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专题


12


读后续写之各地联考汇编附答案(第


50-80


篇)




51.



阅 读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。



From


the


first


day


he


entered


my


classroom,


Willard


P.


Frank


existed


in


his


own


world,


shutting out his classmates and me. My attempts at building a friendly relationship with him were


met with complete indifference. I could see that his classmates fared no better. Willard was strictly


a loner who seemed to have no desire or need to break his silence




Shortly after the Thanksgiving holiday, we received word of the annual Christmas collection


of money for the less fortunate people in our school district.


“Ch


ristmas


is


a


season


of


giving



”I


told


my


students.



“There


are


a


few


students


in


the


school who might not have a happy holiday season. By contributing to our Christmas collection,


you


will


help


buy


food,


clothing


and


toys


for


these


needy


people.


We


will


start


the


collection


tomorrow.”



When


I


called


for


the


contributions


the


next


day,


I


discovered


that


almost


everyone


had


forgotten


except


for


Willard


P.


Frank.


The


boy


dug


deep


into


his


pants


pockets


as


he


walked


slowly to my desk. Carefully, he dropped two quarters into the small container.


“I don’t need milk for lunch



” he


mumbled. For a moment, just a moment, he smiled. Then


he turned and walked back to his desk.


That night, after school, I took our few contributions to the school principal. I couldn’t help



sharing the incident that had taken place.


“I may be wrong, but I believe Willard might be getting ready to become a part of the world


around him



” I told the principal.



“Yes.” he nodded.“And we might do well to have him


share a bit of his world with us. I just


received


a


list


of


the


poor


families


in


our


school


who


most


need


help


through


the


Christmas


collection. Here, take a look at it.”



As I gazed down to read, I discovered Willard P. Frank and his family were the top names on


the list. Seeing this, I decided to do something for him




注意:



1


. 所续写短文的词数应为


150


左右;



2


.应使用


5


个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;



3

.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;



4


.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。



Paragraph 1




On



that



Sunday, I



paid



a



visit



to



Willard



s



family


.______________________________


__________________________________________________ ______________________


________________ __________________________________________________ ______


Paragraph 2:



The



next



day, I



had



a



special



class



for



Willard


.__________________________________

________________________________________________ ________________________


______________ __________________________________________________ ________


One possible version




Paragraph 1





On



that



Sunday, I



paid



a



visit



to



Willard



s



family


. On entering his house, I was surprised to


find a barely empty room with only a broken bed and a dirty second hand sofa. Willard told me


that his mother died a few years ago and that his father was missed, leaving him to live with a sick


grandma.


When


asked


why


he


had


given


the


two


quarters,__Willard


mumbled,


__“There


are


people poorer than me, so I just want to do some help by contributing


my milk money.” Hearing


his words, I couldn’t help bursting into tears. I thought I should help him break his silence.



Paragraph 2




The



next



day, I



had



a



special



class



for



Willard


. I shared his story with the whole class and


said



“Now, on behalf of the people in need, I should say thank you Willard, you are great



”.


After a silence, all the students clapped, saying



“Wil


lard, you are great! Willard, you are great




and


They


walked


slowly


to


him


and


hugged


him


tightly.


A


friend


relationship


was


built


and


Willard’s


silence was broken by a smile on his face.




52.


阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的 故事。



It was 8 a



m. Kathy, a 25-


year-


old nurse, had just finished a 12-


hour night shifts at a hospital.


She


was


tired,


but


glad


to


be


sailing


along


highway


to


where


she


lived.


Although


the


local


government had posted a snow alert(


预警


), the calm grey sky convinced Kathy the drive would be


safe. “I figured I’d be in bed in an hour



” she says.



Snow began when she was halfway home. Listening to the radio, Kathy learned the highway


was closed because a tractor had slid off the road. She texted some friends and her mom, and tried


not to sleep as she waited




After a couple of hours, however, conditions worsened. Strong winds began rocking Kathy’s


car. She couldn’t see


anything


outside, and snow was drifting up her doors. It was, she says,



“a


total whiteout and rows of cars and trucks.”



Late in the afternoon a police officer came and asked if she was in any difficulty. She said


she


was


fine.


She


asked


the


police


officer


if


there


was


any


way


to


get


past


the


trucks.



“No,


ma’am



” he answered.



“You’re not going anywhere.”



Once as it got dark, Kathy began to worry. She texted his brother Cris, telling him to drive


snowmobiling buddy(


雪地汽车


) to get to the highway and find her.


As


Cris


rode


slowly


alongside


the


rows


of


cars


and


trucks,


people


would


roll


down


their


windows and ask for help.



“I was the first person they’d seen in six hours.”He


explained he was


picking up his sister. He told them,



“Nobody’s coming and I can’t take you.”



Near 10 p



m. Cris reached Kathy. He directed Kathy to pull her car onto the shoulder and


asked her to get into his snowmobiling buddy.


As they headed for home, the fun started. About five kilometres into the journey, Cris made a


mistake. What he thought was a shallow ditch(


浅沟


) turned out to be a deep trough(


水槽


). Instead


of coming out the other side, they just kept going down. They were trapped. And feathery snow


was over their heads.


注意:



1


. 所续写短文的词数应为


150


左右;



2


.应使用


5


个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;



3

.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;



4


.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。



Paragraph 1




At



that



moment, they



had



to



take



action



and



get



out


.


____________ __________________________________________________ __________


____________________________ ____________________________________________


Paragraph 2




When



Kathy



arrived



at



her



home, her



mother



was



waiting



for



her


.__________________

< p>
____________________________________________ ____________________________


One possible version




Paragraph 1




At



that



moment, they



had



to



take



action



and



get



out


. They shouted at the top of their voice,


but


no


one


could


hear


them.


