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2021
高考英语读后续写专题（三）
一：典题技法指导
At
Dana's yard sale, Tim chose a baseball from the
toys spread on the card table and asked
about the price. Dana told him
everything was a quarter except Nezumi, a cotton
toy rat. It was
gray with some cotton
sticking out from the hole where an ear had been
torn off.
special, so he's ten dollars.
He needs a safe new home.
Tim laughed
saying he didn't have ten dollars. Dana laughed,
too and gave Nezumi to Tim as
a free
gift because he was her friend. When Tim whispered
it was sort of old, Dana said old toys
were the best. She then invited Tim to
her birthday party the next evening, adding that
her parents
were
giving
her
a
real
rat
for
her
birthday.
Tim
was
amazed
and
asked
if
it
was a
live
rat.
course,
At home,
Tim's mother showed him the gift she had bought
for Dana. It was a knitting spool
(
编织线轴
) shaped
like a mushroom. Mom said Dana could knit a scarf
for her doll. Tim sighed
that Dana
wasn't a knitting kind of person but a rat kind of
person. Mom laughed after knowing
what
had happened. Together they drove to the pet
store, where Tim searched and searched and
selected a clear plastic ball, one in
which the rat could run around on the floor safe
from cats and
dogs. Tim thought of
Nezumi's ear and decided Dana's new rat would need
this ball.
The next day, Dana brought
cupcakes to class. When she handed a cupcake to
Tim, she asked
if Tim brought Nezumi to
school as Nezumi liked to ride in backpacks. Tim
was at a loss because
Nezumi was at
home on his bed. Then Dana asked what gift he was
giving her. Tim replied it was
a
surprise. In silence they sat for a while before
he heard Dana say her parents were giving her a
new bike for her birthday instead of a
live rat because they thought rats would bite
things.
注意：
1.
所续写短文的词数应为
150
左右；
2.
应使
5
个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.
续写完成后
,
请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1: At home that afternoon,
Tim stared at the plastic rat ball.
Paragraph 2:
All of a sudden, he had an idea.
写作思路
1.
确定主题：大主题是友谊。故事讲的是
< br>Dana
将最好的玩具送给朋友
Tim
< br>，并邀请
Tim
参加生日派对。
Tim
为
Dana
的生日精心准备礼物
。但是节外生枝，所买的礼物有点多
余了
...
，故事的最后应该是主要人物
Tim
为朋友买到称心的
礼物，是一个意外的惊喜。
2.
时空变化：
注意三个时间
, the
next evening, the next day, that afternoon
< br>，
注意两个地点，
at home
，还有第二段的最后部分应该到了
Dana
家。涉及时空变化
的续写最容易跑题，应特
别小心。
3.
续写难点：情节简单，无话可说。遇到此类续写最好的解
决方法是多进行心理描写，
情感描写以及体现某一心理与情感的细节动作描写，
或者是烘托情感的环境描写，
要身临其
境，有代
入感。
写作提纲
Paragraph 1: At home that afternoon,
Tim stared at the plastic rat ball.
1.
Without a live rat, the gift he selected seemed
like the fifth wheel.
2.
3.
Speechless and disappointed, Tim stood there, not
knowing what to do with it.
4. It was
as if gloomy silence filled his room.
5. After a while, he began to pace up
and down in the room, scratching his head and
glancing
around.
6.
Then
he
poured
out
from
a
box
all
the
gifts
he
liked,
trying
to
choose
one
for
his
best
friend, but in vain.
7. Just as he decided to give up, his
eyes fell on Nezumi--the torn cotton toy rat.
Paragraph 2: All of a sudden, he had an
idea.
1.
2.
Tim
said to himself with a nod.
3. With
that, he darted out and couldn't wait to tell his
mother about his idea.
4. Like magic,
the old torn doll turned into a lively rat in his
mother’
s hands, though it