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onpraise

英语作文

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浙江省温州市

2015-2016< /p>

学年高一下学期八校期中联考英语试题

阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇字数在

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praise is like frosting

（糖衣）

on a cake. a little makes it taste

better and too much will ruin everything. kids need your

encouragement and love it when you recognize their

achievements. just don‘t ruin their trust by leading them to

believe every little thing they do is worthy of praise. when they

grow up, they will find that they can‘t be accepted by society

and probably think it was you who made them so needy of

praise.

recently, i had the opportunity to observe a family, 5-year-old

joshua and his parents, in action. they had arrived at my office

about 15 minutes early, and having returned from lunch with a

few minutes to spare, i was talking with my secretary in the

waiting room. as i was collecting my things to walk back to my

office, i was greatly surpr

ised by a series of joshua‘s mother‘s

comments. the kid was playing with some blocks on the floor,

and his mother kept praising him on his progress. ―oh, joshua,

that‘s such a nice stack

（堆）

of blocks. you are so smart!‖

followed by ―what a great job. i couldn‘t have built that when i

was your age.‖ then his father added, ―that‘s my boy‖, which

nearly caused my secretary to gag

（窒息）

. after all, the kid

was 5 years old, and stacking up a few wooden blocks is not a

great achievement. no wonder he was having problems

following directions in school--no teacher would be able to

give him the amount of attention and praise necessary to keep

the child interested.

what is wrong with praising a child? actually, it may cause a

lot of harm if it is not given properly. praising children in

certain ways may set them up to become praise junkies

者）

--expecting their parents or others to praise them for

almost every act or feeling, rather than developing internal

（内

在的 ）

measurement for self-respect and feeling of

achievement. try to give praise only when necessary, no more

and no less.

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a certain amount of praise for children is positive but over-

praised children will find it difficult to be accepted by society.

recently when i saw how 5-year-old joshua was praised by his

parents for doing an easy thing for his age, i realized his

parents‘ too praise was the cause of his problems in school.

so we should give kids proper praise only when necessary.

浙江省温 州市十校联合体

2015-2016

学年高二下学期期中联考英 语

试题

阅 读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇

60

词左右的内容概要。

in a small village, the parents of a little boy were very

depressed due to his bad temper(

脾气

). the boy used to get

angry very easily and hurt others with his words. while he

forgot what he spoke in anger, his friends and neighbours

avoided him.

his mother and father tried many ways to make him give up

his anger and develop kindness. unfortunately, all their

attempts failed. finally, the boy‘s father came up with an idea.

one day, his father gave him a huge bag of nails, asking him to

hammer one nail to the fence every time he lost his temper. the

little boy found it funny and accepted what his father had said.

his anger drove him to hammer 30 nails into the fence on the

first day! over the next few days, the little boy found it very

difficult to hammer the nails into the fence and decided to

control his temper.

gradually, the number of nails hammered into the fence was

reduced and the day arrived when he hammered none!

now, his father told him to remove the nails every day as he

had controlled his anger. several days passed and the boy was

able to pull out most of the nails from the fence.

the father appreciated him and asked him, pointing to one of

the holes, ―what do you see there?‖

the boy replied, ―a hole in the fence?‖

he told the boy, ―the nails were your bad temper and they

were hammered into people. you ca n remove the nails but still

see the holes in the fence. the fence never looks the same! it

has scars all over! your bad temper and anger were like that!

use words for good. use them to show your heart!‖

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浙江省温州市十校联合 体

2015-2016

学年高一下学期期中联考英语

阅读下面短文，

根据其内容写一篇< /p>

60

字左右的内容概要。

over the past few years, there has been a big increase in the

number of people sharing information online. in this article, we

will learn about some positive reasons for people to share

information online.

94% of those surveyed by the new york times said they put a

lot of thought into how the content they are sharing will be

beneficial to others. we often share information with our

friends in the office or at home to educate, entertain, or

pleasantly surprise them. this is also true while sharing

information online. if you look at the facebook wall posts of

your friends, you will realize that most of their updates are

usually famous quotes(

引述

), entertaining videos, humorous

images, funny jokes, etc.

a lot of people share information online to picture their true

self to the outside world. some people, especially those who

are shy and not comfortable talking about their areas of

interest in the presence of others, find it extremely convenient

to share that information online with others. according to the

study, 78% of the people said they shared information online

because it helps them develop better relationships. today,

people are so busy that they do not have the time to meet each

other personally. a lot of people now ―meet‖ each other online,

rather than in places like restaurants and pubs.

lastly, when we share our thoughts online, we are actively

communicating with a large number of people who are a part

of the world wide web. sharing information will affect the

viewpoint of others, or add to their understanding about the

world.

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people increasingly share information online for several

positive reasons. most people hope what they share will

benefit others. some people show their true self by sharing

information online. people also do this to keep in touch with

friends and make new friends. quite a few people share their

thoughts online hoping to influence others view points in a

positive way. (59 words)

浙江省金华 、温州、台州三市部分学校

2015-2016

学年高二下学期

第十次联考（期中）英语试题

阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇

60

词左 右的内容概要。

punishing children is a controversial topic. everybody has

different opinions about how to act to correct a child‘s

behavior. parents, teachers, doctors and specialists such as

psychologists, have disagreements about whether it is good

for a child‘s education to punish him or her.

the word ―punish‖ means different things to different people.

punishment can be physical or emotional. physical

punishment is when the parent hits, slaps or spanks the child.

on the other hand, emotional punishment is when the parent,

in order to educate the child, doesn‘t let him or her watch tv,

go to play with his or her friends, or do things like that. the

parent doesn‘t teach him o

r her, but still he or she punishes

the child.

although many surveys and studies have been made about

what the correct way is to raise a child, nobody has the answer

or the truth. i think it will be very difficult to find the answer or

get people to agree.

i think the parents should love their child and give him or her

the best education, but at the same time, they should punish

the child if he or she deserves it. i think if you love your child,

you should be rational when you apply the punishment. it

should be reasonable but strict.

the parents‘ goal is to have in the future a good man or

woman in society, so sometimes you should do what is

necessary to get your child to behave well.

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version:

people have mixed opinions towards punishment to children.

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要点

1)punishment can be physical or emotional, but the way

they are punished is the key problem. (

要点

2)as a matter of

fact, it is difficult to find the correct way to raise a child. (

要点

3)proper punishment can be instructive and necessary to

children if it is reasonable and strict. but love and education

are the most important for us to make our kids behave well. (

要

点

4)

浙江省绍兴市第一中学

2015- 2016

学年高一下学期期中考试英语试

题

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阅读下面短文，根据其内容 写一篇

60

词左右的内容概要。

one in three of us eat more meals by ourselves than we do

with other people, a new study

showed today.