英语短文改错30篇-附答案

改错一

I

have

a

good

friend

who

’

s

name

is

Liu

Mei.

She

is

our

monitor

and

one

of

the

excellent

student in our class. Although she is clever, but she works very hard. We have a lot on common

and have a lot to talk about. One evening she

told me that something happened when her parents

was out. She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning.

She

stopped

look

out of

the

window

and

find

a

cloud

of

smoke

coming

out of

her neighbour

’

s

house.

She

called

119

immediate.

Ten

minutes

later,

the

firemen

came

and

put

out

fire.

Her

neighbour was very thankful for her help.

改错二

I went to see the film after supper. On my way the cinema, I met an English woman, who lost

her way. I gave up the chance see the film and took her to her hotel. While go there, I told her

about great changes that had been taken place in the past few years and she had told me anything

about her country.

Although I missed the film, I still felt very happy, for I had not only helped her

out of trouble but practise my spoken English. If I had not worked hard on English, I would have

been able to help him.

改错三

Dear Ralph,

I'm a senior student. I'm getting well with a boy in my class. But I have fallen in love with

him for almost half a year. He is shy boy, so I wrote him a letter first

to

express

my

feeling.

He

wrote back. In his letter

he said,

whether we have some chance after graduation.

about going out. But he said he didn't want to. He just wanted to sleep and watched TV.

What

do

you think I should do? Do you think I should continue to love him and give up?

改错四

Dear Bob,

Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher, Miss Fang. I’d like to your

penfriend, and

get to know more about your country.

First,

let

me tell

you something more about myself. My name

is

Li Hua. I

live in

Beijing,

where is the capital of China. I go to Hongqi Middle School. We study quite a few subject, such as

maths, Chinese, English and physics. I use to play ping-pong a lot on my spare time, but now I am

interesting in football. Do you play any ball games? What your favorite sport? I look forward to

hear from you soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

改错五

Two months ago, I went to abroad for further study. Before I left, I was given a lot present.

Among them

，

there were two presents which were really interested me. My sister buys me a book

with

color

pictures

about

body

language

and

with

words

about

customs

of

different

country

in

them.

My

brother

gave

me

a

note

which

read,

“My

present

has

put

in

your

bedroom.”

When

I

hurried into my bedroom, I found a box, in that there was an electronic dictionary. I was very glad

but a few surprised to receive these two presents.

改错六

Dear Li Ming,

I have received your letter yesterday. Don’t

worry about you. I’m getting

along well with my

research works in the lab.

But, to my surprising,

you say

you will give up learn English. The

reason is that you have not done well in it recently and you

have lost interesting. I’m afraid I can’t

agree with you. I know it is not easy to learn English, and English is widely used in the world

today and it will be important tool in your future work. Besides, it is becoming more and more

important at our daily life. If you study hard, you will succeed. Do remember where is a will, there

is a way.

改错七

Dear Sally,

Now I’d like to tell you something about my part

-time job, in it I work like a guide in a travel

agency. This is the first time when I have earned mone

y. I’ve realized what hard my parents work

to support for the family. I was used to ask them for money, but now I’ll never waste money or

learn to share worry with my parents. I’ve learnt how to get along well with other. What’s more, I

have gained some so

cial experience and I have learnt something can’t be learnt from textbooks. In

the word, I had a wonderfully and valuable summer vacation.

改错八

Sports is fun and most people in the world, whether men or woman , boys or girls enjoy them.

Since long ago, many adults and children called their friends together to spend many hours play

games. Why? One of the reasons is that sports help make them live happy. In the other words,

they help to keep people strong and feeling good. When they were playing games, they move a lot.

That is why sports are good activities for their healthy. Having fun with their friends make them

happy. Many people enjoy sports with watching others play.

No. 9

I went to the Summer Palace on last week. At the gate I happened to meet some America tourists.

I greeted him in English and then we began to chat. I got to know that they were college students

travel in China. They were busy with taking pictures and were much impressed with the changes

had taken place in the past few years. After which, we went boating on a lake and had a good time.

