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我有一个幸福美满的家庭，家里有爸爸、妈妈，弟弟，一个可爱的我。
I have a happy family, home, and a
father and mother, brother, a lovely
of
I.
我的爸爸个子高高的，喜欢穿西装，他在我心目中是最帅的。
My father is a tall, like to wear a
suit, he is the most handsome in my
mind.
爸爸非常有爱心，他不
但非常爱我，还很喜欢我们楼道里的其他小朋友。
Father is very good-hearted, he not
only to love me very much, also like
other children we corridor.
爸爸平时喜欢看报纸，连睡觉前都要看一会。
Dad usually like to read newspaper,
even before sleeping wanted to see
for
a while.
妈妈瘦瘦的白白的，头发长长的。
Mother is thin, white hair long.
她不但是我的妈妈，还是我的知心朋友呢！
She is not only my mother, or my bosom
friend!
我们还彼此给对方起了外号，
妈妈叫“糊涂虫”，
因为她有时候装糊涂，
所以我<
/p>
就老喊她“糊涂虫”。
We
also
each
other
to
each
other
up
the
nickname,
the
mother
call
because she sometimes
playing dumb, so I be old to shout to her
妈妈就叫我“跟屁虫”，因为我老是喜欢跟在她的屁股后面。
Mom just call me
我是家里最小的一员，眼睛长的大大的，小巧的鼻子，红红的嘴巴。。。。
I
was
a
member
of
the
youngest,
big
eyes,
a
small
nose
long
red,
red
mouth...
十分可爱。
Very
lovely.
我活泼开朗、待人热情，也像爸爸一样有爱心，喜欢帮助别人。
I
lively,
cheerful,
treat
people
hospitable,
also
like
my
father
has
the
compassion, likes to help others.
这就是我的家庭，一个非常美满幸福的家庭。
This is my family, a very happy happy
family.
我的家有
4
个人
:
我的父母
,<
/p>
我的哥哥
,
和我
.
我的家庭很棒
,
我很快乐
.
我的哥
哥害羞而有趣
.
他很擅长运动并且在排球运动上犹为突出
.
但他不喜欢学习并且
成绩不好
.
他喜欢讲笑话
,
经常和朋友和家人开玩笑并且总能使我们发笑
.
我的
父亲是一位医生
.
他在三亚的一家医院工作
.
他不喜欢看电视
,
但他很喜欢看报纸
并且总是看到很晚
.
我的母亲是一位侍者
.
她在一家餐厅工作
.
她有良
好的习惯
.
她喜欢每天吃蔬菜和喝牛奶
,
但我不喜欢牛奶
,
它遭透了
.
空闲时间她喜欢看京剧
,
她说那有利于她保持年轻并且可以使她放松
.
我的家人
总是做一切对我有利的
事
.
他们总是站
在我这边
.
我喜欢我的每一个家庭成员
,
我喜欢这个温暖的家
.
My family
我的家庭
there are 3 members in our family,my
father,my mother and love
each other
father likes share a big bookshelf,and
he
take
large
proportion
o
f
ay
he
reading
newspaper,
magazines
and
all
kinds
of
paper
which
have
letters
on
mum
love
to
play
computer
games
since
i
teach
her
how
to
do
likes
to
see
the
movies
and
play
majiang on 's more, i
like to do some games in our garden with my
are
very
happiness
for
we
can
do
whatever
we
never
quarel,
if we have some
promblems we
will
sit
together
and take suggestions
from
each family is very
harmonious
，
i love my family.
我家有三个成员，爸爸，妈妈和我。我们都非常爱彼此。
我爸爸非常喜爱阅
读，
家里有一个我和他共用的书架，
大部分都是他的书。
每天都要找点什么来读，
报
纸啦，杂志啦，只要是有字的，他都要读上一读。我妈妈则爱上了电脑，自从
我教会她如
何看电影以及如何在上面打麻将之后，
她就为之疯狂了。
至于我
，
我
喜欢和我的狗狗在室外一起做一些运动。
< br>我们是个幸福的家庭，
因为我们可以做
任何我们喜欢的事
情，
我们从不吵架，
要是家里出现了任何问题，
我们都会坐下
来一起讨论解决。并听取彼此的意见。我的家庭很和谐。我爱我家
。
There are 3
members
in our
family,my
father,my mother and
love
each
other father likes mum love to
play computer
i like to do some games
in our garden with my are very
happiness. My family is very
harmonious
，
i love my family.
