六年级作文之小学五年级英语作文我会做什么

小学五年级英语作文我会做什么

【篇一：人教版小学五年级英语作文话题 】

小学英语五年级上册各单元作文范例及点评

my english teacher

miss wang is my english teacher. she’s very pretty. she is

short and thin. she has two big eyes and a small mouth. her

hairs are long. she likes cats very much. and she likes singing

and dancing, too. her english is very good. we often play

games in english classes. she is very kind. we all love her.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是

“

我的英语老师

”

，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作

者开门见山，直接点题，首先 介绍了英语老师的姓名，然后逐一介

绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及 师生情感等。

小朋友们在写作文时 ，要注意使用自己最熟悉的词

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，以免写出一

些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点 正确、书写清

晰、规范等。

my days of the week

i’m a student and i am in grade 5.i get up at six o’clock every

day. i have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven

o’clock. i have classes from monday to friday. i have an

english class on friday. i have a pe class on tuesday. i usually

go shopping and watch tv on the weekend.

【要领点评】

作所为

,

写得自然、流畅。

小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化，要依据提示，结

合 自己的实际，写自己身边熟悉的事情。

my favourite food

do you know what this is?its colour is yellow. it’s long and

thin. it looks like a small boat. guess! what is it?oh, it is a

banana. do you know what that is? guess again! its colour is

orange. it’s round. it looks like a small ball and a small lantern.

oh, it is an orange. i like them very much. i like ice-creams, too.

chocolates and candies are yummy. i like them very much.

how about you? what’s y

our favourite food?

【要领点评】

my favourite food

是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举

出自己最喜欢的每一种食物，而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章

用词 准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外，文章中出现了一些生

词，可见小作者是用心查字 典了。

i can help do housework

i am a girl. my name is li ling. i’m in class three, grade five.

i’mhelpful at home. i

can water the flowers, empty the trash

and sweep the floor. after meals, i can help my mother do the

dishes. on sunday, i can wash the clothes. what about you?

are you helpful, too?

【要领点评】

本篇作文的题目是

“

我可以帮助做家务

”

，作者主要叙述自己在家帮

助做的事情，介绍自己的名字 ，所在年级及在家能做的家务，很详

细，到位。

小朋友们在写作时，应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情，这样会避 免在

作文时显得太空，因为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特别深刻。

< br>写作时还要注意大小写和时态。

in the kitchen

this is the kitchen of my family. it’s big and nice. look! my

mother is cooking in it. this is a microwave and that is a stove.

there is a big table here. there are many things on it. what are

these? they look yummy! oh, they’re apples. and what are

those? they are grapes.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是

“

在厨房

”

里，作者根据自己家的厨房情况。介绍

厨房里有微波炉和电炉，有一 张大桌子和桌子上的物品等，以及妈

妈在做饭，非常真实。

小朋友们，可以从观察自己身边的事、物写起，利用所学的句 子，

描述身边熟悉的东西来训练习作。

my village

my village is very beautiful. there are many houses in the

village. near the village, there is a forest. a small river is in

front of the village. the water is very clean. we can see some

fish in the river. near the river, you can see a mountain. there

are some flowers and trees on the mountain. i like my village.

welcome to my village!

【要领点评】

本文以

“

我的村庄

”

为题描述了自己家乡的风景。介绍了村庄的房屋、

森林、河流及大山，使人看 了这篇作文后确实感觉到

“

我的村庄

”

的

美丽。小朋友们在写作时，可仔细想一下自己的村庄或所在城 市的

特点，尽量使用本单元学过的单词或短语进行叙述。

小学英语五年级下册各单元作文范例及点评

my weekend

there are two days on the weekend, saturday and sunday. on

saturday, i often go to my dancing class in the morning and do

my homework in the afternoon, and i often help my mother do

some housework. on sunday, i always visit my grandparents in

the morning and read books in the afternoon. after dinner, i

often watch tv with my parents. we often have a good time.

【要领点评】

写法：这篇习作是按照时间顺序记叙周末的活动，记叙了周六 和周

日的上午和下午分别做了哪些活动及对活动的感受。即：周六上午：

舞蹈课

→

下午：做作业和帮妈妈做清洁

→

周日上午：看望祖父母

→

下 午：阅读

→

晚上：看电视，与父母交流

→

感受：高兴和愉快。我

们还可以选取周六和周日中的几个比较 主要的活动来写，先说明什

么时间在什么地方由什么人做了什么事，有什么感受。再按照 活动

顺序把活动内容写清楚，最后抒发一下对这次活动或这个周末的感

< br>想。

时态：这篇短文我们可以用三种时态来写

: a.

一般过去时（主要描述

你上个周末是怎样度过的）

; b.

一般现在时（主要描述你经常怎样度

过周末）

;c.

一般将来时（主要描述你要怎样过周末）。这里我们来

表述平时是如何过周末的，所以采用一般现在时来写。

注意：活动的相关表达方法可采用旧知识，

< br>eg.

（例）起床

get up

，

和新知识，

eg.

climb

mountains

去爬 山中的

un

很容易错写成

nu