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雅思大作文开头怎么写
在雅思大作文的写作中,
开头段一般由
general statement
,
argument
,
thesis statement
两部分构成。
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雅思大作文开头怎么写
1General Statement
General
Statement
的主要作用是介绍写作背景,引入话题。
但是值得注意的是:
不能照抄题目,
应
用同义词、
近义词替换题目中的相关词语,
并用不同的句子结构来改写题目中的句子结构。例如:
Example 1:
It
is
widely
believed
that
mothers
are
by
nature
better
parents
than
fathers. It is therefore more important
for mothers to spend time with
children
than
fathers.
Others
think fathers
make
equally
good
parents.
What is your
opinion?
在这个题目中,
首先我们可以看到题干表述
用了三个句子,
首先我们要区分哪句
是
general statement
,
哪句是
arguments.
其实很
容易发现,通常句中间有
明
显
阐
述
观
点
表
达
的
,
就
是
arguments,
而
做
客
观
陈
述<
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的
就
是
gene
ral
statement
,其位置一般是题目的第一句。上
题中
It
is
widely
believed
that
mothers are by nature
better parents than fathers
,
就是我们要拿来做同
义改写,放到我们开头段作为背景的句子。
同义改写可以采取以下技巧:
1
同义句型转换
如
It is widely
believed that
…
这个
句套表达某事情是众所周的,它有很多同
义句型,如
It is generally assumed
that
…
, Common knowledge is
that
…
,
等。
2
同义词,近义词,同义结构转换。
如
by nature
这个介词词组
表达的含义是,
自然天性上的,
在原句中作为
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动
词的表语,我们可以改写为一个同义名词词组,<
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nurturing
instinct
,自然天性
的意思。相应的,前面的谓语动词要发生变化,搭配
have
。
3
造并列结构。
有的时候我们可能发现
原题中的表述无论词语还是句型都不是很轻易的可以找
出同义结构出来,
那么我们可以采取并列结构,
即并列两个近义词语义,
或者反
义词再加否定结构。
上题中的
better parents than
可以改为
better or
less dispensable parents
than
通过上面的三个步骤,我们就可以成功的将原题的背景句改写为我们开头段的
gen
eral statement
。
原题:
It is widely believed
that mothers are by nature better parents than
fathers.
改写完后:
It is generally assumed
that women have a
‘
nurturing
instinct
’
that
somehow
makes
them
better
or
less
dispensable
parents
than
fathers are.
General
Statement
常用句型:
With
the
development
of
science
and
technology,
great
changes
have
taken place in
…
in
the past few years.
(
虽常用,但已被滥用,建议减少使用
)
Along
with
the
increasingly
rapid
_____________,
more
problems
are
brought to our attention.
The
issue
of
whether
or
not
__________
has
been
widely/
heatedly/
debated
currently/recently.
When it comes to
whether
…
,
some
…
are
strongly against it,
claiming
…
.
It is
generally accepted/ It is indeed the case that
most countries have
seen an increase in
_______ over recent years.
2Argument(
争议
)
Argument
即为题目表述的观点的立场,不同题目的立场表述大
有不同。
(1)
有的题目中只有一个立场
e.g. Countries with a long average
working time are more economically
successful than those countries which
do not have a long working time.
To
what extent do you agree or disagree?
在
我们写的开头段,
在写完
general
statement
后,
直接用
One
point is that
…
把原题的立场
< br>(countries
with
a
long
average
working
time
are
more
economically successful
than those countries which do not have a long
working time)
同义转述即可。
值得注意的是,
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这个题目本身没有背景句,
所以写
gene
ral statement
的时候,
需要我们根据题目的
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argument
进行总结。
亦或者可以
general statement
和
argument
这两个部分合并为一个部分,
这个题目可写成:
The
issue of whether or not countries with a long
average
working hours are more
successful in terms of economic development
than those countries which do not have
a long working time has been
heatedly
debated currently. As far as I am concerned,
…
(2)
有
的题目中包含两个互相否定或者相关的立场
e.g.
Some
scientists
think
it
is
very
soon
that
computers
will
be
more
intelligent than human.
Some people think it is a positive development,
while others think it is a negative
development. Discuss both views and
give your own opinion.
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