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1.
Composition
2.
My View On Opportunity
3.
Section C
Writing
Directions:
For
this
part,
you
are
allowed 30
minutes
to
write
a
composition
of
no
less
than 120
words on the topic
“My View on
Opportunity”
. Your composition should
be based on
the following outline
(given in Chinese)
有人认为机会是极少的,
另一些人则认为人人都会有某种机会,
你的看法如何?
写出
你的观点,说明你的理由并举例。
在你的文章结尾处不要忘记写出你的结论。
1.
Criteria
A.
Simple
Sentences
B.
Correct Logical Order
C.
No Serious
Grammatical Mistakes
Marks
1.
Serious
Grammatical Mistakes
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
7.
Third Personal
Singular
;
Singular /
Plural
;
Spelling
;
Capital letter
;
Punctuation
;
My view…?
8.
Others’
opinion
;
9.
Examples…
10.
Non-
sentences/Ch-English
11.
Opportunity, a word that is so
important;
12.
Opportunity alway waiting for the one
always be ready for it;
13.
Who want to
success should do…;
14.
Anyone wants
opportunities, but we seem often hear that;
15.
There are
people consider;
16.
Have many opportunities in our life;
17.
Word form
18.
Opportunity
is little;
19.
Every one have;
20.
Someone/somebody think…the
other;
21.
one people/a people/The people who;
22.
success;
succeed; successful;
23.
I am in favor of that life is/hold the
view about that opportunity;/Maybe you trust on
that it is important/As people usually
talk out that when there is a will
24.
Repetition/Arbitrary
25.
In the world
…; in the 21
-century;
26.
Someone think
... The others think … I prefer the latter,
that
is …;
27.
The
opportunities is little; If you… the opportunity
is many;
28.
If you work hard, and you will catch
it. If you not, and you won’t;
29.
There are two
kinds of people. One think that the opportunity is
little, the other think
that the
opportunity belongs to everyone;
30.
Red ink; Title;
31.
Coherence
32.
We can make a
speech to show yourself…
33.
To we the
students of university;
34.
As a student,
we…
;
35.
To do…
doing…
36.
How to write this essay
Structure of the essay
1.
Some (people)
say that….because….
2.
Some (people)
think that….because….
3.
Others (other
people) believe that…because….
4.
My point of
view is….because…..
Take … as an example…..
5.
Conclusion
I…
1.
Story
很多人在机遇降临时
.<
/p>
感觉不到机遇的存在
,
更不能说及时抓住
机遇
.
这或许就是为什么大多
数人一辈
子庸庸碌碌终一事无成的缘故吧
.
甚或有些人在突然而至的多个
机遇面前,失去了
判断力。
不知道该选择什么?一任最佳机会被
别人利用而成就梦想。
这说明什么?成功者的
头脑和随时准备成
功的素质。由此我想到了一个故事:
有三个人要被关进监狱三
年,
监狱长答应满足他们其中每人一个要求。
其中,
美国人要了三
箱雪茄;
法国人很浪漫,
要了一个美丽的女子为伴;
而犹太人则要了一部与外界沟通的电话。
三年很快就过去了,
第一个冲出监狱大门的美国人,嘴巴鼻孔耳朵里塞
满了雪茄,
大喊:给
我火,给我火!原来监狱长给他只答应了一
个条件,他无奈没有火点烟。
接下
来走出的是法国人,
只见他怀里抱着一个婴儿,
美丽的女子手里
还牵着一个小孩,
挺起
的大肚子里还怀着第三个。
最后一个从监狱里走出来的是犹太人,
他紧紧地抓住监狱长的手
说:
“
这三年来我每天都在与外界联系,
我的生意不但没有受到影响,
反而增长了百分之
2
00
,
为了表示谢意,我决定送你一辆劳斯莱斯!
”
。
命运并
非机遇,
而是对机遇的一种选择和把握,
有的人对逆境中的不可
多得的机遇
当成了一种千载难逢的发展机会。
英国人艾略特说:
对于不会利用机会的人来说,
机会又有
什么用呢?人们在嘲笑美国人的贪婪的同时似乎不得不羡慕法国人的浪漫,
在为法国人徒
增
的负担而感慨时,不能不承认犹太人精明。
“弱者等待机遇。
强者创造机遇”
谁能把握机遇,
谁能主动出击,谁就能改变命运
。这是一个颠扑不破的真理!
(irrefutable truth)
1.
Quotations
2.
Believe in
yourself, that is the secret of success.
自信是成功的秘诀。
2. Every dog has his day.
凡人皆有得意日
.
< br>(风水轮流转)
。
3. Adversity makes a man wise, not
rich.
逆境出人才。
4. Hope for the best, but prepare for
the worst.
抱最好的愿望,做最坏的打算。
5. Honesty is the best
policy.
诚实才是上策。
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