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专题
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读后续写之各种精彩收尾段落
一、读后续写收尾的方式：
二、画面定格
1.
人物动作的画面定格
如：
（
20
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杭州高级中学等五校联考）
They stood
there for a moment, side by side,
waiting
for
the
rushing
holiday
current
and
for
their
place
in
it.
Then
the
daughter
glanced over and
momentarily regarded her mother.
And
slowly, almost reluctantly,
she placed
her arm with apparently unaccustomed affection
around her mother’s
shoulders and
gently guided her back into the deluge.
如：
His
hard
work
paid
off!
Holding
the
soda
tin
firmly,
Reuben
rushed
for
the
shop
to
buy
the
brooch.
The
moment
he
got
the
beautiful
brooch,
he
burst
through
the
front
door
and
placed
it
in
Dora’s
hand.
Never
had
Dora
received
such
a
gift
.
Speechless
1.
画面定格
2.
对话收尾
3.
主题升华
4.
结尾留白
5.
首尾呼应
and
happy,
she
held
her
son
tightly
into
her
arms,
with
tears
welling
up
in
her
eyes.
如：
The butterfly cleaned her tears on the
face
，“No.” God felt a bit relieved
and
said
，“Tomorrow
you
can
become
human
again.”
But
she
shook
her
head
and
said,
“No,
I
want
to
be
a
butterfly
for
the
rest
of
my
life...”The
n
the
butterfly
would
stay
together
with
her
lover
forever
.
On
the
top
of
the
mountain,
she
seemed
to
enjoy
the sunrise and the sunset happily with
them.
2.
特殊寓意的写景画面
（
1
）
The
sky was
a billion pure eyes
of
light and the grass green
underfoot, it was
as if night and day
had become one beautiful moment. Dawn had
come.
天空像是一亿只纯净的眼睛拼接在一起，脚下是青草，仿佛黑夜和白昼已成为一个美丽
< br>的时刻。黎明已经来临。
（黎明到来的画面）
2.
特殊寓意的写景画面
（
2
）
Dawn
sent
shimmering
rays
over
the
placid
ocean,
bestowing
a
golden
path
from
the shore to the horizon.
黎明在平静的海面上放射出出闪闪发亮的光线，留下一条
从海岸到地平线横亘而过的金
色道路。
（黎明到来的画面）
2.
特殊寓意的写景画面
（
3
）
The crystal and cerulean water was gentle as I
waded through it, the sunset
like
orange paint on a blue canvas.
当我涉过水晶般天蓝色的轻柔的水时，日落就像蓝色画布上的橙色颜料。
（美好日落时的
画面）
2.
特殊寓意的写景画面
（
4
）
The
lingering
sunlight
was
obliterated
by
the
rapidly
falling
night
，
resembling
a pitch-black curtain draped over the s
ky.
逗留在天际的最后一缕阳光被迅速落下的夜
幕擦除，就像
是天空被一层漆黑的幕布覆盖。
（日落时的画面）
2.
特殊寓意的写景画面
（
5
）
The
moon
under
siege
by
stars
seemed
to
lighten
the
night
bringing
forth
stars
that
shone
and
hung
in
the
blackness.
The
never
ending
blackness
consumed
everything.
被群星围困的月亮似乎照亮了
黑夜，带来了在黑暗中闪耀和悬挂着的群星。无尽的黑暗
吞噬了一切。
< br>（描写夜空的画面）
2.
特殊寓意的写景画面
（
6
）
Looking up, I saw
the sun
shine brighter than I ever knew
before.
I saw a tree
in
the
distance
glisten
gently
as
it
reflected
the
sun's
rays.
My
consciousness
ebbed
away with the heat. I took a few blinks
before I landed with a thud.
抬头一看，
< br>我看到太阳比我以前所知道的还要明亮。
我看见远处有一棵树反射着太阳光，
发出柔和的光辉。
我的意识随着热度而衰退。
我眨了眨眼，
然后摔倒在地才猛然回到现实中，
恢复了知觉。
（特殊寓意）
2.
特殊寓意的写景画面
（
7
）
Dotted with glittering stars, the sky, midnight
blue, gave the scene a
fairytale
quality.
缀满星光的天空，午夜的蓝色，给了这一场
景一个童话般的质量。
（神
话般美丽的夜空画面）
2.
特殊寓意的写景画面
（
8
）
Kissed by the rain and glistening, the
wet ground is cold under foot. A dense
earthly sweet smell rises from the
ground, enveloping everything within its soft
embrace.
潮湿的地面走起来很冷，
被雨
水亲吻后闪闪发光。
一股浓郁的泥土般的香味从地上
升起，把一
切都包裹在它柔软的怀抱里。
（雨后清新的画面）
The rain drummed on the
window, bidding farewell to the last beam of sunli
ght.
雨水打着窗户
，
向最后一缕阳
光告别。
（雨水来临的画面）
2.
特殊寓意的写景画面
（
9
）
The
leaves
crunched
beneath
my
feet
as
I
strolled
down
the
street.
Occasionally,
one
would fall past
me,
lightly
swaying as the air
gently carried it to
the
ground.
