最新初中英语书面表达技巧和方法完整版及练习题

4.

公交车上主动给有需要的人让座；（自主发挥

,

至少两点）

参考词汇

: civilized

文明的

make joint efforts

共同努力

obey

遵守

【答案】

Since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in Zibo have made joint

efforts

（共同努力）

. Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.

As junior students, we have also made some contributions to the civilized Zibo. For

example, to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees. Also, for our own and others’

safety, we obey the traffic rules and never run red light. In addition

（此外）

, we no longer talk

or laugh loudly in 's more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in

need.

Besides, we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish into a dustbin, never littering

anywhere. Furthermore

（而且）

, we are accustomed to

（习惯于）

queuing up

（排队）

for a

ticket or something else. All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and

Zibo city more civilized

【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰 ，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短

语，例如

mak e joint efforts

，

as junior students

，

for example

，

obey the traffic rules

，

run red

light

，

in addition

，

no longer

，

in public

，

and so on

，

what's more

，

on a bus

，

in need

，

be

accustomed to

，

queue up

，

all in all

等。而

to protect our environment, we plant flowers and

trees./ What's more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need./ All in all,

we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more c ivilized.

等插入语

的运用，丰富了短文内容，使语言 表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。

点睛：书面表达题既不是汉 译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容

经整理后展开思维，考查运 用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要

点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的 单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构

以便得到较高的分数。

．

临近毕业，学校在学习小组内开展了初中阶段 自评和组评活动，假设你是

Moonlight

小

组

的组长，请根据下面表格中的信息和提示，为你的组员

Tommy

进行综合素质的评价，

写一

份素质报告．

Name

Characteristics

Hobbies

Honour

Problems

Your

suggestions

Tommy

聪明、大方（各举一例）

喜欢看书，认为看书有很多好处（请列举

2

个好处）

他在家帮助做家务。在学校 和同学相处融洽。上学途中遵守交通规则

（举

一例）。今年，学校授予了他优秀学生奖（

Award for Best Student

）

面临考试，遭受压力痛苦，他没有充足的睡眠．

（根据实际情况提

2

点建议）

…

要求：

1

、表达清楚、语法正确、上下 文连贯；

2

、要点必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当

3

、词数：

100

词左右；

4

、不得使用真实姓名、校名 和地名等

Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.

【答案】

Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his

lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his likes reading because he

thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a

good effect on childr

en’s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school,

he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses

the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year.

However, Tommy is stressed when the exam comes. And he doesn’t have enough sleep.

I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It’s better for him to manage his

time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.

【解析】

这篇作文要求我们按照表格 里的内容介绍一下

Tommy

的情况，为

Tommy

写一篇综合素质

的评价报告。在表格中有非常详细 的关于

Tommy

各方面的内容，我们需要用正确的英语把

这些内容有条理的表达出来。表格中涉及的内容较多，写作时要注意表达的条理性。这篇

作文应主要使用第三人称来写。在最后要给

Tommy

提一些建议，这一部分应该用第一人

称。同时注意表达的准确性，尤其是表格 中的第五项和第六项内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的 范文。这篇作文内容完整，包含了表格中的所有内容，

没有遗漏要点。表达准确，注意了 被动形式的使用，如

He was rewarded by our school this

year.

。写作时注意了条理性，使文章具有层次 感，条理清楚。短文注意到了长短句的结

合，并恰当的使用了一些连词，使文章表达的连 贯。如

He is always ready to help others.

、

He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news.

、

He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this year.

等。

4

．

Life is just like a mirror, you smile at it, and it smiles at you, too.

请你以

“Learn to Smile ”

为

题，根据下表所列的要点写一篇

1 00

词左右的文章（文章开头已给出）。

1

、面对困难与烦恼学会微笑（考试失利、被别

人误解等）。

学会对自己微笑

2

、使你自信，击败你的人有时就是你自己。

< br>

3

、有益于身心健康。

学会对他人微笑

1

、便于与他人之间的交流。

2

、给别人带来快乐

,

自己也快乐。

微笑是一种语言

人人都能懂，传递友谊，拉近距离。

1

、参考词汇：

对某人微笑

smile at sb.

误解

misunderstand

2

、短文必须包括所有内容要点，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥， 使短文连贯通顺。

Learn to Smile

I remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a

smile and the rain is gone.” Do

you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .

____ __________________________________________________ _____________________

______ __________________________________________________ _______________________

________________ __________________________________________________ _____________

__________________________ __________________________________________________ ___

____________________________________ ___________________________________________

______________________________________________ _________________________________

______ __________________________________________________ _______________________

【答案】

Learn to Smile

I remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.”

Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .

First, learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life. If you fail an

exam or you are misunderstood by your friends, don’t be sad. Just smile at yourself . Smiling at

yourself brings back your confidence . Sometimes the one who beats you is not others, but

yourself. And smile can also keep you healthy.

Second, learn to smile at others. It will make you communicate better with people. Smiling at

others makes yourself happy as well.

In a word, smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone. It passes love and friendship and

helps shorten the distance between you and other people. Living with a smile ,every day will be

shiny.

【解析】

这是一篇表格式的作文，要 点是一表格的形式出现，首先要研究表格，找出需要表达的要

点，然后加以整合，也可以 适当增加使意思更连贯，但要点一定要全，不能漏掉。写作时

要注意遣词造句，不能受汉 语的影响，要用地道的英语表达，注意时态，语态，单词拼

写，语法等问题，用好简单句 ，适当用复杂句。可以用一些高级词汇。还要注意句子的关

联。

5

．

中国传统文化源远流长，代代相传。近期各校都在开展学习中国传统文化活动。某网

站正在开展以

“

弘扬中国传统文化

”

为题征文，请你用英文写一篇报道，介绍你校上周举办

的

“

讲中国成语故事

”

活动并谈谈你的收获与感受。

提示词语：

Chinese idioms, story, collect, share, learn from, acient

提示问题：

● What did you do during the activity of

● What did you learn from the activity?

● What do you think of it?

【答案】

The activity of “Telling Chinese idioms story” was held in our school last week.

In order to take part in this activity, I collected lots of Chinese idiom stories in advance. Many

students, including me, actively shared the Chinese idiom stories in the activity. After each story,

the teacher explained the meaning of idioms and how to use it correctly. We learned a lot from

our teacher.

I did lots of reading in the process of preparation. My reading ability has improved greatly. What’s

more, I realized the richness of Chinese acient culture. I really had a good time on the activity.

【解析】

【详解】

1.

题干解读：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，只给了一些要点提示，但都不很明确。学生除了

要把所给要点提示都表达出来外，还要进行适当拓展，使文章内容充实。

2.

例文点评：例文采用三段式；用第一人称来叙述讲成语故事活动；因为活 动已经举办，

所以时态采用一般过去时；对参加活动的过程描写完整且条理清晰。

3.

高分亮点：

短语：

in order to

，

take part in

，

lots of

，

learn from

，

in the process of

，

What’s more

，

have a

good time

。

句型：被动句型。

6

．

你是一位九年级的学生李明，你用英语写一封邮件 给你的笔友

Amy

，感谢她对你关

心， 并告诉她目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前的学习和生活情况。

要点 如下：

（

1

）

. < /p>

虽然你大部分功课你都学得比较好，但是你对自己不满意。你认为自己学习上还要

多花工夫。

（

2

）

. < /p>

你的父母对你严格要求，但是也很关心你。（举例说明，适当发挥

2

—

3

句）

… …

（

3

）

. < /p>

老师很乐意帮助你们。他们希望你们实现自己的理想。他们说（适当发挥

< br>2

—

3

句）

……

注意：

（

1

）

.

要求语句通顺，意思连贯。

（

2

）

. < /p>

第

2

要点和第

3

要点要用

2

—

3

句话作适当发挥。

（

3

）

. < /p>

词数

90

个左右，邮件开头和结尾已经给 出，不计入总词数。

Hello!

Dear Amy, thank you for caring.

Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination.

___________________________ __________________________________________________ __

_____________________________________ __________________________________________

< br>_______________________________________________ ________________________________

_______ __________________________________________________ ______________________

_________________ ___________

How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours

Li Ming

【答案】例文

Hello!

Dear Amy, thank you for caring.

Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. I have got good results

in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my

studies.

My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed

in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They had a close communication with me and

helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.

My teachers are also ready to help us. They hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to

try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. It's important not to be afraid

of any kind of difficulty.

How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours

Li Ming

【解析】

【详解】

本文属于材料作文，告诉艾 米目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前的学

习和生活情况。根据要表达 的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可

适当增加内容。