我家有三个成员，爸爸，妈妈和我。我们都非常爱彼此。我爸爸非常喜爱阅读，
我妈妈则爱上了电脑
,
我喜欢和我的狗狗在室外
一起做一些运动。我们是个幸福
的家庭，我的家庭很和谐。我爱我家。
< br>
There
are
five
people
in
my
family--my
parents,
my
brother,
my
sister
and
I.
My father is 48 years old . He is
fond of fund and bring us much
happiness. My mother is as old as him.
She just a housewife and keep her
mind
on cooking. The food she cook is the most
delicious that I think.
My
little
brother
likes
playing
basketball
and
My
sister
is
a
lovely
girl .They are all
just student . But My sister like study is more
than
my brother. They used to quarrel ,
but still love each other.
I love
my family.
翻译：
有五人在我家
-
我的父母，弟弟，妹妹和我
我父亲是
48
岁。
他喜欢的基金，
带给我们很多欢乐。
我妈妈是跟他一样老。
她只是一个家庭主妇，她的心继续烹饪。她煮的食物是最美味，我想。
< br>
我弟弟喜欢打篮球，
我的姐姐是一个可爱的女孩。
他们都只是学生。
但我喜
欢学习的妹妹比我弟弟了。他们用吵架，但仍然彼此相爱。
我爱我的家人。
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10
）
My
family
There
are
five
people
in
my
family.
They
are
my
grandma,
grandpa,
dad,
mom and I. Look!
Grandma is watching TV. Grandpa is reading a book.
Dad
is writing an e-mail. Mom is
cooking dinner. I am doing my homework. I
love my family!
【要领点评】
写法：
这篇习作介绍了自己家的家庭成员，以及此刻他们正在干什么，表达了自己对家人的感情。
时态：
由于本单元主要讲的是现在进行时态，所以
建议采用现在进行时态。
句型：
主语
+be+
动词的现在分词。
注意：
本单元的重点是现在进行时态，注意在写句子时要保持时态的完整
性，即系动词和动词的
ing
缺一
不可
。
(15)I Love My
Family
Here
is
a
photo
lf
my
family.
These
are
four
people
in
my
family.
They
are
my father, my mother, my brother and I.
My father is a doctor. He works in
a hospital far away. He goes to
work
by
subway.
My
mother
is
a
teacher.
She
works
in
a
school
near
my
home.
She
goes
to
work
by
bike.
After
work,
they
like
reading
books.
Who
is
the
tall
boy?
He
is
my
brother.
He
is
five
years
older
than
me.
He
is
a
singer.
He
’
s now in
Beijing. He goes there by plane.
I love
my family.
【要领点评】
一个平凡的题材，一篇生动的
作文。这样的命题，我们可能面对几次，甚至几十次了。但这位小朋友
的笔端很是灵巧，
了了数言，让一个幸福的家庭跃然纸上，很值得我们去思考，我们能做到吗？
小朋友的这篇作文除了语言优美之外，
在结构上也有闪光之处。
先总说，
将自己的家人逐个介绍一遍，
后分说，
把家人的工作、上班方式，爱好一一细说。最后以一句话进行概括，起到点题的作用。我们在写
< br>类似的作文的时候是不是也可以借鉴呢？
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2
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My Family
This is my family. There
are four people in my family. My
grandmo
ther, my father, my mother and
me.
My grandmother has short white
hair. She looks very nice. My fath
er
has short black hair and small eyes. He looks very
fat, so I often
call him
“fat man”. He works at a factory. My
mothe
r works at a L.
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