They


began__to__worry



and


were


convinced


they


had


to


stay


in


their snowmobiling__buddy for the night. Suddenly, a good idea occurred to Kathy. She took off


one of her clothes and burned it. Seeing the fire, people ran over and managed to pull__her__car


out with all their efforts, making Cris ashamed for his refusal to others.


Paragraph 2




When



Kathy



arrived



at



her



home, her



mother



was



waiting



for



her


. She asked Kathy what had


happened. Kathy explained



“I made a terrible


mistake


. But for others’ help, I couldn’t have been


home


for


the


night.”When


asked


what


she


would


do


when


someone


had


difficulty,__Kathy


answered


immediately


that


she


would


do


anything


to


help


others


because


today’s


experience


turned__out to be a great lesson for her.





53.


阅读下面短文,根据所给情节 进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。



To be honest, sometimes, I hate it when I start thinking about money because it brings me


down and drives me sad. When I was younger, I always wondered why money was so important.


There wasn’t anything I needed. It’s good to be a kid, since he or she doesn’t have to worry about


responsibilities


. But as everyone get older, of course that changes. I work almost every day, but it’s


still not enough. That’s what is discouraging—it’s never enough.



Right now I have to sacrifice(


牺牲


) the money I make. I put my school on hold so that I can


pay for my girlfriend’s school fee and everything else. I’m very supportive in everything I do, and


she


is


also


very


supportive.


We


warm


each


other


up.


Hoping


she


really


gets


everything


right,


because we only have each other. I find that hope is my inspiration and that everything will work


out however hard it gets. Even though I find that life is hard, it never stops me from helping others,


especially those who are less fortunate. While I might be going through hard times myself, there


are those out there who could be going through even harder times.


Last night, on my way home I stopped by to buy some burgers in a fast food restaurant. A


homeless man approached me and asked



“Do you have any


bottles lying around



” I knew he


would recycle them for a few cents, but I didn’t have any. I said



“Sorry, I don’t.” And again he


asked



“Can you spare some change



” I smiled and said



“Sorry, I can’t.”He was very


polite. He


smiled back and said



“OK,


thank you



” Even though he didn’t have anything, he was still


in good


spirits. Just from the way he spoke, I could tell he was fine.


注意:



1


. 所续写短文的词数应为


150


左右;



2


.应使用


5


个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;



3

.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;



4


.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。



Paragraph 1




I



went



in



and



ate



my



meal, but



in



my



head



I



wondered



if





the



homeless



man



was



hungry


.


_________ __________________________________________________ _____________


Paragraph 2:



No



matter



how



hard



life



is, there



are



always



ways



to



handle



it


._____________________


__________________________________________ ______________________________


One possible version




Paragraph 1:



I



went



in



and



ate



my



meal, but



in



my



head



I



wondered



if



the



homeless



man



was



hungry


. After


I finished my meal I decided to order another one for him. I didn’t know if he was still around, but


I thought my helping would warm him up. They handed me the hot chocolate first and as I waited


for my burger, I noticed the homeless man standing b


eside me. I asked,



“Are you hungry? This


hot


chocolate


is



for


you


and


there’s


a


burger


coming


up


for


you


too.”


He


replied


politely,__



Thank__you


. That’s very kind of you.”



Paragraph 2:



No



matter



how



hard



life



is, there



are



always



ways



to



handle



it


. And


it’s not always through


money


. It’s through love. If you love someone, you will help him and give him what he needs. The


love you give today might be forgotten tomorrow. But it doesn’t matter. Love everybody because


that’s the greatest thing you can give


and it is the start of your life trip.





54.


阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故 事。



It was a warm and sunny morning at the Central Park Zoo. Abigail and her classmates were


abuzz


with


excitement


as


their


school


bus


entered


the


zoo


park


lot.


Today,


Abigail’s


class


was


going on a field trip to the zoo to learn more about the animals and their natural habitats.


“Before you leave the bus, please make sure you have your


buddy



” Mrs. Brown announced.


To make sure no one got lost


in the zoo, each student had a buddy (companion/friend). Abigail’s


buddy


was


named


Derrick.


Derrick


loves


animals


and


was


also


excited


to


go


to


the


zoo.


But


sometimes, Derrick does not follow the rules and gets in trouble. Abigail hoped that today, Derrick


would follow the rules so they would not get in trouble.


While the rest of the students got off the bus, Abigail and Derrick quickly ran off to explore.


They found the exhibits for many different kinds of animals and learned a lot about their natural


habitats. They saw the elephants playing and they saw giraffes eating. They saw the polar bears


sleeping and the monkeys leaping. Abigail asked Derrick




“Derrick, what is your favorite animal





“I think I like chimpanzees best. They


have a lot of energy, just like me! What animal do you


like, Abigail





“I love polar bears! I think their lifestyle in the Arctic is very interesting.”



A few hours later, Abigail and Derrick started to feel hungry. They made their way back to


the


zoo


entrance


to


eat


lunch


at


the


Rainforest


Cafe.


The


Rainforest


Cafe


is


both


Abigail


and


Derrick’s favorite


restaurant because there is an aquarium inside. The restaurant is also famous for


its chocolate cake, which Abigail ordered for dessert after they had finished their lunch.


As Abigail was finishing her cake, Derrick excused himself to go to the restroom. About ten


minutes later, a sudden alarm began to go off and a voice came over the loudspeaker.


“Attention! Someone has opened the chimpanzee exhibit! Some chimpanzees have escaped





People were screaming and starting to run. Abigail looked for Derrick, but he was nowhere to


be found.


