雅思小作文之流程图+地图写作

流程图

流程图

6

点参考要领：

1.

找到流程图的过程，起点，终点。

2.

找到图上标出的已知动作，如果出现生词，尽量猜测。无 词，用自己的语言。

3.

按照步骤，分段描述，千万不能省略任何一步。

4.

切记

!

加入流畅合理的表示顺序的关联词。

5.

< br>句型以主动为主，搭配被动，以及主语从句

(

例如：

It can be seen from the graph

that…)

。

6.

时态要使用一般现在时。

例文分析

1

：

The diagram shows the stages in the process of making chocolate.(

所有的小作文第一

句话都要用一般现在时。流程图必备三个词：

process

整个过程

;stage

阶段

;step

步骤

)

Chocolate comes from the cacao tree, which is grown in parts of South America, Africa

and Indonesia.(

开头不能一上来就直接介绍

cacao tree,

而是通过主题词

chocolate

引出，

否则显得太唐突

)

【流 程图

特点之一

：介绍过程要使用一般现在时】【流程图

特点之二：

大量使用定语从句，

将有关联的两句 话连接。

】

【流程图

特点之三

：

大量使用被动语态】

The tree produces large red pods which contain white cocoa beans.

【流程图

特点之四

：

使用一些表示顺序的连接词】

when the pods are ripe, they are harvested, the beans are

removed and they are fermented for several days in large wooden boxes.(

三个句 子的

并列：

“

句子

A,

句子

B and

句子

C”

。

)During the fermenting process, the beans turn

brow n.

【流程图

特点之五

：

要适当地添加个别图中没有交代但能从图片中直接读出来的

一些内容，否则可 能达不到字数要求。但是一定要把握尺度，千万不要加上自己的主观

观点，否则会扣分】

Next, the brown beans are spread in the sun to dry. They are then put in large sacks

and transported by train or lorry. After this, the beans are taken to a chocolate factory

where they are roasted in an oven at temperatures of between 250 and 350 degree

Celsius.

After being roasted, the beans are crushed and the outer shell is removed. This part is

not needed for making chocolate. Finally, the inner part of the bean is pressed and

liquid chocolate is produced.

【流程图

特点之六

：一般不需要写总结】

例文分析

2

：

The process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry can be outlined

in seven consecutive steps. First the raw material, clay, which was just below the

surface of soil in certain clay-rich areas has to be dug up by a digger.

Then the lumps of clay are placed on a metal grid in order to break up the big chunks

of clay into much smaller areas, which fall through the metal grid onto a roller, whose

motion further segregates the bits of clay. Sand and water are added to make a

homogenous mixture, which is then either formed in moulds or cut into brick-shaped

pieces by means of a wire cutter.

Those fresh bricks are then kept in a drying oven for at least 24 and a maximum of 48

hours, several dozens if not hundreds of bricks at a time. The dried bricks are then

transferred to a so-called kiln, another type of high temperature oven. First they are

kept at a moderate temperature of 200

℃

-1300

℃

. This process is followed by

cooling down the finished bricks for 48 to 72 hours in a cooling chamber.

Once the bricks have cooled down and have become hard, they get packaged and

delivered to their final destination, be it a building site or storage.

(215 words)

【考官评语】

Band 9

This response fully satisfies the requirements of the task. All key features of each stage

of the process are appropriately and accurately presented. An excellent overview is

given at the beginning of the response and this skilfully incorporates part of the rubric,

changing the grammatical function, to give a brief summary of the whole process. The

message is very easy to read, with seamless cohesion that attracts no attention.

Paragraphing, linking and referencing are all skilfully managed. The language used is

very fluent and sophisticated. A wide range of vocabulary and structures are used with

full flexibility and accuracy. Only rare minor ?slips? can be found and these do not

detract from the high rating.

例文分析

3

：

下面是剑桥

6

的

test 3

考到的流程图，考官给的范文。范文中有两步考官直接就写成