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英语学习讲义
专项技能保分练
(
二十二
)
短文改错
Test
1
[2019·
陕西省第二次联考
]I
am
a
person
who
always
has
a
smile
in
my face. I don't like to be sad at any
giving point in time. Whenever I came
across any difficulties in my life, I
get worried for a few minute as I am a
human being and I have feelings, too.
But again, I will tell one thing to me
—
life is short and you
shouldn't waste time being sad, so just to cheer
up.
You are the one which needs to face
the trouble. Wherever it is, you have to
try to solve it. Be brave and accept
the challenge with a smile or you will
feel it was such small thing.
答案与解析:
I am a
person who always has a smile
in
my
face. I don't like to
①
on
be
sad
at
any
giving
point
in
time.
Whenever
I
came
across
any
②
given
③
come
d
ifficulties in my life, I get worried for a few
minute
as I am a human
④
minutes
being and
I have feelings, too. But again, I will tell one
thing to
me
⑤
myself
—
life is short and you shouldn't waste time being
sad, so just
to
cheer up.
⑥
You
are the one
which
needs to face the trouble.
Wherever
it is,
⑦
that/who<
/p>
⑧
Whatever
you have
to try to solve it. Be brave and accept the
challenge with a smile
or
you will feel it was such
∧
small
thing.
⑨
and
⑩
a
①
in
改为
on
p>
作地点介词时,
in
意为“在……内”,
on
意为
“在
……上面”,笑容应是展现在脸上,故将
in
改为
on
。
②
giving
改为
given
分析句子成分可知,此处在句中作定语,修
饰限定
point
,
given
在
此为形容词,意为“指定的,特定的”;
at
any
given
point
in
p>
time
意为“在任何特定的时间点”,符合语境,故将
giving
改为
given
。
③
came
< br>改为
come
根据语境可知,
此处在描述个人性格特点,
应
用一般现
在时,故将
came
改为
come
p>
。
④
minut
e
改为
minutes
minute
为可数名词,其前有
a
few
修饰,
应用复数形式,故将
p>
minute
改为
minutes
。
⑤
me
改为
myself
根据
语境可知,此处表示“我会告诉我自己一
件事情”,谓语
wil
l tell
的主语和宾语同指一人,此处的宾语应用反身
代词
myself
,故将
me
改为
myself
。
⑥删除
to
so
表示“因此”时,为连词,后面应是完整的句子,
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to do
不定式不能构成完整的句子,因此应删除
to
,构成祈使句,故删
除
to
。
⑦
which
改为
that/who
<
/p>
此处为定语从句,
先行词为不定代词
on
e
,
修饰不定代词时,引导词只能用
t
hat
,不用
which
,又因为先行
词在这
里指人,也可用
who
,故将<
/p>
which
改为
that/who
。
⑧
Wherev
er
改为
Whatever
wherever
在从句中充当状语,
what
ever
充当主语、宾语或表语,分析句子成分可知,此处缺少
is
的表语,故
将
Wherever<
/p>
改为
Whatever
。
⑨
or
改为
and
“祈使句+
and/
or/otherwise
+陈述句”为固定句
式,当表示动作
顺承时,用
and
连接;表示转折时,用
or/otherwise
连
接。根据语境及句意可知,此处
表示顺承,故将
or
改为
and
。
⑩在
small
前加
a
th
ing
为可数名词,单数形式前应用不定冠词,
such a
small thing
指“如此小的一件事”,故在
smal
l
前加
a
。
Test 2
[2019·
安徽安庆二模
]Last
weekend
I
went
fishing
with
my
cousins
by a river, where
was two miles away from my home by bike. When we
were
about
to
return
for
home,
we
found
one
of
our
bike
lost.
We
were
really
nervous
then.
Asking
about
the
lost
bike,
nobody
told
the
truth
except
me.
And
to my
surprise,
my
parents don't
scold
me.
