初中英语中考英语书面表达易错题精选经典

喜欢上了广场舞。（

3

）

现在，奶奶比以前健康了，有了很多朋友。 （

4

）

有些 邻居有意

见，认为音乐很吵，无法入睡。（

5

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你认为人们可以跳广场舞，但

……

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要求：（

1

）开头和结尾已给出，不计入 总词数。

（

2

）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

Boys and girls,

I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to talk about my grandma.

< br>_______________________________________________ ________________________________

_______ __________________________________________________ ______________________

_________________ __________________________________________________ ____________

___________________________ __________________________________________________ __

_____________________________________ __________________________________________

< br>_______________________________________________ ________________________________

_______ __________________________________________________ ______________________

_________________ ___________________________________

That’s all. Thank you!

【答案】

Boys and girls,

I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like

to talk about my grandma.

A few months ago, my grandma went to do square dancing after supper. Since then, she has been

in love with square dancing. Now, she is much healthier than before. What’smore, she has a lot of

friends. However, some neighbors have a complaint against the people who do square dancing.

They think that the music is so loud that they can’t fall asleep at night.

In my opinion, people can do square dancing because it is a good way to keep healthy. But they

should think about the feelings

of others and they shouldn’t make a lot of noise.

That’s all. Thank you!

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文，根据 要点提示写一篇学校英语兴趣小组的活动中的发言稿。要注意

随着文章推进时态的变化， 一开始应该选择一般过去时，而后面应该选用一般现在时，最

后表达自己观点的时候也应 该使用一般现在时。人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致关

系，构思文章框架，列举出可 能会用到的好词好句，记住千万不能漏写信息要点。参考词

汇就是必用词汇，一定要运用 到文章当中。在写作中注意运用恰当的连词，使文章更加顺

畅，自然。

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近年来，各大城市雾霾（

haze

）情况越来越严重，整个国 家的空气污染状况令人担忧。

请分析空气污染的现象，原因，应对措施，写一份英文的倡 议书，呼吁大家保护环境，减

少对空气的污染。

要点提示：

（

1

）我国空气污染的现象。（至少写

2

点）

（

2

）

空气污染产生的原因。（至少写

2

点）

（

3

）减少空气 污染的措施。（至少写

2

点）

要求：

（

1

）

80

词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（

2

）

文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

Dear students ,

As we all know , hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years . That warns us of

the serious

airp ollution__________________________________________ ___________________________

_______

【答案】

Dear students,

As we all know, hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years. That warns us of

the serious air pollution. Big factories, power plants and cars all can cause air pollution. For

example, chemicals in the smoke from power stations cause a lot of damage. Besides, the

people's activities are also the sources of air pollution such as throwing the rubbish and smoking.

What's more, the more trees are cut down, the less polluted air can absorb. Air pollution is

becoming more and more serious, so we should take some measures such as planting more trees

and stop factories from sending out waste air, what's more, we had better walk or take a bus.

Protecting the environment is our duty. Everyone should play a part in saving the earth.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇材料作文，根据材 料中的相关信息介绍一下整个国家的空气污染状况。所提供的

材料中列举了近年来，各大 城市雾霾（

haze

）情况越来越严重，主要从空气污染的现象 ，

原因，应对措施三个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所 有

信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语 。

语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作 中

适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】

We had better walk or take a bus.

我们最好步行或乘公共汽车。这里

had better

表示最好，

后面跟动词原形，

take a bus

表示乘公共汽车。

【高分句型二】

Protecting the environment is our duty.

保护环境是我们的职责。这里

Protecting the

environment

做主语，用的是动词的

ing

形式。

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书面表达

地球是我们的家园，我们作为地球的主人，就应该好好保护地球。现在正在倡导

“

低碳

”

生

点：

1.

节约用水、用电；

2.

节约纸张，循环使用旧课本，保护森林；

3.

节约粮食，在更多的土

地上种树；

4.

不乱丢杂物，保护环境；

要求：短文 中不得出现真实的校名和人名；

80

词左右

提示词：

the greenhouse gases lifestyle

低碳生活方式

How does our earth turn better?

The earth is our home. ____________________________________________ ___________

________________ __________________________________________________ _____________

If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we are living will be better and better.

【答案】

How does our earth turn better?

The earth is our home. We should protect our earth as the owner. But how to live in the

greenhouse gases lifestyle?

I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the

electricity and so on. When you wash, can you close down the water? Can you turn off the lights

when you left the classroom? I think saving paper is necessary. All the used text books should be

recycled. Thus, less trees won't be cut down again. If we can save more food, the peasants will

plant more trees on their farm. Don't throw litter everywhere, it will pollute our environment.

If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we living will be better and better.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定 句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如

how to do

，

live in

，

around

us

，

such as

，

as a middle school student

，

and so on

，

close down the water

，

turn off the

lights

，

cut down

，

make a contribution to our earth

，

pollute our environment

，

better and

better

等。而固定结构

But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?

和

I think as a middle

school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so

on. /Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? / If we can save more food, the

peasants will plant more trees on their farm.

等复杂 从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表

达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢 记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适

当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理 。

【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理

后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要

尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得

到较高的分数。

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随着社会的发展，通讯的方式从远古时代的书信到当今的互联网，经历着巨 大的变化。

请你写一篇短文，谈谈你对现代通讯工具的使用及看法。内容包括：