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原来读后续写是这么出炉的，太详细了！（详细步骤
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The Sea’s Surprise
Jim and Andy walked along the beach,
looking for an adventure. They joked that
some day they would find a talking fish
or a mermaid or a bottle with a treasure map
inside. So far they had only found
shells and rocks and seaweed. Today though was
different. The boys felt
excited.
Sea crabs scampered
on the rocks. Up one side and down the other. They
were
quick and lively. The tide didn’t
seem to ever wash them away. Then Jim saw a fish.
It was stranded on the beach, just
flopping around.
“Can it
talk?” Andy asked.
“It looks
like any other fish,” Jim said. He picked it up
gently and carried it to
the
water.
“Do you think it will
grant us any wishes?” Andy laughed.
The boys watched as the silver fish
sped off through the water. “No. Maybe next
time.” Jim grinned.
As the two friends walked farther down
the beach they came upon a bottle. It
was green with a cork in the
mouth.
“Our luck will
change. Does it have a map inside or a genie?”
joked Andy.
Andy reached
down and picked up the bottle. He rubbed it.
Nothing happened. He
pulled on the
cork. Nothing happened. He shook it. Nothing
happened.
“ Try the cork
again. I bet the genie is waiting for us to
release him. Or we’ll find a
treasure
map and have a real adventure,” Jim
exclaimed.
Andy tugged again on the
cork. He wiggled it back and forth. He twisted it
around
and around. Finally it popped
out without breaking. Andy shook the bottle.
Nothing
came out. Looking inside he
couldn’t see anything. Jim looked too and shook
his
head. Empty.
“It’s just an old wine bottle,” Jim
complained. He grabbed the bottle and tossed
it back onto the sand.
注意：
1.
所续写短文的词数应为
150
左右；
2.
至少使用
5
个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Para.1: The bottle hit a rock and
shattered into many pieces...
Para.2: Two boys ran after
it...
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第一步：
第一次阅读获取基本信息
1.
归纳基本信息
2.
理清故事情节
< br>Jim
和
Andy
想在海边寻宝
→
挽救了一条搁浅的鱼
→
碰到了一个瓶子
→
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