注意:



1


. 所续写短文的词数应为


150


左右;



2


.应使用


5


个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;



3

.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;



4


.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。



Paragraph 1




As



more



and



more



people



ran



out



of



the



zoo, Abigail



began



to



think


________________

< p>
____________________________________________ ____________________________


Paragraph 2




As



Abigail



raced



up



the



path



to



the



animal



exhibits, she



was



stopped


________________


__________________________________________ ______________________________


One possible version




Paragraph 1




As



more



and



more



people



ran



out



of



the



zoo,


Abigail



began



to



think



where


her


buddy,_Derrick


could


be.


She


got


up


from


the


table


quickly


and


circled


back


to


the


restrooms,


calling Derrick’s name. There was no answer, so


Abigail left the restaurant. As she looked around


the


zoo


grounds,


she


remembered


that


Derrick


had


a


lot


of


energy


and


had


told


her


that


chimpanzees


were


his


favorite


animals.


Derrick


wouldn’t


have


left


the


restaurant


to


release


the


chimpanzees



would he? Oh no! Abigail was sure she knew where Derrick had gone.


Paragraph 2




As



Abigail



raced



up



the



path



to



the



animal



exhibits, she



was



stopped


in her tracks by none


other than Derrick himself, with two chimpanzees cradled in his arms. He offered a small, guilty


smile.



“I didn’t mean to let them escape





he began.



“I just wanted to take them out to play


for a little while! I took the key from a zookeeper who wasn’t looking. But then, the lock broke


and...”



Behind Abigail, Mrs. Brown had begun to walk up the path and saw Derrick holding the


animals with excitement. It was clear from her stern expression that he was in big trouble because


he didn’t


follow the rules








55.


阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的 故事。



There was a guy who fell in love with a girl. This romantic guy folded(


折叠


) 1



000 pieces of


paper cranes(


千纸鹤


) as a gift to his girl. Although at that time his future didn’t seem too bright,


they were happy together. Until one day, his girl told him she was going to Paris and would never


come back. She told him that she can’t see any future of them. So they’d better go their own ways.


Heart-


broken, the guy agreed.



When he regained his confidence,


he worked hard day and night. “You never fail until you


stop trying



” he always told himself,



“I must make it in life



” Finally this guy


set up his own


company.


On a rainy day, while this guy was driving, he saw an elderly couple sharing an umbrella in


the rain walking to some place. It didn’t take him long to realize they were his former girlfriend’s


parents. He drove slowly beside the couple, wanting them to discover him in his expensive car. He


wanted them to know that he wasn’t


the same anymore and he had his own company, car, etc.


He had made it in life.


Before the guy can realize, the couple was walking towards a cemetery(


墓地


), and he got out


of his car and followed them and he saw his former girlfriend, a photograph of her smiling sweetly


as ever at him from her tombstone(


墓碑


) and he saw his precious paper cranes in a bottle placed


beside her tomb.


Her parents saw him. He walked over and asked them why this had happened




They explained. She did not leave for France at all. She was diagnosed with cancer. In her


heart, she had believed that he would make it someday, but she did not want her illness to be his


obstacle(


累 赘


)




Therefore she had chosen to leave him.


She asked her parents to leave his paper cranes by her side. If one day the fate brings him


here, he could take some back home. The guy just wept.


注意:



1


. 所续写短文的词数应为


150


左右;



2


.应使用


5


个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;



3

.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;



4


.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。



Paragraph 1




The



elderly



couple



walked



towards



him, telling



him



the



whole



story


._________________


___________________________________________ _____________________________


Paragraph 2




After



going



back



home, the



guy



wanted



to



do



something



special


.___________________


_______________________________________ _________________________________


One possible version




Paragraph 1




The



elderly



couple



walked



towards



him, telling



him



the



whole



story


. They told him the girl


was diagnosed with cancer. She left him in order not to depress him, but her love with him was the


same as before. Every time she missed him, she would fold some paper cranes in memory of their


sweet


day.


Before


the day


of


her


death,


she


told her


parents


to


place


her


precious paper


cranes


beside


her


tomb


so


that


her


beloved


boy


could


company


her


forever.


Hearing


what


her


parents



said, the guy was heart-


broken. He seemed to understand what he should do.


Paragraph 2




After



going



back



home, the



guy



wanted



to



do



something



special


. He regained his confidence


and followed


his girl friend’s actions. Every day, he went to her tomb and folded a paper crane for


her, telling her what had happened in his daily life. He even set up a love-


fund, wanting to help


more people who suffered from this way, he cherished their memorable days.




56.


阅 读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。



A Mother’s Love



My mom only had


one eye. I hated her. She was such an embarrassment



She cooked for


students and teachers to support the family.


There was one day during elementary school when my mom came over to say hello to me. I


was so embarrassed.


How could she do this to me? I ignored her, threw her a hateful look and ran out. The next


day at school one of my classmates said,



“Your mom only has one eye





I wanted to bury myself. I also wanted my mom to just disappear. I confronted her that day


and said,“If you’re only going to make me a laughing stock, why don’t you just


die





My


mom


did


not


respond.


I


didn’t


even


stop


to


thi


nk


for


a


second


about


what


I


had


said,


because I was full of anger. I took no notice of her feelings at all.


I wanted to be out of that house, and have nothing to do with her. So I studied really hard,


and got a chance to go abroad for further education.


Then, I got married. I bought a house of my own. I had kids of my own. I was happy with my


life, my kids and the comforts. Then one day, my mother came to visit me. She hadn’t seen me in


years and she didn’t even meet her grandchildren.



When she stood by the door, my children laughed at her, and I shouted at her for coming over


uninvited.


I


screamed


at


her,



“How


dare


you


come


to


my


house


and


scare


my


children!


GET


OUT OF HERE! NOW







And


to


this,


my


mother


quietly


answered,“Oh,


I’m


so


sorry.


I


may


have


got


ten


the


wrong


address.” and she was soon out of sight.



One day, a letter regarding a school reunion came to my house. So I lied to my wife that I


was going on a business trip. After the reunion, I went to the old house just out of curiosity.


