2020-2021年中考英语书面表达专项练习

2020-2021

年中考英语书面表达专项练习

一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）

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假定你是

David

，来自美国，你的

QQ

好友

< br>Li Ming

想要在今年的暑假去做志愿者，他来

信向 你了解有关这方面的情况。请认真阅读下面的邮件，并根据信中的内容和实际用英语

回复 ，可以有适当的发挥。

To: davidwoodlandschool@

From: limingsunshineschool@

Subject: Volunteering

Dear David

，

I’m writing to ask you for advice. I know you often do volunteer work in your free time. I’m

interested in it very much. I’m going to do some this summer vacation. But I know little about it.

Could you help me answer the following questions?

●Why do you want t

o be a volunteer?

●What kind of vo1unteer work is suitable for us students?

●Do you have any problems with volunteering?

●If my parents don’t allow me to do so, what should I do?

I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Best wishes

，

Li Ming

注意：

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词数

90

左右。回复信的开 头和结尾己经写好，不计入总词数

;

2.

回复中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

Dear Li Ming,

Thanks for your letter. I'm glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your

questions.

_ __________________________________________________ ____________________________

___________ __________________________________________________ __________________

_____________________ __________________________________________________ ________

_______________________________ ________________________________________________

_________________________________________ ______________________________________

_ __________________________________________________ ____________________________

___________ __________________________________________________ __________________

_____________________ __________________________________________________ ________

_______________________________ ________________________________________________

_________

I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.

Best wishes

David

【答案】

Dear Li Ming,

Thanks for your letter. I'm glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your

questions.

I volunteer because I enjoy helping others and can learn a lot from others. As students, we can

take part in some interesting activities, such as looking after animals and working for sports

matches. Also, we can join charity organizations to help protect the environment and so on.

It’s OK to have problems, because volunteering takes much time and energy. Sometimes I can’t

balance my study and work.

If your parents don’t allow you to volunteer, you should have a good

talk with them. Try to let them understand you.

I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.

Best wishes

David

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文，给好友

Li Ming

< br>回信，介绍暑假做志愿者的情况。。结合所给材料，

可知本文主要考查一般现在时 态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主

要为系表结构和动宾结构，注 意一些常见句式的应用，比如：

I'm glad……

，

we can……

，

It’s

OK to……

，

If your parents don’t allow you to…….

，

you should……

，

I hope……

等句式的应用。写

作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符 合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头为你想要 成为一名志愿者而感到高兴，接下来介绍

我们可以从事的志愿者工作以及志愿者工作带来 的一些问题，最后我希望你喜欢志愿者工

作。此处

would like to, enjoy doing sth, learn from, take part in, such as, look after, allow sb to

do sth, let sb do sth, look forward to

等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

2

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书面表达

“

小手拉大手

,

同做文明人。

”

自创建文明城市文明乡村以来

,

淄博人民万众一心

,

众

志成城

,

让

人点赞的行为随处可见。作为中学生

,

我们 也做出了自己的努力。请根据以下所

给要点

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写

一篇

100

词左右的英语短文。

1.

种植花草树木；

2.

遵守交通规则；

3.

公共场合不大声喧哗；

4.

公交车上主动给有需要的人让座；（自主发挥

,

至少两点）

参考词汇

: civilized

文明的

make joint efforts

共同努力

obey

遵守

【答案】

Since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in Zibo have made joint

efforts

（共同努力）

. Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.

As junior students, we have also made some contributions to the civilized Zibo. For

example, to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees. Also,

for our own and others’

safety, we obey the traffic rules and never run red light. In addition

（此外）

, we no longer talk

or laugh loudly in 's more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in

need.

Besides, we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish into a dustbin, never littering

anywhere. Furthermore

（而且）

, we are accustomed to

（习惯于）

queuing up

（排队）

for a

ticket or something else. All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and

Zibo city more civilized

【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰 ，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短

语，例如

mak e joint efforts

，

as junior students

，

for example

，

obey the traffic rules

，

run red

light

，

in addition

，

no longer

，

in public

，

and so on

，

what's more

，

on a bus

，

in need

，

be

accustomed to

，

queue up

，

all in all

等。而

to protect our environment, we plant flowers and

trees./ What's more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need./ All in all,

we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more c ivilized.

等插入语

的运用，丰富了短文内容，使语言 表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。

点睛：书面表达题既不是汉 译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容

经整理后展开思维，考查运 用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要

点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的 单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构

以便得到较高的分数。

3

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马上要初中毕业了，大家都是依依不舍的。班主任决定在下周举办一场

“ My Life At

School”

主题

班会

,

邀请全班同学参加。请你根据以下提示，写一篇发言稿。

美好的回忆

1.

与同学融洽相处；

2.

得到老师的帮助；

3.

获得交换生机会；

4.

参加志愿者活动。

不开心的事情

1.

好朋友李华转学；

2.

不擅长语文写作。

1.

升上理想的学校；

未来展望

2.

能结识更多朋友；

3.

