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英语作文二十五大闪光点
一
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词汇层面
1.
高级词汇的运用：提升文章档次
2.
抽象名词的运用：正式书面用语
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．缩合关系代词
what
的运用：地道英
文
4
．连接副词的运用：突出逻辑层次感
5
．
adv
和
adj
的运用：生动形象，丰富饱满
6
．避免多处出现同一词：表达方式多样化
7
．分词、不定式、形容词词组后置作定语：简洁性原则
二
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句型层面
8
．
同位语和定语从句：解释说明
/
限制
9
．
插入语的英语行文：解释说明，句式多样化
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．倒装句和强调句：结构需求、上下文衔接
/
突出强调
11
．长短句相间：体现层次，阅读顺畅
12
< br>．变化多端的句子开头：句式多样化
13
．分词作状语代替连词；独立主格结构
：句式多样化
/
情景描写
14
．被动语态的引入：省去做动作的人
15
．主从复合句：句式多样化
16.
设问与反问：设置悬念
/
突出强调
17.
平行排比：内容丰富饱满，突出强调
18.
比较级句：句式多样化
19.
双重否定：突出强调
20.
对照句：强烈对比
三
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论证与修辞手段
21.
说理论证手段
22.
对比论证手段
23.
类比论证手段
24.
举例论证手段
25.
比喻、拟人等修辞手段
1
1
．表达方式的多样化
Before
I
was
a
college
student,
I
considered
it
easy
to
be
a
college
student.
At that time, I was
eager to be a college student. I imagined the
interesting life of a college student.
But now I think it is difficult
to a
student in college.
→
Before
I
entered
college,
I
considered
it
easy
to
be
a
college
student.
At that time, I was
eager to be one of them. I imagined the
interesting
life in the
university
life.
But
now
I
think
it
is
difficult
to
be
a
student
in
college.
2
．抽象名词的使用
Essay
属于正式文体的文章。名词化句子是适合这种文
体的。
如：
1) a. Watching too much TV will affect
your studies.
b. Heavy exposure to
TV will interfere with one's studies.
2) a. Although I anticipate for months,
nothing could have prepared me
for the
impact of the actual day.
b.
Despite
months
of
anticipation,
nothing
could
have
prepared
me
for
the impact of the actual day.
3)
Devotion
to
that
land
has
been
the
source
of
conflict
in
the
last
decade.
4) He failed to complete the course.
This spoilt his chances of promotion.
→
His failure to complete
the course spoilt his chances of promotion.
5) He criticized the plan
repeatedly.
This irritated/annoyed
everyone.
→
6) If you carefully compare the two
teaching methods, you will find the
former is superior.
→
Careful comparison of the
two teaching methods will show the
superiority of the former.
2
7)
When
there
is
a
slight
improvement
in
their
children's
studies,
parents
will feel happy.
→
3.
平行排比句与设问、反问
1.
Everyone is aware of the horrible facts: school
systems are running
out of
money
；
teachers can't
spell
；
students can't
read
；
high school
graduates can't even find China on the
map.
2.
Our
strength
makes
him
strong;
our
determination
makes
him
determined;
our courage makes him a hero.
3.
So,
if
there
is
little
public
support
for
space
exploration,
where
does
the impetus to fund
these activities come from? Promoting the cause of
science is one possible answer.
4. How much of the
resources of a society or a family should be
allotted
to a member who no longer
recognizes it? How many sacrifices should the
healthy
and
vital
make
for
the
terminally
or
permanently
ill
and
disabled?
5.
For
example,
is
it
humane
that
a
terminally
ill
patient
is
thus
caused
to
feel guilty for remaining alive because he does
not want to die? Is
it wise that a
patient is killed alive simply because of a
mistaken
terminal diagnosis? And is it
possible that euthanasia could be taken
advantage of for some ulterior or even
criminal purposes?
4.
同位语特殊结构：
同位语的位置
1)
N
词组
,
主语???????.（名
词词组指代主语，如例
3
）
2)
主语，
N
词组
,
谓语????（名词词组指代主语，如例
4
）
3)
???????..N,
N
词组（名
词词组指代逗号前离它最近的名词，如例
2
）
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4)
????????., N词组（名词词组指代
逗号前整个句子，如例
1
）
同位语的形式：
1)
N
词组＝
N + doing / done /
adj.
词组
/ to do
2) N
词组＝
N +
定语从句
3
1) a. Soon I would be on
my own, making my own decisions, doing what I
wanted
without
someone
looking
over
my
shoulder
and
it
meant
going
to
school
with
boys,
which
is
a
welcome
change
coming
from
all-girl
high school.
b. Soon I
would be on my own, making my own decisions, doing
what I
wanted
without
someone
looking
over
my
shoulder
and
it
meant
going
to school with boys--a
welcome change coming from all girl high
school.
2) a. I don't expect
you simply to agree and do nothing more. I expect
you
add
something
that
may
be
a
reason
for
agreeing,
another
example,
or a remark to
carry the idea further.
b. I don't
expect you simply to agree and do nothing more. I
expect
you add something--a reason for
agreeing, another example, or a
remark
to carry the idea further.
3. A man of
humble origin, Lincoln achieved success through
his own
efforts.
4. Pamela
Doviak, an expert in the highly classified field
of
silencing nuclear submarines, has
listed a series of
discrimination
complaints against the Navy because she is not
permitted to go on sea trials to see
her efforts at work.
5. The first great
idea is electronics, the technology that enables
a cooperative global exchange of
information, lectures and
courses.
6. The same criteria should apply to
alcoholism, a disease that is the
third
leading cause of preventable death in this
country.
小试牛刀
1. There they were greeted by a woman
called Zenobia.
She was a beautiful
woman of wealth and position.
2.
Photosynthesis is an extremely important process.
It
is
the
ultimate
source
of
food
for
almost
all
organisms
on
the
earth.
3. Even a brief visit
to Greece gives you a profound sense of the roots
of our civilization.
Greece is a modern gateway to the glory of the
past.
4. She is an excellent, all-round
student with a congenial personality.
She is a promising candidate for WOW.
WOW is an international scholarship program for
outstanding women
around the world.
5. We must realize our dependence on
services over which we have no
personal
control.
We
accept
these
services
unthinkingly
from
dozens
of
nameless
men
and
women every day.
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．双重否定句
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