My neighbors said that she died. I did not shed a single tear. They handed me a letter that she


had wanted me to have.


注意:



1


. 所续写短文的词数应为


150


左右;



2


.应使用


5


个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;



3

.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;



4


.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。



Paragraph 1




My



dearest



son




I



think



of



you



all



the



time



and



I



m



sorry



that


_________________________________


_____ __________________________________________________ _________________


_____________________ __________________________________________________ _


Paragraph 2




You



see, when



you



were



very



little



_________________________________ __________


____________________________ ____________________________________________

< p>
____________________________________________ ____________________________


With



all



my



love



to



you


.


Your



mother



One possible version




Paragraph 1




My



dearest



son




I



think



of



you



all



the



time



and



I



m



sorry



that


I came to your house and scared your children. I


had never thought my visit would bring so much unhappiness to you. However, I was really so


happy when I heard you were coming for the reunion



I missed you day and night. But I may not


be able to even get out of bed to see you. I’m terribly sorry that I was a constant


embarrassment to


you when you were growing up.


Paragraph 2




You



see, when



you



were



very



little



you got into a terrible accident



as a result of which you


lost one of your precious a mother



I couldn’t stand watching you having to grow up with


just one eye



It was too much for you



a young soul to endure such a cruel fact and a possible


future full of challenges. So I gave you mine.I was so proud of my son who was seeing a whole


new world for me, in my place, with that eye.


With



all



my



love



to



you


.


Your



mother






57.


阅 读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。



Though born into a rich family, by twenty, Hilary had spent all the money. He then had some


trouble


with


the


bank


and


was


put


in


prison.


He


escaped


and


ran


to


Australia,


where


he


could


either die or work, which gave him no pleasure. Then he remembered that he had an aunt




She was his father’s only sister, but his father used to


say she brought no glory to the family.


It seemed that his aunt had failed to marry a nobleman. Instead, she had chosen a businessman as


her husband. So her brother considered her dead. Later on, her husband died and left her a lot of


money; but that did not bring her back to life


in her brother’s opinion.



Hilary discovered his aunt’s address. Fortunately she remained faithful and honest to him. So


Hilary soon moved into her house and lived comfortably.


Soon his aunt was deadly ill. Hilary was very worried. Fate had found a home for him, and


was now going to throw him out of it. There was only one thing that could save him: her will




“Will



”she


said



“Yes,


I


have


made


one.


That


was


when


I


was


a


girl


and


had


not


much


money. I left all my money to some religio


us people.”



“Didn’t you make another will when you were married.” Hilary asked.



“No



”she said in a low voice,



“There was no need. When I finally had a lot of money I


found I had no relations.”



On the next day he went to the public library and examined a book of law. It told him what


he already believed. When a woman is married, an earlier will loses its value. A new will must be


made. If no new will is made, the money goes to the nearest relation. Hilary knew that he was his


aunt’s only relation. His futu


re was safe.


After


a


few


months,


Hilary’s


problems


became


serious.


He


badly


needed


money.


He


had


expensive tastes, and owed a lot of money to shopkeepers. They trusted him because his aunt was


rich; but the debt was terrible.


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1


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2


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4


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Paragraph 1




Unfortunately



his



aunt



did



not



want



to



discuss



money



matters



at



all


._________________


_____________________________________________ ___________________________


Paragraph 2




One



night, his



aunt



asked



him



to



prepare



the



medicine



for



her


.______________________ < /p>


________________________________________ ________________________________


One possible version




Paragraph 1




Unfortunately



his



aunt



did



not



want



to



discuss



money



matters



at



all


. Hilary began to wonder


about a new problem. Should it be better for his aunt to die now so that he could get the money to


pay off his debts? Just then, his aunt told him that she was going to send for her lawyer. Worried


that his aunt might leave all her money to someone else in her new will, he made a quick decision


to put her life to an end.


Paragraph 2




One



night,


his



aunt



asked



him



to



prepare



the



medicine



for



her


.


Realizing


it


was


a


good


chance to carry out his plan, Hilary doubled the amount of the medicine, which would surely put


his aunt to sleep forever. Actually his aunt was so well aware of his intention that she explained


that if she could live until tomorrow, she would make a new will in his favor and that if she died


that night, he would get nothing. Hearing this, Hilary attempted to stop her drinking the medicine,


but it was too late.





58.


阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事 。



I encountered God the summer I was five. My father had finally grown too sick to get out of


bed, so the heat and nervous tension in the air inside the house made it impossible to breathe. I


would escape by squeezing under the front porch. All manner of creatures lived there, but I mostly


ignored them, with one exception



a little frog who, every time I crawled under the porch, stared


at me with great, golden eyes.


In late June, the frog finally hopped (


跳跃


) toward my arm and stared at me, demanding eye


contact. Once he had my attention, he opened his wide mo


uth and said, “Hello, Sophie.”



I should have been shocked, but for some reason, I wasn’t. Perhaps at five years old, I was


more receptive to something against the laws of nature. At any rate, I was not shocked that a frog


could speak. I had a more pressing question.


“How do you know my name





The frog blinked slowly. “I know everything. I am God.”



I spoke,“You can’t be God. You’re too small.”



He extended a long, webbed finger and pointed to the edge of


the porch’s shadow—


to the


spot where my mother had tried to grow flowers there for years. She had stopped trying when my


father’s condition worsened.



“Look there



” commanded the frog, and I stared as a beautiful white flower blossomed as if


stretching its limbs after a long sleep. In my five years, I had never seen anything so splendid.


God and I became good friends that summer. I spent every day under the porch, talking to


him.


Sometimes I asked God questions. Sometimes he answered. Once, I asked him where Heaven


was.


“Heaven



”he said, “is where I live.”