Instead,
they
said I was a honest boy. I have
benefited great from my family rules. I'm
not the best at schoolwork, but
classmates trust me and nearly everyone is
willing
to
making
friends
with
me.
It
helps
me
know
better
about
“
Honesty is the best
policy
”.
答案与解析:
Last
weekend
I
went
fishing
with
my
cousins
by
a
river,
where
①
which
was two
miles away from my home by bike. When we were
about to return
for
home, we
found one of our
bike
lost. We were really
nervous then.
②
③
b
ikes
Asking
about the lost bike, nobody told the
truth except me.
And
④
Asked
⑤
But/Yet
to
my
surprise,
my
parents
don't
scold
me.
Instead,
they
said
I
was
⑥
didn't
a
honest boy. I have
benefited
great
from my family rules. I'm
⑦<
/p>
an
⑧
greatly
< br>not
the
best
at
schoolwork,
but
∧
classmates
trust
me
and
nearly
⑨
my
everyone is
willing to
making
friends with me. It helps
me know better
⑩
make
about
“
Honesty is the best
policy
”.
①
where
改为
which
此处引导非限制性定语从句,先行词是
a
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river
,关系词在从句中作主语,故将
where
改为<
/p>
which
。
②删除
for
home
为副词时,不与任何介词连用,故删除
for
。
③
bike
p>
改为
bikes
“
one of
+可数名词复数形式”
为固定搭配,
意
为“……中的一个”,故将
bike
改为
bikes
。
④
Asking
改
为
Asked
此处为分词作状语,<
/p>
ask
与其逻辑主语
we
之间为被动关系,应用过去分词形式,表示被问,故将
Asking
改为
Asked
。
p>
⑤
And
改为
Bu
t/Yet
句意为:但是令我吃惊的是,我的父母没有
批评我,而是说我是个诚实的孩子。根据句意可知,此处前后为转折
关
系,表示“但是
/
然而”,故将
And
改为
But/Yet
。
⑥
don't
改为
didn't
根据时间状语
Last weekend
可知,
此处表示发
生在过去的动作,应用一般过去时,故将<
/p>
don't
改为
didn't
。
⑦
a
改为
an
honest
p>
中的字母
h
不发音,
该词的发音以元音音素开
头,其前有不定冠词时,应用
an<
/p>
,故将
a
改为
a
n
。
⑧
gr
eat
改为
greatly
此处修饰动词
benefited
,
应用副词,
故将
great
改为
greatly
。
⑨在
classmates
前加
< br>my
此处指“我的同学们”,应为特指,故
在
classmates
前加
my
。
⑩
making
改为
make
be willing to do sth.
为固定搭配,<
/p>
意为“乐意
做某事”,故将
making
改为
make
。
Test 3
[2019·
p>
湖南省师大附中月考五
]Recently,
a
lot
of
students
in
our
school has fallen ill due to the bad
weather. I notice they don't ask doctors
for help but tried medicines by
themselves in order to save time. Personally,
I don't agree with them. First, it is
not easier for us students to make a wise
choose of medicines to cure illness.
For example, when having a cold, most
of us prefer to take antibiotics, which
in fact is not necessary at most cases.
And medicines have side effect, which
may pose a threat to us because we
don't have the enough knowledge of
them. From I stand, I strongly suggest
we talk to the doctor after taking
medicines. Because stay healthy is more
important than anything else. As a
saying goes, an ounce of prevention is
worth a pound of cure.
答案与解析:
Recently,
a lot of students in our school
has
fallen ill due to the
①
have
bad weather.
I notice they don't ask doctors for help but
tried
medicines
②
try
by
themselves in order
to
save time.
Personally,
I
don't
agree
with
them.
First,
it
is
not
easier
for
us
students
to
make
a
wise
choose
of
③
e
asy
④
choice
medicin
es
to
cure
illness.
For
example,
when
having
a
cold,
most
of
us
好好努力
梦想终会实现
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