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2021
高考英语读后续写专题(四)
一:典题技法指导
It was a
rainy November morning. Overcome with anger, I
knew if I didn't leave the house
soon I
would lose my temper with my husband, Joe. As rain
came down in sheets, Joe offered to
take me to work. I struggled into my
jacket, seized my bag and teaching plans and
ignored him.
He insisted and reached
for his boots. I looked at the piles of newspapers
and the dirty dishes
still on the
table.
you have enough to do? I can
take care of myself.
even kissing him
good-bye. Joe shouted after me not to take the
shortcut(
捷径
)
Joe
and I had been eagerly looking forward to our
retirement when a heart attack that past
spring forced him to leave his job
earlier than we had planned. As the medical bills
mounted we
realized
I
would
have
to
continue
working
full-time
while
Joe
stayed
home
and
took
over
the
housework.
The new arrangement was a disaster.
Exhausted after a day of full work, all I wanted
was a
hot
homecooked
meal
and
a
good
night's
sleep.
However,
what
greeted
me
at
the
table
was
a
microwave
package. Sometimes he would serve
oatmeal(
燕麦
) for several
nights in a row. One
night when I
dragged myself to bed, I was terrified to discover
Joe had turned our white sheets
blue.
He told me he had found out how to save on water,
soap and electricity. He patted his blue
trousers and announced proudly washing
everything together was just the secret.
Ten minutes later, ignoring Joe's
warning I turned off the main
route(
道路
). I thought it
hadn't
rained enough to flood the road,
but as I rounded the corner, water rushed across
my path. After a
few feet, the car got
stuck. I opened the door and water poured in. I
hurriedly closed the door. I
couldn't
risk walking in this. Almost 20 minutes passed.
The car began to shake. I got frightened to
death when I heard three long
honks(
喇叭声
).
注意:
1.
所续写短文的词数应为
150
左右;
2.
应使
5
个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.
续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.
续写完成后
,
请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1: Looking over my shoulder,
I stared into the flashing lights of a truck.
Paragraph 2: I screamed that I couldn't
make it.
写作思路
1.
确定主题:大主题是老夫老妻的爱情故事。以第一人称的视角进行叙述。故事讲的
是
我对丈夫的一些生活琐事的误解,
通过上班遇险,丈夫奋力抢救,误解得以消除,爱意涌
上心头。
2.
时空变化:
地点是在转弯处的一条被
水淹没的小路上
(...rounded
the
corner,
water
rushed across my
path)
。丈夫的卡车在车子的后面
(Looking
over my shoulder, I stared into the
flashing
lights
of
a
truck.
)
。时间是上午上班路上。
(It
was
a
rainy
November
morning....Joe
offered to take me to work. )
3.
续写难点:情节安排相对较复杂,尤其是对丈夫如何营救
我的描写,涉及较多的动
作描写。
(
问
题解决类续写,要注意细节须紧扣主题,情节须合情合理,须反映解决问题的
能力。
p>
)
此外,通过对险境的描写,突出丈夫的形象,为消除误解,体会
真爱作铺垫。
提纲
Paragraph 1: Looking over my shoulder,
I stared into the flashing lights of a truck.
1. A familiar figure leaped out, rushed
towards me and waded into the water.
2.
Thank goodness, it was Joe who came to my rescue.
3. However, the water was running so
rapidly that he had to go back.
4. Frightened and a little angry, I
could hardly help shedding tears.
5.
How I wished that my husband were like a superman
who could save me from disaster.
6.
But, after a while, it turned out that Joe
returned with one end of a rope in his hand and
the
other end tied to the truck.
7. He struggled to throw the rope to me
and shouted,
“
Catch! Open
the door!
”
Paragraph 2: I screamed that I couldn't
make it.
1.
At
that
moment,
the
sound
of
the
raging
water
outside
grew
louder,
and
the
car
rocked
more
violently.
2. Worse still, the water
came up to Joe
’
water.
s waist and he almost lost his footing
in the
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