In Au


gust, my father’s


illness


had progressed to the point that I was sent to my aunt’s house


in


Virginia.


I


told


God


I


would


be


back


soon,


and


then


waited


in


Virginia


for


my


father


to


get


better.


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3

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4


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Paragraph 1




Six



months



later, I



came



back



home



for



my



father



s


funeral


._________________ ______


________________________________ ________________________________________

________________________________________________ ________________________


Paragraph 2




Suddenly, an



idea



crossed



my



mind



that



my



father



might



travel



to



Heaven


.____________

< br>_______________________________________________ _________________________


One possible version




Paragraph 1




Six



months



later,


I



came



back



home



for



my



father



s


funeral


.


Death


is


very


confusing


for


a


child. I didn’t understand what it meant to die; all I knew was that


my father had been lying in bed


and receiving medical treatment for his


illness when


I


left, but now when I came


back, he was


n


owhere to be found. He must be hiding somewhere, I was sure; people couldn’t just disappear,


especially without saying goodbye. Though my mother


told me he had “passed on”




I thought she


meant he’d traveled to another town.



Paragraph 2




Suddenly,


an



idea



crossed



my



mind



that



my



father



might



travel



to



Heaven


.


I


knew


exactly


how to find my father. I ran to the front porch. However, I had grown during those six months in


Virginia,


and


I


could


no


longer


squeeze


into


the


porch’s



shadow.


I


sat


in


front


of


the


porch


all


afternoon, calling for someone to answer me. No voice came. No father returned from the dead.


No frog jumped out of its hiding spot. I was too big to talk to God, so I started to cry.





59.


阅读下面短文,根据所给情节 进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。



I


went


up


to


the


roof


for


a break


after


study


for


an


hour


and


watched


the


50


or


so people


swimming in the natural rock pool below our house. It was a sunny day



a blue, cloudless sky


over


calm


sea.


But


then,


as


I


looked


in


the


distance.


I


discovered


a


series


of


three


or


four


big


waves


heading


towards


the shore.


I’d


seen


these


mini?tsunamis(


海啸


)


many


times


before. They


were heading at speed in the direction of the pool. Most people knew to look out for them, but


from the screams that started coming from the beach, I could tell someone was in trouble.


Without thinking, I ran down into the street, holding my bodyboard(


冲浪板


) on the way and


shouted


at


a


stranger


to


go


inside


my


house


and


call


the


coastguard.


My


neighbor


Moises


had


heard the screaming as well and was also outside with his bodyboard, so together we rushed to the


steps that led down to the sea




Once we got closer, we discovered the waves had pulled a boy and a girl from the pool and


into the open sea. I knew that the nearest boat would take at least 30 minutes to reach us. Waiting


for


help


wasn’t


a


choice.


I


wasn’t


used


to


this


sort


of


emergency—I’d


never


been


trained


as


a


lifeguard


—but


I


didn’t


think


twice


about


trying


to


save


them.


I


suppose


in


a


way


I


wanted


to


impress everyone; at 19, a deal like that can seem like a good opportunity to show off




Moises and I dived into the water and it took us 10 minutes to get to them. When we finally


reached them, they were almost lifeless with only their heads coming in and out of the water. We


could tell they wer


e still alive from their small breaths but it was clear that they wouldn’t have


been able to stay there much longer. I held the boy and pulled him over my board. Moises moved


the girl onto his board. We discussed pushing them back to the shore, but we were too far out.


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4


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Paragraph 1




We



had



to



wait,

< br>_______________________________________________ ____________


__________________________ ______________________________________________


__________________________________________ ______________________________


Paragraph 2




That



night,


word



came



from



the



hospital



that



the



two



people



were



in



a



good



condition


._________________________________________ __________________________


____________ __________________________________________________ __________


One possible version




Paragraph 1




We



had



to



wait



trying to keep them on the boards, feeling their faces to wake them up, telling


them


to


be


strong.


30


minutes


later,


I


began


to


feel


a


bit


tired.


Finally,


in


the


distance,


we


discovered


a


small


boat


with


three


lifeguards


heading


towards


us.


When


the


boat


appeared,


we


helped push the boy and the girl on board, only to be told that there was no room for us. People


who had watched what happened came to meet us and cheek if we were OK, but there was no


round of applause. Everything was back to normal.


Paragraph 2




That



night, word



came



from



the



hospital



that



the



two



people



were



in



a



good



condition


. They


probably would have died if they’d been in


the sea for any longer. I knew it was a big deal that


we’d


saved them,


but at the same time it didn’t seem like that much effort. I’m sure that anyone


who could swim would do the same thing.





60.


阅读下面短文,根据所给情节 进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。



I


have


worked


within


team


environments


for


many


years.


But,


I


learned


about


teamwork


many years before the term became a popular word in organizations. Are large organizations the


only places where teamwork exists?


When


I


was


a


teenager,


I


had


the


opportunity


to


visit


many


country


farms


along


with


my


father


who


taught


music


lessons


to


many


farm


kids.


I


always


remember


one


farm


in


particular


where both of the


farmer’s


sons took guitar lessons from my father.


The farm on which the boys lived was a small dairy farm where milking the cows was a daily


routine both early morning and at night. The farm was big enough, though, that one person, the


father, could not manage it


alone and certainly could not do all the


tasks by himself as well as


plant the crops in the early


spring and harvest them for his cows both in late June and in early


September. This meant that if the farm was to grow and support the family, everyone had to work


and


help.


This


meant


that


all


family


members,


including


the


farmer’s


wife,


had


a


set


of


clear


responsibilities on a daily basis, seven days a week. As you may know, dairy cows must be milked


every


day


including


Saturday


and


Sunday



there


is


no


rest


on


a


farm



no


days


off



no


sick


time



nor any holidays.


