同学作文之祝贺同学考上大学英语作文

2021年2月19日发(作者：award是什么意思)

祝贺同学考上大学英语作文

【篇一：大学英语作文参考范文】

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【参考范文】

a course that has impressed you most in college

there are many courses in each college year. but the course

which impressed me most in college is advanced english

audio-visual speaking. the reasons why i like this cour

se are as follows.

the first reason is that i have learnt a lot from this course. my

listening ability, speaking ability as well as translation ability

has improved greatly after taking this course. the second

reason is that i like the teacher of this course, mr. qin, very

much. he is a charming gentleman with great patience. his oral

english is perfect, sounding like american speakers. he treated

us very strict but we still like him extremely.

just as the proverb goes, “a strict teacher produces

outstanding students.” thanks to mr. qin’s guidance and

teachings in this course, all my classmates have made great

progress in english learning.

【参考译文】

大学中给你印象最深的一门课

大学阶段各个年级都有很多课程，但给我印象最深的一门课是

“

高级

视听说

”

。之 所以喜欢这门课，有很多原因，现将原因列举如下。

喜欢这门课的第一个原因是我在这门课上学到了很多东西。我的英

语听 力水平、口语水平和翻译水平都得到了很大提升。喜欢这个课

程的第二个原因是我很喜欢 教我们这门课的老师

——

秦老师。他是

一个既有魅力又有耐心的人。他的英语口语很棒。乍一听，完全就

是美国本土人在讲英语 。他对我们要求很严格，但我们依然很喜欢

他。

正如谚语所说：

“

< br>严师出高徒

”

。多亏秦老师在这门课上的悉心指导

和教诲，我们班同学的英语水平都得到了空前的提升。

the most beneficial activity in my campus

（文都版）

it is well known that university is greatly different from high

school mainly due to that university will hold a large number of

activities, which benefits college students a lot. from my

perspective, the most beneficial one is “long

-distance running

for love” organized by the students union when i am a

freshman. the money collected by this activity is contributed to

project hope.

it is really my honor to participate the long running, because it

benefits me greatly not only in body but also in mind. to begin

with, the activity reminds me of the great importance of

physical health. before i go to college, i only focus on

academic achievements while the physical health misses my

attention. but, the long-running tells me in time th

at a sound mind lies in a sound body. additionally, during my

participation in this activity, i am informed well that there are

still many children in rural areas who have to drop out of

school because of impoverished families. thus, for one thing, i

fully realize the great importance of helping them fulfill their

dreams. for another thing, i cherish the opportunity to study in

university more, for when compared with those children in

poverty-stricken areas, we should harbor a grateful heart.

by and large, although i have taken part in many campus

activities, i deem the long running for love most beneficial to

me. and i am looking forward to that more wonderful and

meaningful activities will be held in our campus.

范文译文：

众所周知，大学与高中截然不同，主要原因是大学里会举办很多校

园活动，而这些大学 活动使大学生受益匪浅。我认为最有益的校园

活动是大一时，由学生会举办的

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“

爱心长跑

”

。这次长跑 筹集的善款

用于捐助希望工程。

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我很荣幸参加了这次长跑，因为这次活动使我的身心都获得了很大

裨益。首先，这次活动提醒我身体健康的重要性。在我上大学前，

我只关心自己的学习成 绩，而忽视了健康。但是，这次长跑及时提

醒我

——

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健康的身体孕育健康的灵魂。此外，通过参加此次长跑，

我深刻了解到还有 许多偏远山区的小孩因为家庭贫困被迫辍学。因

此，一方面我充分意识到帮助这些小孩实 现梦想是何其重要；另一

方面，我更珍惜自己能上大学的机会。因为，和那些贫困地区的 小

孩相比，我们应该怀有一颗感恩的心。

总体而言，虽然我参加过许多校园活动，但是我认为这次爱心 长跑

最为有益。我也期待有更多精彩而有意义的校园活动举行。

the most impressive classmate in my college

without question, lisa is the person who has influenced my

college life most. she is my classmate, who always leaves a

deep impression on you by demonstrating her passion for life

and the spirit of never yielding, even in the face of extreme

challenges. she is the most courageous person i have ever

known.

