. After the big meal, they watch
TV to enjoy the programs specially
prepared for the Festival. The children let off
fireworks, men
play Mahjong and cards.
They stay up very late. Just a t midnight, when
the clock strikes twelve,
they let off
various firecrackers outdoors to see the Old Year
off and the New Year in.
评析：
本文采用三段式的行文形式，
首段介绍春节是中国农历新年。<
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随后分别描写节前人们怎样为
欢度新春做准备，
< br>并详细描述除夕晚上人们以何种方式庆贺新年的到来。
这样的构思结构显
得自然流畅。
Sample 3
Directions: For
this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write
a composition of no less than 150
words
on Sunset. Remember to write clearly.
Sunset
Recently I was in a
changeable mood. Many troubles were caused by my
own random thoughts.
How I longed to
have a light heart and be in a serene mood.
After school on my way to
the dormitory, I saw the sun hanging low above the
horizon. The sky
was alive with long
streaks of red and gold. The sun, at the end of a
day
’
s journey, makes the
clouds look like the Garden of Eden.
Charmed by the scene, I stood still on the path,
conscious
neither of time, nor space,
nor people who passed by. A feeling of happiness
and admiration came
over me. I was lost
in the beauty of nature.
It seemed a
magic world, a world of colors
–
red, orange,
yellow, green and blue. They shone,
flashed and changed. Gradually
everything was veiled by the purple fog.
I came to the lawn and saw the magic
red ball flooding and dying the grass with a rosy
color. By
and
by
the
golden
sunlight
faded
and
fainted.
The
rose
tint
vanished
and
the
day
cooled.
The
sunlight was no more. Dusk gathered
thicker and thicker.
In my vision is an
empty space of fields, so smooth and vast in the
distance. The sunset is not as
exciting
as sunrise, not so hot and warm at dusk as at
noon. Yet, it is so quiet and serene. It can put
up with everything. You know, even the
word
“
beautiful
”<
/p>
is not enough to describe
it.
Now I am at peace and in a happy
mood. I love sunset.
Sample 4
Directions: For this part, you are
allowed thirty minutes to write a composition of
no less than 150
words on Autumn.
Remember to write clearly.
Autumn
It is autumn. The sky is clear and
cloudless. The summer heat is gone. The autumn
wind brings up
cool. At once the
version comes to my mind,
“
Autumn is rich with fruit
and grain.
”
Actually I
see pomegranates
red and round on the stall in the market and the
pears big, yellow and juicy. My
mouth
waters for them. The grains have been harvested,
the rice, wheat and corn.
The laurel trees give off fragrance.
The perfume makes its way straight into my nose.
The bright
red cannas are standing
behind rows of tall plane trees. I am waiting for
their leaves to turn yellow.
Then I can
trample on the fallen leaves on both sides of the
ground.
At times the autumn
rain keeps falling silently on the trees ad
flowers and the ground. It washes
everything clean. When the sun comes
out, the droplets shine bright on the yellow
leaves.
What a beautiful
painting! Autumn is the season for harvest; no
pains, no gains. I must study hard
so
that I can have a big harvest in all my subjects.
Sample 5
Directions: For
this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write
a composition of no less than 150
words
on Country Life in Summer. Remember to write
clearly.
Country Life in Summer
The summer days I recently spent with
my cousins at my uncle
’
s in
the country filled me with
happy
memories. I
’
ll never forget
the country life we enjoyed there.
We
usually got up at dawn and took a walk along the
beautiful meadows of wild flowers. The air
was so balmy and fresh, and the scenery
so charming that it makes one think of city life
with scorn
and contempt. The pretty
birds had just risen from their sleep and were
hopping from branch to