So,


what


developed


through


necessity


was


the


original


teamwork



teamwork


that


meant


survival, growth and enough money to feed the family, buy the necessary farm supplies like tools


and machines. If there was no teamwork, there would be no farm



it was that simple.


If you have a chance some time in the future, I would encourage you to visit a working farm


like this. It is too bad t


hat more people couldn’t experience


the original team on a farm before they


start to talk about what teams are and how they should operate



they may learn more than they


might first realize.


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< br>


Paragraph 1




I



worked



on



this



particular



farm


_________________________________________ ___


___________________________________ _____________________________________


_ __________________________________________________ _____________________


Paragraph 2




Farms



have



become



even



bigger



business



today


.________________________________

< br>_______________________________________________ _________________________


_____________ __________________________________________________ _________


_____________________________ ___________________________________________


One possible version




Paragraph 1




I



worked



on



this



particular



farm


from time to time for a couple of years and I certainly found


out a lot. I found out how hard the work is. I found out what time meant when you needed to milk


a cow at a set time, feed them at a certain time, and finish one task completely in a short time


period because there was another one waiting to be done. I found out the importance of teamwork


on the farm where family members all work together to make an operation a success.


Paragraph 2




Farms



have



become



even



bigger



business



today


. No longer are there the small farms unless


of course those that are only a hobby farm. And, as farms grew, the machines to work them have


become even more expensive. Farmers have to gain more knowledge of seeds, crops, fertilizers,


and how to survive by investing in the markets. However, if there was no teamwork, there would


be no farm.






61. (2017·


浙江卷


6



)


阅读下面短文,



根据所给情节进行续写,



使之构成一个完整的故事。



On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from


his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but


they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled(




) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two


young daughters at


home.


He hoped to


show them this beautiful place someday.



Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him.“Man, that’s a big dog



”he thought.


But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all, but a


wolf, quickly


catching up with him.



Mac’s heart


jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired


the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac’s relief, it fell back,


shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. T


hen it attacked the back of Mac’s


bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to


quickly restart the c hase(


追赶


)


< br>


Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow


down. He saw a steep uphill climb


before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he’d be easily


caught up and the wolf’s teeth would be tearing into his flesh.



At this moment, Paul


and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn’t


think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later,


they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got


closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in


front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.


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3


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4


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Paragraph 1




The



car



abruptly



stopped



in



front



of



him


._______________________________________

________________________________________________ ________________________


Paragraph 2




A



few



minutes



later, the



other



two



cyclists



arrived


.






___ __________________________________________________ ___________________


___________________ __________________________________________________ ___


One possible version




Paragraph 1




The



car



abruptly



stopped



in



front



of



him


. Paul and Becky got out of the car immediately to


give


help.


But


with


the


bare


hands,


they


didn’t


dare


to


fight


with


the


wolf.


However,


they


still


approached to the wolf bravely. At the same time, the wolf also noticed them and turned its head


back, shouting loudly at Paul and Becky. Mac then jumped off the bicycle and was ready to fight


against the wolf. That reached deadlock.


Paragraph 2




A



few



minutes



later, the



other



two



cyclists



arrived


. They found the dangerous situation, where


three men circled the wolf.


Mac’s


friends also jumped off their bicycles and joined the fight with


the wolf. More and more cars stopped. Some drivers took out the sticks from the cars, and some


took


out


the


knives,


even


the


guns


towards


the


wolf.


Just


at


that


time,


the


wolf


might


feel


the


threats from the people, starting to withdraw. Soon, it ran away off the road and disappeared in the


distance.





62. (2016·


浙江卷


10


< p>
)


阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。< /p>



One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight


by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started


to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom



“I’m going


to find a better spo


t for us to camp”and


walked away.


With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a


high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest


and, far beyond, a snow-


capped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.


“Tom



”she cried.“Help





No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving,


but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane


was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to


be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.


Jane


rose


at


the


break


of


day,


hungry


and


thirsty.


She


could


hear


water


trickling(


滴落


)


somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy,_ she also


saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything


better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the


lake.


As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a


helicopter. Is that for me?


Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later,


another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse,_ thinking that she should go to


an open area and flag them if they came back again.


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左右;



2


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4


.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

< p>


Paragraph 1




But



the



helicopter



didn



t



come



back



again, and



the



day



became



darker


. ____________


______________________________________________ __________________________


Paragraph 2




Jane



woke



up



at



the



daybreak


. _______________________________________________


_________________________________________ _______________________________


[


写作指导


]


步骤


1


概括已知信息:标明核心词、 核心句,梳理语篇内容的推进方向。



故事主线:驱车野营生嫌 隙,迷失山林心焚急;挨饿恐惧度长夜,两架飞机失机会。



已知线索:



吵架

——


出走


——


迷路


——


失联


——


自救

< p>
——


思念


——


寻路


——


直升机


——


飞离



步骤


2


按人物、环境、情节动词等分类划线词。




Kinds


Character


Action


Place


Concrete Things


Abstract


步骤


3


紧扣语境构思情节,分析:



1


.据第一段开头


“darker”


可知,


____________




2


.据第二段开头


“woke up”


可知,


____________


。< /p>



3


.第二段情节可能:


____________




可续写线索:



失望?坚信?曲折?直 升机?


Tom


?自救?获救?