We exchanged our email address so that we could write to each other on the future. They thanked

me again and again. I was very glad to have a chance to practising my oral English

No.10

My classmate except me were in high spirits. At the coming party I would have to do some

cleanings, for I wasn’t able to dance and sing. During the party, I tried to keep the room being

clean. After the party I got rid the rubbish. Enjoying my classmates’ smiling faces, I f

elt their job

worthwhile. When told the room will have been a dustbin without me I thought of a saying,

good in everything useful, you’ll find everything is

beautiful at every corner of your life.

No. 11

Recently, we have had a discussing about if we should study by discussing in free class. Views

vary from persons to person. Most of the students consider that it is of greatly help studying by

discussing in free class, that, they think, can help to find better ways to solve problems. What is

much, they believe that they learn by discussing can last longer in their memories. However, there

are 35 percents of the students holding the opposite view it is not good. They insist that discussing

mean lacking thinking and the loud noises is caused by it will disturb others.

No. 12

Our school lies on the foot of a mountain with a small river passes by. It used to be a quiet, clean

and beautiful place for a school. It is a pity which things have changed after a chemical factory

was

built

near

our

school

one

year

ago.

Every

day

the

factory

produces

many

waste

water

and

some harmful gases. The terribly pollution is harmful to our health. What’s bad, the great noise

from the factory had a bad effect on our activities. As a result, our school is no longer what it used

to. Our teachers and students are miserable beyond the description.

No. 13

Now I’d like to tell you something took place in my school yesterday. In the aft

ernoon we are all

held

together

for

our

18-years-old

birthday.

At

the

first

we

promised

that

like

grown- ups

we

should be responsible for our society. Then we expressed thank to our parents who experienced

hardships to bring us up and our teachers who educated us heart or soul. And our teachers also

gave

to

us

cards

expressing

our

good

congratulations

and

wishes

to

us.

Finally,

we

put

on

wonderfully performances.

No. 14

In the country now, there are many children do not attend the school. I think one of the reasons is

that their families are very poor to send them to school. They had to stay at home to make money

to support their families. Other reason is that many parents think it useless of the girls to study and

they do not like them to go to school. A third reason is what some children are not interesting in

their

lessons.

In

my

opinion,

all

children,

included

girls,

have

the

chance

to

receive

education.

Everybody should pay attention for the education of the children.

No. 15

It

is

known

to

us,

a

severe

tusnami

occurred

in

the

Indian

Ocean

in

December

26,

2004.

It’s

reported

that

more

than

10

countries

were

suffered

from

the

disaster.

But

it

caused

more

than

200,000 deaths and left million of people homeless. Countless houses and schools have destroyed.

Just imagine how the students here need help. Schools should be rebuilt so that they could return

to classes soon. Here the Student Union calls for everyone to do something for them. We’ll have a

voluntary contribution this week. Let’s give away our pocket’

s money.

No. 16

The Guangming Middle School is in west of the city, with the Chengxi River run nearby. When

you enter the school, you can see a big flower bed in the front of you, and two large buildings on

both side: the library on your right and the teach building on your left. Walk on further, and you

will find the sports building. Behind which, there are two basketball courts. On the north of them

is the sports ground. On it’s east side stand two buildings: the dining hall, or the dormitory. All the

buildings of the school is surrounded by bushes and flowers.

No. 17

One morning, Mrs. Smith’s dog was hunger. She took out a piece of paper, that read, “Give it half

a pound of meat.” Then she gave it to the dog saying “Bring it to the butcher’s.” The dog r

an here

and gave the paper to the butcher. He read it and did. Soon, the dog came again and gave him

other

piece

of

paper.

Without

looking,

he

did

so

once

more.

Two

hours

late

it

came

again.

He

wandered why Mrs. Smith gave it so much meat. He read the paper and found out there was not a

single word on it. What a clever dog it was!

No. 18

Mr.