during my college years, it is lisa that kept teaching me how to

live through setbacks in the life journey. i’ll never forget that

when i failed in my english examination and i felt overwhelmed,

lisa taught me that failure teaches success, everyone had to

persevere and face up to innumerable setbacks, as long as i

face my problems bravely, i would create my own wonderful

life . with her help , i finally gained the confidence and passed

the exam.

thanks to lisa, i have learned the importance of courage,

which is the indispensable characteristic in my life. she also let

me know the importance of confidence. it means a lot to me

and still in my head till this day.

范文译文：

毫无疑问，

lisa

是大学里对我影响最深的一名同学。她是 我同桌，

她对生活的激情以及面临极端困境时永不服输的精神永远都能给人

留下深刻的印象。她是我见过的最勇敢的女生。在我的大学生涯中，

是

lisa

一直教导我如何面对生活中的挫折。我永远都不会忘记，当< /p>

我没通过英语考试，灰心丧气时，是她教给我，失败是成功之母，

每个人都会遇到无数的困难，都应坚持，只要我勇敢面对困难，我

肯定能迎来自己美好的 生活。在她的帮助下，我最终找回了自信，

通过了考试。

多谢

lisa

，让我学到了勇气的重要性，这是我性格中不可或缺的一

部分。她同时也教会了我自信 的重要性。这一切对我意义非凡，至

今难忘。

open policy

the open policy means that our country is open to investment,

trade and technical and economic cooperation with other

countries on the basis of equality and mutual benefit. the

purpose of open policy is to acquire advanced technology,

management skills to serve our socialist construction so as to

promote the realization of the four modernizations.

we must adhere to the open policy. because economic

relations between states today have become increasingly

close, and no country can possibly advance behind close

doors. only in this way, can we gradually close the gap

between our country and the developed countries.

through the implementation of policy, we can learn advanced

technology and managerial expertise from abroad; make full

use of the foreign capitals to set up great enterprises; absorb

useful and healthy ideas and new knowledge of the modern

civilization; and broaden our views and raise our level of

competence.

本栏目更多同类内容

from:

第一，四级写作再现

“

反押题

”

的倾向。

之前我们可能会去了解了宏观的大话题，比如社会生活、两代关系、

文 化教育、网络科技、伦理道德等等这样的话题，这次的考试题目

跟这些所谓的预测和同学 们之前的准备出入还是很大的。近来关于

大学生中的一门课、一个同学、一项校园活动， 这些我们觉得都过

于平常，过于普通，跟大学生的思想深度好象没有什么关系，但是

我们确实考到了。

我们想一下

2014

年

6

月份考的是一个朋友来你的家乡、校园旅游

的话，你会带他去哪里玩，并 且写出理由。好象是一篇记叙文，又

是一篇议论文，这种题目我们之前也是无法预测，或 者我们根本不

屑于准备，是我们看不上的题目。

6

月份考了，今年

12

月份又考的

是这样的题目

——

一门课、一个同学、一项活动，所以这是 最新的

四级写作方面的命题趋势，那就是反押题。我们之前的预测方向和

这些有一些出入。

第二，主题比较开放、自由

我们说的现在的四级作文题目，我们在这个点上，我们可以延伸到

六级 ，还有考研英语写作的命题，那就是主题比较开放、自由，非

常自由的主题，基本上不存 在跑题的问题。有的人说我作文题目没

有读懂，有的说我题目读懂了，但是没有写对方向 ，这样的情况已

经基本上不会发生，它可以推广到六级和考研英语写作，其实都有

这样的特点。

我 们今天在微博上和新东方在线的互动平台上，看到一些奇葩的评

论和互动。有的同学说我 的考试题目是《

a classmate of yours

who has influenced you most in college< /p>

》

“

一个影响我最多的同

学

”