话题激活词汇:



环境:


forest, stream, rock, berry, valley, steep, cave, lake, waterfall(


人口、环境与自然


)

< br>困难:


hunger



star ve



thirsty



injure



broken



blood



panic



shelter



s urvive(survival)



suffer

< p>


cold



sever e(


天气与自然灾害


)


活动:


walk



climb



fall



crawl

< p>


taste



atte mpt



struggle to one’s feet



make one’s way to



pick up(


人体与动作


)


情绪:


to one’s great joy, break down



救援:


rescue team, doctor, search for, spot(


天气与自然灾害


)


意志品质:


calm, courage, will(


性格与行为特征


)


评价:


amazing, make it


步骤


4


初稿


(


分析原文写作风格,特殊语法结构有时间状语从句、结果状语从句、条件状语从


句、宾语从句、现在分词作状语、直接引语、虚拟语气、倒装、疑问句、感叹句和介词短语



)




步骤


5



核 查字数、下划线标明原文给出的


5


个以上关键词语、连接词、标 点、语法错误等。



One possible version




Paragraph 1




But



the



helicopter



didn



t



come



back



again, and



the



day



became



darker


. Jane was so tired,


Underlined key words and phrases


Jane, Tom


walked, climbed


lake, stream


helicopter, yellow blouse


To her great joy, at a distance


hungry, and extremely frightened. She thought to herself



“If only I had not quarreled with


Tom.


Where


is


Tom?


He


must


have


made


the


emergency


call.


What


indeed


is


enough


courage.


If


I


continue


my


spirits


tomorrow,


I


will


be


likely


to


guide


the


helicopter



”Lying


beside


the


stream,__she


fell


asleep


very


soon.


Suddenly,


she


heard


the


shouts


of


tigers,


which


made


her


scared to death. After she held her breath for a few minutes, everything was quiet again. In the


terrible darkness, she slept again.



Paragraph 2




Jane



woke



up



at



the



daybreak


. She caught sight of a fisherman at__a__distance,__with whose


help she climbed to an open area.__To__her__great__joy,__ a helicopter flew overhead just at that


moment.


The


fisherman


helped


flag


her


yellow__blouse


wildly.


This


did


catch


the


rescuers’


attention! Jane was rescued. Seeing Tom, she told him how much she missed him. Never would


they be away from each other. Tom gave her the warmest and longest hug she had ever received.


People around smiled with satisfaction.





63.


阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个 完整的故事。



One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight


by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started


to quarrel. By the time


they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I’m going


to find a better spot for us to camp.” and walked away.



With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a


high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest


and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.


“Tom!” she cried. “Help!”



No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving,


but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane


was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to


be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.


Jane


rose


at


the


break


of


day,


hungry


and


thirsty.


She


could


hear


water


trickling


(


滴落


)


somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also


saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything


better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the


lake.


As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a


helicopter. Is that for me?


Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later,


another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to


an open area and flag them if they came back again.









But no more helicopters came and it was dark. _________________________________









It was daybreak when Jane woke up. _________________________________________



Possible version:


But no helicopters came and it was getting dark. Jane was sad. She sat by the stream with


sadness, resting her aching feet. ‘If I hadn’t quarreled with Tom, I wouldn’t have to be here.’ Jame


thought regretfully with tearing welling up in her she wanted to say sorry to Tom for


losing her temper!. However, the only thing she could do was lie by the stream and wait for help.



Soon she fell asleep .


It was daybreak when Jane woke up. She stood up to find something to eat. She walked on


until


she


came


to


an


open


area


where


water


and


berries


were


available.


Suddenly


she


heard


a


helicopter. She took off her yellow blouse and began shaking it violently, hoping someone could


see her. To her joy, the helicopter slowed down and landed on the ground. With the door open,


Tom ran out. Seeing Jane, he was so excited that he hugg


ed Jane tightly. “Tom, I won’t lose my


temper again. I want to stay with you forever.” Jame said in tears.




But no helicopters came and it was getting dark. Feeling scared and helpless, Jane sat beside


a tree and held her shoulder in her arms to make herself warm. Slowly, the sun hid itself behind


the


mountains


and


soon


it


was


hard


to


see


anything.


Looking


through


the


thick


darkness,


Jane


seemed to see Tom’s smiling face. She said to herself for thousands of times


that she wouldn’t


leave Tom again. Determined to find him, Jane started to look for the lake in the darkness. An hour


later she was too tired, so she lay down on a rock and fell asleep.


It was daybreak when Jane woke up. It was a foggy day. Climbing down the rock, she heard


the sound of the stream


, so she walked towards the water. Suddenly she heard someone’s voice. To


her great joy, it was Tom! He rushed to her wildly and hugged her tightly. Their cry of happiness


broke the silence in the forest. After several minutes, when the fog was swept by the wind, Jane


figured out everything: last night she walked here accidentally. Tom recognized her by the yellow


blouse in the morning. Most amazingly, it was their car that Jane slept on rather than a rock.





64.


阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个 完整的故事。



A farmer grew some vegetables in his garden. One day his wife was ill and he had no money.


He had to sell some cabbages and carrots in the market. The next morning he took two baskets of


vegetables to town. But it was raining hard that afternoon and there were few people in the street.


When


his


vegetables


were


sold


out,


it


was


dark.


He


bought


some


medicine


and


hurried


to


his


village.


On


his


way


home


he


saw


a


person


lying


on


the


snow.


He


placed


his


baskets


on


the


ground and was going to help the person to get up. At that time he found it was a dead man and


there was much blood on his body. He was so afraid that he ran away quickly, without taking the


baskets with him.


The next afternoon the farmer was sent to the police station. Having shown the baskets, an


of


ficer


asked,


“Are


these


yours”


“Yes,


sir.”


the


farmer


answered


timidly(


胆怯地


).


“Have


you


killed the man” “No, no, sir.” the farmer said in a hurry. “When did you see the dead man” “About


seven last evening.” “Did you see who killed the man” “No, sir.” The


officer brought out a knife


and asked, “Have you seen it yet” “No, sir.” The officer became angry and told the policemen to


beat him up and sent him into prison. the officer wanted to trap the farmer into the confession(




), but the farmer didn’t admit he


was the murderer.


注意


:


1.


所续写的短文词数应为


150


左右


;


2.


应使用


5


个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语


;


3.


