【秦潇新奇英语】英语写作话题一 人物介绍

话题一

人物介绍

写作前奏曲

【话题分析】

同学们，你学会介绍人物了吗？我们主要介绍以下几个方面：

名字

,

性别，

年龄，班级学校，国籍，电话号码，家庭成员，生日，长相特点

,

工作特点等。

【词汇集锦】

【句型展示】

first name is Gina, her last name is Smith.

’

s his telephone number ? It

’

s 666-9897.

birthday is on July 8

th

.

is an English teacher from America .

is 13 years old .

is of medium height with short black hair .

studies in Class One , Grade Seven .

【遣词造句】

I.

按要求完成句子：

is Eric . (

同义句

)

_______ ______ is Eric .

first name is Jenny . (

对划线部分进行提问

)______ her ______ _______ ?

is 13 years old . (

同义句

)

He is a _______ boy .

is not heavy, and she is not thin, either . (

同义句

)

She is _____ _______ ________ .

a photo of my family . (

同义句

)

This is my ______ _______ .

are my uncle

’

s daughter and son . (

同义句

)

They

’

re my _______ .

is an American boy . (

同义句

)

He ______ ________ ________ .

II

．

根

据汉语完成句子：

1.

她家有四口人。

______ _______ _______ ________ in his family .

2.

他教我们数学。

He ______ _______ math .

3.

他的生日在九月三日。

His _______ is _______ ________ ________ .

1

4.

她留着长长的卷发。

She has ______ _______ _______ .

5.

他姓什么？

______ his ______ _______ ?

6.

你的工作是什么？

①

______ your ______ ?

②

______ ______ you ______ ?

③

_______ are you ?

写作交响乐

【典型例题】

假如你有一位姐姐

Lucy,

她美丽 又善良，

介绍给大家认识吧！

请根据下面的提示，

以

My sister

为题写一篇短文。

要求：

1.

对所给的要点逐一陈述，可适当发挥；

2.

词数

80

左右。书写工整规范。

Appearance

Personality

Future plan

smiling eyes, short hair, taller and slimmer than me

kind, helpful, give seats to the old on the buses, be good at singing

a singer, grow up

【审题指导】

1.

< br>根据题目可知，是对姐姐的介绍，用第三人称

she

。< /p>

2.

介绍人物的各种情况通常用一般现 在时态，

谈论理想和将来的一些打算也可以适当用一般

将来时态 。

【思路点拨】

< br>根据提示判断，本文对姐姐的三个情况进行介绍：外貌、性格品质和将来的计划。

【图解作文】

【名师点评】

My sister

This is my sister, Lucy. She like

①

music

and sports very much.

My sister is very lovely. She has smiling

eyes and she always has smile

②

. She has a

round face and short hair. She is taller and

slimmer than me. She is kind and helpful. She

often gives seats to the old on the buses. She is

good at sing

③

and she is a member of the

2

优点：

从整体来讲，这篇习作结构合 理，

语句通顺，

分三个方面介绍了我的姐姐

的情况。

缺点：

文章还存在着一些不当之处：

①处< /p>

like

应该使用第三人称单数形式

li kes

。

②处缺少了不定冠词

a:

have

a

smile

是固

Music Club in our school. Every morning, she

does morning exercises.

She would like being

④

a singer when she

grows up. I believe she will be one of the most

popular singers in China. How kind my sister

is! I love her very much.

定短语“微笑着”

。

③处动词

sing

应该使用

i ng

形式。

④处动词使用错了，

应该是不定式

to be

。

【范文诵读】

My sister

This is my sister, Lucy. She likes music and sports very much.

My sister is very lovely. She has smiling eyes and she always has a smile. She has a round

face and short hair. She is taller and slimmer than me. She is kind and helpful. She often gives

seats to the old on the buses. She is good at singing and is a member of the Music Club in our

school. Every morning, she does morning exercises.

She would like to be a singer when she grows up. I believe she will be one of the most

popular singers in China. How kind my sister is! I love her very much.

【好句妙解】

形容词和副词比较等级的用法歌谣

词类比拼定输赢，

三级跳远谁最行？

形副两类列两旁，

词尾

erest

来换装；

两者 比较

er

装，

than

字紧接来确定；