我在街上漫步时，树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响。偶
尔，有叶子会从我身边掉下来，轻轻地摇晃，
缓缓落到到地面。
（描写落叶的画面）
三、对话收尾
（
1
）
Chester
said
his
father
told
him
he
had
tried
to
search
for
him
and
his
brother,
but both brothers
had changed their last names.
“He does
remember me and my older
brother
and
he
told
me
that
he’s
been
looking
for
us
ever
since
we
lost
contact
，”
he
said. Chester said his brother has since flown to
Colombia to be reunited with
Urrea as
well.
When asked how the reunion with
his father will change his life,
Chester
said
，“I
got
family
everywhere,
so
it
might
lead
to
many
more
trips
now.”
(2)
What was
most fascinating about the reunion is that Shavi
also moves others.
Nina’s
family
had
moved
to
a
bigger
apartment
.“I’ve
heard
amazing
stories
about
dogs’ loyalty, but I never imagined
this sort of thing would ever happen to me.
Even
now,
I
can
hardly
believe
this
dog
traveled
such
a
long
distance
to
find
us
，”
said Nina
，“I would never
give this kind of
friend away again. I
never grow tired
of repeating
this
—
animals are the most
devoted and loving creatures. They need
our love and care.”
(3)
Her husband spoke to the director of
Heightvale, Dolores Haworth.
Soon she
offered
him
a
job
working
for
the
company.
She
said
，“He
just
had
a
brilliant
working
attitude
and
is
definitely
the
type
of
employee
we
are
looking
for.
I
was
told,
‘If
he does this for free, imagine his jobs
if he was being paid. ’I met him and he
was a lovely and polite young man and
he has already started working for us.”
(4)
…They
hung
all
the
things
back
to
the asked
Paisley,
“Are
you
really
willing
to lead a tough life
with me” She
patted away the
ashes
on hands and looked
at
the
walls
with
loads
of
stuff
on
them
satisfactorily,
saying
，“Yes!
For
me，
it
is
not
a suffering to
live.”
四、主题升华
(1)
Everyone has one person
they look up to as a role model.
To me
there is none
other
than
my
mom.
She
has
beauty,
brains,
and
one
of
the
best
hearts
I
know.
Without
her in my life, I
would have no idea whether I can be
a_famous_dancer
. Someday,
when_I_am_older
and
have
children
of
my
own,
I
hope
I
can
be
just
as
great
a
parent
as my
mom.
（母爱的深远影响）
(2)
….I
am
extremely
unhappy
about
it.
I
think
money
doesn’t
equal
happiness.
And
free
life style
also
doesn’t
equal
happiness.
The
real
happiness
is
that
everyone
loves
each
other,
and
does
everything
useful
for
our
society.
Most
of
my
classmates
support
me.
But
some
of
them
think
money
is
everything.
In
my
opinion,
money
can’t
take the place of
everything, such as your life, your time and your
happiness.(
表
达自己的价值观）
< br>
(4)
“Two
reasons
account
for
that
you
won，”
the
teacher
answered.“First,
you’ve
almost mastered one
of the most difficult throws in all of judo.
Second, the only
known defense for that
move is for your opponent to grab your left arm.
It is your
biggest weakness that makes
you win the match. As a p
roverb says,
‘Every coin has
two
sides.’
Making
full
use
of
your
strength
is
your
achievement.
Please
remember
that
in
no
case
will
you
give
up
especially
in
trouble.
God
is
fair
to
everyone.
”(借
用名言警句来升华主题）
五、结尾留白
(1
)
While
she
wrapped
them,
I
took
a
de
ep
breath
and
asked
Joy,
“Do
you
have
dinner
plans”
I
explained
that
I’d
like
to
wait
a
bit
before
I
went
back
to
the
hospital
–
gave Grace and her husband some time
alone with baby. “Would you be interested
in joining me in a bite to
eat
” I asked. “I’d love to,” she
replied, her eyes
sparkling like
diamonds.
And, this was the beginning
of the end to my months of
heartbreak
following Betsy’s
death.（故事结尾留白，给予读者想象空间）
(2)
The
beggar
hesitated
for
a
moment,
then
he
decided
to
open
it.
He
declared
aloud,
“Who
cares
He
wanted
me
to
have
it
anyway.
I
might
as
well
enjoy
it
now.”With
that,
he unwrapped the white
tissue paper, but to his surprise,
there was no hard rock
candy inside.
Instead, into his fingers fell a shiny white pearl
worth thousands
of dollars.
六、首尾呼应
(1
)
2017
年浙江高考题
开头：
I
had
an
interesting childhood.
It
was
filled
with
suprises
and
amusements,
all because of
my mother---loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and
forgetful. One
strange faimly trip we
took when I was eleven tells a lot about
her.
结尾：
Despite
mom's being absent-minded and
forgetful,
she was still a
kind and nice mom.
(2)
2018
年浙江高考题
开头：
It was summer and my dad
wanted to treat me to a vacation like never
before.
He decided to take me on a trip
to the Wild West.
结尾：
Never had I had such a
thrilling yet dangerous vacation before. The
special
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