Chen

has

a

habit

of

drink.

The

best

present

to

him,

of

course,

is

wine.

His

the

eldest

son

brought him

a

bottle

of

Mao

Tai. He

was

glad

and

drank

them

up.

Then he

wrot

e

“105”on

the

trademark

with

a

pencil,

meant

he

had

already

drunk

105

bottles

the

wine.

Two

days

late,

a

stranger came and offered to paying 5 Yuan for the empty bottle. Mr. Chen was very pleasnt and

sold it. Several days later, his second son brought him other bottle of Mao Tai. While enjoying it,

he suddenly found out “105”

----the very mark on it.

No. 19

One day a lawyer happened to see a man beat a donkey with a stick. “Why were you doing that?”

asked the lawyer. “To make the donkey

to go.” answered the

man. “Have

you right to beat the

animal like that?” asked the lawyer once again. “Certain I have.” said the man. “It is my donkey

and I can do that I’d like to with what is my”. The lawyer thought for a minute and took his own

stick and beat the man. “Stopping!” cried the man, “Are you mad?” “Oh, yes. This is my stick and

I can do what I like with what was mine.”

No. 20

An

old

man

was

seating

in an

armchair

at

home,

reading

his

newspaper. Beside

him

lay

a

dog

sleep soundly. The old man decided to leaving

home for a while, and he couldn’t go out with his

slippers on. So he woke up the dog and let it fetched the shoes for him. Out of its expectation, the

dog didn’t even stand, but just barked with two eyes closed again. He was complete puzzled. As

he was wondering what was happening, a cat appeared in the front of him. Why do you think a cat

came there?

No. 21

Show

respect

to

parents

is

one

of

the

Chinese

traditional

moral

value.

As

most

of

the

students

today are “the only child” in their family,

they often

regard them as the “centre” of the family,

without caring many about their parents. Our school start a programme when the new year came.

It

is

“Respecting

parents

programme”.

Ten

“Do’s”

have

worked

out

for

the

students

to

follow

clearly and easily. They in

clud: “Remember your parents” birthdays and express you're the best

wishes to them; tell “hello” to your parents see them returning home; and tell your parents where

you go when you leave home.” The programme has been successfully.

No. 22

Welcome to Holl

and! I hope you all enjoy your staying here. I’m glad you have come on April, for

spring is certainly a best season to get to know Holland. I’m sure you will amazed by the color and

variety of all the flowers. You won’t be able to stop taking photograph! W

e have many beautiful

towns. I suggest you start by taking a boats trip on the Canals. It’s a relaxed way of visiting the old

canal houses. Then you can visit to our museums and churches. You don’t have to worry about

language problems there. Just have a pleased trip and come again next year.

No. 23

This is said that Great biologist Darwin was a man with a sense of humor. Once he is invited to

dinner. At the dinner, he happened to sit next a young good-

looking woman. “Mr. Darwin,” the

woman asked a biologi

st, “I heard of you have made a surprising conclusion which the person's

ancestor

is

the

monkey.

I

am

suitable

for

you

row

of

judgment?”

“Certainly.”

Darwin

well-

mannered replied. “I am like the monkey?”

the

ordinary monkey, but from the extreme attractive monkey.”

No. 24

I am shy when at school. I was afraid of speaking in front of the class. When I had to face such

many

classmates,

I

felt

nervous

but

my

voice

and

legs

shook.

My

teachers

helped

me

a

lot

of.

They

often

encouraged

me

to

answer

question

in

class

and

to

go

to

the

teachers’desk

to

read

lessons. Sometime I felt I didn’t do so well but they spoke high of me. Meanwhile, my classmates

kindly

asked

me

to

join

them

all

kinds

of

activities.

All

these

helped

me

with

my

confidence.

Since then on I dared to do that I wanted to.

No. 25

When tea and coffee was first introduced to Europe in the 18th century, people thought they were

harm. So the king of Swede decided to find whether this was true or not. It was happened that