，结果这个同学写完发现写的是一个影响我最多的 老师，我们觉

得这也不算跑题，应该是审题不够仔细，考场过于紧张，可能是考

前缺乏听课的训练和素质提升，也没有进行模考，可能紧张了，但

是这样 的题目会扣分的，明明让你写一位影响最深的同学，你写了

影响最深的老师，这个我们可 以根据未完成题目指令的要求这一项

来进行扣分。我想这方面的错不知道大家有没有去犯 ？如果没有的

话自然是最好的。所以我们现在的题目普遍来说比较简单。

第三，更加注重考生的语言质量

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我们结合

6

月份和

12

月份的考试得出第三条的结论是作文更加注重

同学的语言 质量。因为我们已经不存在说题目读不懂，看不明白，

大家都是一样的主题，那就代表着 大家都有话好说。所以在这个层

面上如果不拼你的审题能力和对话题预测准备能力的话， 应该考的

是同学的语言质量问题。

这么简单的一个主题，好像你会说的很多，又好象什么也不会说；

好象你能写的很多，但是语言普通简单也不行。所以现在我们说现

在四级作文第三个趋 势是重在语言质量。同学们比拼的是驾驭英语

语言本身的能力，对词汇、语法、固定句型 套用的熟练程度和精彩

程度。

第四，题目记叙、描述与议论并重

之前四级、六级，甚至包括我们说的考研考试当中，我们其实更多

的是重在考生的思考问题、发表评论、写议论文的能力。这些题目

的论据和表达都比较 固定、官方、正式，比如我们说推进经济建设、

提高学生的心态素质、推进中国传统文化 的弘扬还有网络话题，好

象都比较正式，甚至我们说的极端一点，有点

< br>“

假大空

”

的感觉，但

是这样的话题涉及的面比较广、话题比较正式，但是考前好准备。

同学们 只要稍微背一背，什么

“

随着现代生活社会的步伐加快

”

、

“

随

着人们变得越来越富有

”

、

“

随着国家提供的便利措施

”

等等，好 象你

背一下都有了，但是现在的作文考的是你真正的语言描述和记叙的

< br>能力。

作文题目一：

a campus activity that has benefited you most. state the

reasons at least 120 no more than180 words

参考范文：（沈阳新东方学校－吴欣慰老师）

currently, students in mounting numbers pay attention to

academic achievement, neglecting

campus activities, like speaking contest , song contest and its

like. however, from my perspective, we youngsters should take

participate in more campus activities.

i hold the notion that campus activities has lots of benefits on

various fronts. at the top of the list, social activities, such as

song contest could help us make more friends, expanding our

acquaintances. in addition, students would widen horizon,

increase knowledge during the period taking part in campus

activities. last but not list, just as a saying goes, “ all work and

no play makes jack a dull boy”; therefore, students’ choice to

join in some school activities would ease our mind and relief

our burden, which will be beneficial to the study.

in conclusion, youngsters should take part in colorful and

meaningful activities at campus. hence, i suggest schools can

hold some activities to cultivate students ability, physically

and

psychologically.

i have met so many friends in my college life. they have

exerted enormous influence on my life. however, one of my

most impressive friends is my roommate, li ming.

in the class meeting on the first day of school, li ming did not

impress us at all. we started to notice him because he was

always late for classes. we were thus impressed by his

laziness. i came to know him and his situation because we

were roommates and spent much time together: his

mother was seriously ill and sick abed in long-term, his father

left him and his mother mercilessly. hence, it was him that

shouldered the heavy burden of taking care of his sick mother

supporting the whole family. finally, under great pressures, he

balanced his life and study perfectly: he was no longer always

late, took good care of his mother and even won the

scholarship many years in a row.

the experience of li ming can be one of the most convincing

cases of the power of persistence and will. he left a deep

impression and imposed a durable influence on me. indeed,

friend such as him can be regarded as asset and property in

our life. we have rights to choose our own friends

，

but we

should also be prudent and sensible enough to choose friends

who can bring us “positive energy”. (228 words)

【参考译文】

在我的大学生活中，遇到了很多朋友。他们对我的人生产生 了重大

的影响。然而，我印象最深的朋友是我的室友李明。