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英语专四系列：作文之范文赏析
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在校大学生结婚
题目：
Getting Married in
College
写作要求
In
2005,
the
Department
of
Education
lifted
the
ban
on
students
getting married
while still in college. And it has been a hot
topic for
people from all walks of
life. What’s your opinion about it
?
Write on Answer Sheet Two a
composition of about 200 words on
the
following topic:
Getting
Married in College
You are
to write in three parts.
In
the ? rst part, state speci? cally what your idea
is.
In
the
second
part,
provide
reasons
to
support
your
opinion
OR
describe your idea.
In the last part, bring what you have
written to a natural conclusion
or a summary.
Marks
will
be
awarded
for
content,
organization,
grammar
and
appropriateness.
Failure
to
follow
the
instructions
may
result
in
a
loss of marks.
审题思路
本题是一道观点选择型的题目，
论述对在校大学生结婚一事的看
法
，可以从以下几方面着手
：
思路<
/p>
1
：赞成在校大学生结婚
，原因可以从法定结婚年龄、大
学生情感需求等方面讲
；
思路
2
：
反对在校大学生结婚
，
原因可以从大学生心理成熟度、
经济条件等方面讲
；
思路
3
：对此持中立态度
，提出判断标准：如果各方面条件成
熟
，可以结婚
，否则还是不要结婚为好
。
思路
4
：先摆
出赞成者和反对者各自的理由
，然后给出自己的
看法
，并进行简单说明（补充更多理由
）
。
范文赏析
Getting Married in College
Since
2005
the
ban
was
lifted
by
the
Department
of
Education
on
college students’ getting married, it
has been a hot topic for students,
parents
and
educators
and
their
attitudes
differ
sharply.
Some
hold
the
positive view and others think differently. In my
view, I believe
they’d better not get
married for the following reasons.
引言部分：作者提出热议话题：在校大学生现在允许结婚了，
并
提出自己的观点：他们最好不要结婚
，用
following
reasons
引
出下文。
First
and
foremost,
though
mostly
adults,
college
students
are
actually immature
psychologically . Their wishes to get married are,
more
often
than
not
,
impulses.
I
admit
that
it
is
a
basic
right
for
those who have reached the appropriate
ages to get married marriage
is
more
solemn
and
requires
more
than
just
reaching
the
age.
In
addition,
the
university
or
college
is
a
place
to
study
instead
of
a
community
to
lead
a
family
life.
Allowing
college
students
to
get
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