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高考冲刺:短文改错
题型介绍
高考英语短文改错历来是考
生的一个难点,因为它考查的是考生的综合语言运用能力,
考查内容涵盖英语语言的各个
层面。短文改错分为两种形式:含有
10
处错误,每句中最多<
/p>
有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词增加、
删除或修改;对标有题号
的每一行做出判断,
或增
加,或删除,或修改,全文共有
9
处错误,有一行是对的。
解题技巧
改错步骤
1.
通读全文,了解短文大意。把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,尤其是有的行文逻
辑
方面的错误在看单句时难以发现错误(比如前文用
Mike
,后
文代词用
she
等)。在通读
全文时把
一些容易的错误先改好,再进行分句改错。
2.
分句阅读,逐行找错。在完成第一步后,要进行逐行逐句的改错。这时要从文中的
< br>词法、
句法和语篇角度着重分析和特别注意。
注意不能改
变句子的原意,
也不能改掉原来正
确的词语而换成了另一种正确
的表达形式,如某些定语从句中
that
与
which
的互换是不给
分的。
3.
最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉
是否还有不妥之处,最终
形成定稿。
注意严格按照例题要求和解
题说明,
用规定的符号去改,
不要用文字去说明或者
用箭头表示,更不能在原题中乱画。
答题时可以从以下几点考虑:
1.
句中的时态、主谓、代词一致吗
2.
句中的谓语完整吗
3.
习惯用法固定搭配正确吗
4.
冠词、形容词、副词及关系词得当吗
5.
该用被动语态吗
6.
从句的连接词对了吗
7.
从句中的谓语完整吗
真题讲解
(一)
Two years
before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a
car. Unfortunate, I
had
an
accident
and
hit
another
car,
and
I
needed
to
stay
in
a
hospital
for
at
least
two
week.
I
called
my
parents,
so
I
did
not
tell
them
what
had
happened.
I
knew
that
they
will
be
worried
about
myself
because
I
was
so
farther
away,
and
that
my
mother
would
not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them
interested stories and how I
was
enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I
still think that it was the
right thing
to do. (
浙江
)
(二)
Thank you for the lovely day we have
with you. It was so kind for you to let
us
bring
Anne’s
friend,
Gina.
U
nfortunate,
the
only
problem
was
the
journey
home.
There had been a terrible accident on
the highway and, for a result, there was a
long
line
of
traffic
for
at
least
six
mile.
In
the
end,
we
drove
to
a
service
station
and waited there unless the road was
clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got
knocked over as car drove out far too
quickly from behind a lorry. They finally
dropped Gina off at her parents’ and
made our own way to home.
(辽宁
)
◆
(三)
Dear Editor,
I’
m writing to tell you
opinion about water saving.
Water is
important. We, as well as animal, cannot live
without water and neither agriculture
or industry can go
without it. Yet it seemed
water is becoming less and less.
Many countries
in the world find we don
’
t
have enough water.
To deal with a problem, I
think, we should first go all
out to plant trees though
trees will help save water. Next, no
drinking water
should be left running. Third, we should find
ways to reuse the water using in
washing, especially bath
water for which is quite a
lot, and that will save much water.
Sincerely,
Li
Hua
(四)
Dear Mom,
Mother
’
s Day is coming.
I
’
m sorry that I am abroad
and
can
’
t send your flowers, so
I
’
m writing to you.
Mom, I know I have
never expressed my thank to you
before. But on today, at
this special time, I just want to tell
you loudly: I love you, Mom! Thank you
so much by not
only giving me life, but also teach me
how to be a good
person. Thank you for all you had done
for me. Mom, though
I
may
often
say
it,
I
do
love
you.
Nobody
can
take
73,_________
part in my heart. Whenever I am, I will
always love you.
Hope you good health and much
happiness every day!
Your
little girl,
your