请你补充（至少两点）

My Life At School

How time flies! It's unbelievable that I'm going to graduate from my beloved school.

【答案】

My Life At School

How time flies! It’s unbelievable that I’m going to graduate from my beloved school. There are

many things to remember.

In the junior school, I got along well with my classmates. The teachers are very friendly and they

are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an

exchange students and spent two months in Australia. I learned a lot from the experience. I also

remember I served as volunteer to help others. Certainly, there were also unhappy things. My

good friend Li Hua went to another school. I was very sad. Luckily, we kept in touch with each

other through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing.

I hope I can go to a dream school and make more new friends. I also wish I can do better in all

subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇作文要求我们以

My Life At School

为题，写一篇发言稿。题目中利用表格的形式，展示

了文章的具体内 容，学生们可以此为提纲进行写作。审题可知，这篇短文应主要使用一般

现在时和一般过 去时，注意根据表达需要使用正确时态，并注意谓语动词的正确形式。内

容应主要包括三 部分：首先是初中三年里的美好回忆；然后是不开心的事情；最后展望自

己未来的高中生 活。表格中有非常具体的提示，但不能逐词翻译表格中的短语，应把他们

变成自己的话， 并用英语表达出来。写作时应注意：文章中应包括表格中的所有信息，不

能遗漏要点；第 三部分的内容中还需要自己发挥想象力进行补充，注意应合情合理，与上

文很好地衔接。 另外注意句式结构要符合英语的表达习惯，用完整的句子表达。句式结构

可以简单句为基 础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式的使用，提升作文档次。同时

语句之间使用适 当的连接成分，使文意连贯、自然。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文 作者根据题目要求，回忆了自己的初中生活，并展望了未来。

短文有以下几个特点：首先 文章内容完整，结构清晰。短文分三段，第一段基本是题目中

给出的开头，作者使用一句 话引出下文；第二段是主体，介绍了过去美好的回忆以及不开

心的事情；最后一段对未来 进行了展望。各部分内容安排合理，有层次、有条理。其次短

文中使用了正确的时态和人 称，语法规范，用词准确，注意了动词正确形式的变化。句式

结构完整，符合英语的表达 习惯。语言准确、得体，表达自然、流畅。短文中使用了丰富

的句型和短语，如

The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most

unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent two

months in y, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides, I was not

good at Chinese writing.I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can

go to a good college.

等。

4

．

Life is just like a mirror, you smile at it, and it smiles at you, too.

请你以

“Learn to Smile ”

为

题，根据下表所列的要点写一篇

1 00

词左右的文章（文章开头已给出）。

1

、面对困难与烦恼学会微笑（考试失利、被别

人误解等）。

学会对自己微笑

2

、使你自信，击败你的人有时就是你自己。

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3

、有益于身心健康。

学会对他人微笑

1

、便于与他人之间的交流。

2

、给别人带来快乐

,

自己也快乐。

微笑是一种语言

人人都能懂，传递友谊，拉近距离。

1

、参考词汇：

对某人微笑

smile at sb.

误解

misunderstand

2

、短文必须包括所有内容要点，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥， 使短文连贯通顺。

Learn to Smile

I remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.” Do

you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .

__________________________ _________________________________________________< /p>

____________________________ __________________________________________________ _

______________________________________ _________________________________________

________________________________________________ _______________________________

________ __________________________________________________ _____________________

__________________ __________________________________________________ ___________

____________________________ __________________________________________________ _

【答案】

Learn to Smile

I remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.”

Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .

First, learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life. If you fail an

exam or you are misunderstood by your friends, don’t be sad. Just smile at yourself . Smiling at

yourself brings back your confidence . Sometimes the one who beats you is not others, but

yourself. And smile can also keep you healthy.

Second, learn to smile at others. It will make you communicate better with people. Smiling at

others makes yourself happy as well.

In a word, smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone. It passes love and friendship and

helps shorten the distance between you and other people. Living with a smile ,every day will be

shiny.

【解析】

这是一篇表格式的作文，要 点是一表格的形式出现，首先要研究表格，找出需要表达的要

点，然后加以整合，也可以 适当增加使意思更连贯，但要点一定要全，不能漏掉。写作时

要注意遣词造句，不能受汉 语的影响，要用地道的英语表达，注意时态，语态，单词拼

写，语法等问题，用好简单句 ，适当用复杂句。可以用一些高级词汇。还要注意句子的关

联。

5

．

近来， 美国总统特朗普的外孙女由于说一口流利的中文而成为

“

网红< /p>

”

。你的美国朋友

Sam

看过相关报道之后也很想学好中文

,

但是不知道该怎 样做。假如你是大明，请你根据以

下提示写一封邮件给他

,

提一些关于如何学好汉语的建议。

要点提示

:

1.

课堂上认真听讲

,

做好笔记

;

2.

不要害怕 犯错误

,

与同学们用中文交流

;

3.

课下经常阅读中文杂志、报纸等

,

在网上看一些中文语言类节目

;