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(2014
陕西
)
My father took me out
camping for the first time when I was seven. He
wanted
teach me
about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all
come along with bows and arrows
for hunting.
One evening at
sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue.
Just then a bird was flying
over us. My uncles
immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the
birds. Neither of the
arrows hit the target. Suddenly the
arrows was flying down at us from the
sky
—
they were
looked like rain! We ran to
escape but fortunately no one was injured.
That day I
didn
’
t learn much about
animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a
important
lesson about gravity!
Wanted
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having;
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immediately
on-at;
neither
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none
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（
2013
全国
I
）
I
hardly remember my grandmother. She used to
holding me on her knees
and sing old songs. I was only four
when she passes away. She is just a distant memory
for
me now.
I remember my grandfather
very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a
beard that
turned from black toward gray over the
years. He had a deep voice, which set himself
apart
from
others in our small town, he was strong and
powerful. In a fact, he even scared my
classmates away during they
came over to play or do homework with me. However,
he was
the
gentlest man I have never known.
holding-hold
passed-pass
much-well/clearly
shoulder
—
shoulders
toward
—
to/into
himself-him
he
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fact
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a
during-when
never-ever
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全国
II)
The book I’m reading of talks about
afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have
started in the
early 1800’s. Have tea in the late afternoon
provides a bridge between lu
nch and
dinner, that
might not be served until 8 o’clock at night. This
custom soon becomes another meal
of day. Interesting, it had
a connection by the British
porcelain(
瓷器
) industry. Tea
in China was
traditionally drank from cups without
handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there
was a crying
need for good cup with handles to suit
British habits. This made for the grow in the
porcelain
industry.
去掉
of
have-having
that-which
becomes-became
day
前加
the
Interesting-interestingly
by-with/to
drank-drink
cup-
cups
grow-growth
(2013
陕西
) My
grandfather and I enjoy fishing.
One Sunday morning we go
fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and
headed for the lake.
As soon as we arrived, so we dropped
the lines into the water. Before waiting for about
half an
hour, I
was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give
up, and my grandfather told me to wait
a little longer. Finally,
there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was
caught . Within the next
few minute, my grandfather also caught
a fish. Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake
and
barbecued
the fish. It was delicious.
Go-went
ours-our
去掉
so
Before-After
impatiently-impatient
And-but
were-was
fish
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a
minute-minutes
Felt-Feeling
(2013
辽宁
) Mr.
Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he
spends too much time with
his work. With little sleep and hardly
any break, so he works from morning till night.
Hard work
have
made him very ill.
―
He has
ruined his healthy. We are worried about
him.
‖
That is which
other teachers
say. Yesterday afternoon. I paid visit to Mr.
Johnson. I was eager to see him, but
outside her room I stopped.
I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the
room. I saw him
lying in bed, looking at some of the
picture we had taken together. I understood that
he missed us