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GUIDED WRITING
【考例再现】
请从下列人物中选择你最喜欢的一位，用英语写一篇
120
词左右的短文。要
求根据所给信息作适当
发挥，且需包括以下三部分内容：
1.
对该人物的简单介绍；
2.
喜欢该人物的理由；
3.
从该人物身上得到的启示。
Thomas Edison
inventor;
creative;
diligent;
full of wisdom
Helen Keller
William Shakespeare
ordinary but great woman;
writer; talented; imaginative;
disabled; optimistic; eager
man of all ages
to learn
“
Genius
is
one
percent
“
... if I had the power of
“
Life is a stage
...”
inspiration
ninety-nine
perspiration.
”
【范文展示】
Thomas Edison
Born in America, Thomas Edison was a
great scientist and inventor. He was once
and
sight for three
days.”
percent
thought
to
be
a
boy
who
was
not
worth
educating.
In
fact,
he
was
a
man
full
of
imagination.
I admire Edison a lot
because of his great contribution to the world. He
had more
than
1,000
inventions.
In
his
lifetime,
he
was
always
eager
to
know
how
things
worked, which helped
him to earn the nickname “the Wizard of Melo
Park”. He was
also so diligent that he
worked day and night. And this explained why he
had so many
inventions.
What impresses me most is
his famous saying,
“
Genius
is one percent inspiration
and ninety-
nine
percent
perspiration.
”
Probably
I
cannot be an Edison myself, but I can
be a hardworking learner. From him, I realize
the secret to success is not when and
where you were born, but what you are doing
and how you do it in your life.
（湖南
2008
）
【范文赏析】
●文体分析
本文的体裁是叙人记叙文或人物描写文。作者通过生动的语言，形象地描绘
出了伟大的
发明家
Thomas
Edison
的高大形象。
●行文模式
作者采用了“三段式”结构进行描写：
一、创造良好的开端：
第一段是开头，作者对本文中心人物
Thomas Edison
作了简单介绍。
二、客观真实的叙述：
第二段是文章
的主体部分，
重点叙述了
Thomas Edison
的工作态度以及他所取得
的成就。其中第一句
I
admire Edison a lot because of his great
contribution to the
world
是主题
句，其余的细节描写都是围绕这一主题展开的。
三、丰富感情的发挥：
第三段是结尾部分，作者对
Thomas
Edison
进行了高度评价。通过引用
Thomas <
/p>
Edison
的名言把文章推向了高潮。
最后一句谈了自己的感受，
起到了画龙点睛的
作用。
●佳句集锦
1.
In his lifetime, he was always eager to know how
things worked, which helped him
to earn
the nickname
“
the Wizard of
Melo Park
”
.
(
本句使用了固定短语
be eager to
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