续写部分分为二段


,


每段的开头 语已经为你写好


;


4.


续写完成后< /p>


,


请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。



Paragraph 1:


The officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him upagain.









Paragraph 2:


The farmer was lucky. A few days later,







Paragraph 1


The officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him up again. The farmer was


very afraid, he thought he would be sentenced to death by killing people, but he didn’t, he was


innocent. He must tell people the truth, but no one could hear his voice. he hoped that someone


could come and save him.



Paragraph 2


The farmer was lucky .A few days later, a young man came to the police station with a lot of


journalists, saying that he saw the murderer. It was the police officer who killed the man on the


snow!


He


saw


the


police


office


used


a


knife


killing


the


man


late


in


the


evening.


he


was


so


frightened and ran away. But the young man thought the farmer was innocent. So he took the great


courage to expose the real criminal. After the investigation, the young man was right. The police


officer was sent into prison and the policeman who beat up the farmer was fired, and the brave


young man was regarded as the hero by the villagers



65.


阅读下面短文


,


根据所给情节进行续写


,


使之构成一个完整的故事。< /p>



There was a thick forest on the sides of a mountain. Many kinds of animals lived in the forest.


A deer was eating grass and leaves with her two young ones. The young ones wandered happily


here and there. The deer followed her fawns (


幼鹿


)into a cave. The deer was frightened because it


was a tiger's cave. There were bones of dead animals all over the cave. Fortunately, the tiger was


not inside the cave at the time.


The deer was trying to lead her young ones out of the cave when she heard a loud roar. She


saw the tiger at a distance coming towards the cave. It was dangerous to go out of the cave now.


She thought of a plan. The deer raised her


voice and shouted,


young children do not


weep. I shall capture (


捕捉


)a tiger for you to eat. You can have a good dinner.


The tiger heard these words and became frightened. He thought,


from


the


cave?


A dangerous


animal


is


staying


inside


to


capture


me.


I


shall


run


away


to


escape


death.


A jackal (


胡狼


)saw the running tiger. “Why are you running in great fear?


jackal asked.


The tiger said,


for a tiger to eat. The mother is promising to capture a tiger for them. So, I am running away.


The cunning jackal was now sure the tiger was a coward (


懦夫


).It said,


animal is


fiercer or stronger than a tiger Let us go together to find out.”



But the tiger said,


die. So, I will not come with you.


The jackal said,


打结


)our tails together. Then I will not be able to


leave you.


Now they walked towards the cave together.


Para. 1


The deer saw the jackal and the tiger coming together.


___________________________________________ ________________________________


_______ __________________________________________________ ______________________


_________________ __________________________________________________ ____________


___________________________ __________________________________________________ __


_____________________________________ __________________________________________

< br>________________________


Para. 2


The tiger was shocked to hear this and he was sure now the jackal cheated him.


_________________________________________________ __________________________


_____________ __________________________________________________ ________________


_______________________ __________________________________________________ ______


_________________________________ ______________________________________________


___________________________________________ _______________________________


注意


:


1.


所续写短文的词数应为


150


左右


;


2.


应使用至少


5

个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词


;


3.


续写部分分为两段


,


每段的开头已为你写好

< p>
,


不计入总词数


;


4.


续写完成后


,


请用下划线标出你所使用 的关键词。



Para.1


The


deer


saw


the


jackal


and


the


tiger


coming


together.


She


again


raised


her


voice.


She


shouted towards her children standing inside the cave


, “My dear children, I requested my friend,


the clever jackal, to capture a tiger for us. Now look the jackal has captured a tiger for us. He has


tied the tiger


’s tail to his tail. This is to prevent the tiger from escaping. You will soon have the


tiger for dinner.


Para.2


The tiger was shocked to hear this and he was sure now the jackal cheated him. So, the tiger


decided to escape from the terrible animal standing inside his cave. He started running. He forgot


about the jackal. He dragged the jackal over rocks and thorns. In the mad escape the jackal was


caught between


two


rocks. The


tiger


pulled


with all


his


might.


His


tail


got


cut. The


jackal


was


killed in this incident. The tail-less tiger ran away to another part of the forest. The deer and her


young ones left the tiger’s cave. They joined their herd safely. Presence of mind and intelligence


can save one from dangerous situations.





66.


阅读下面短文


,


根据所给情节进行续写


,


使之构成一个完整的故事。



Sara Savick remembers one special Easter when she was nine years old. Her parents gave her


a baby duckling in a yellow basket.


“Mom



said later that she bought the little duck because she felt


sorry for


it,” recalled Sara.


The people at the pet store colored the feathers pink for Easter. Sara named the duck Pinky.


Sara’s mother really didn’t think the baby duck would survive very long. But to her surprise,


Pinky grew and got stronger and stronger. Soon, the little duckling was a


healthy, hungry duck


with white feathers.


“We


fed Pinky


oatmeal,


cooked


and


uncooked,


and


small


pieces


of


vegetables,”


said


Sara.


Pinky lived inside the house with Sara and her family. She specially fancied taking baths with Sara.


Everyone treated Pinky as a family member.


But just when everything appeared to be perfect, the night of the “talk” came. Sara’s Mom


and Dad sat her down, explaining that the best thing for Pinky was to live a normal duck life, with


other


ducks.


It


was


not


natural


for


ducks


to


live


indoors


with


a


family,


her


father


told


her.


He


added Pinky needed to swim in ponds and do all


the same things that ducks in the wild do.


Sara started to cry, knowing what was going to happen. Sara’s parents decided to take Pinky


to a park, which was two miles away. There was a pond with a lot of other ducks. Pinky would


have the chance to live a natural life and Sara could still visit her.


The big day came, Sara and her parents put Pinky in a box and drove to the park. Sara said


that Pinky did


not look happy; maybe Pinky was convinced that she was a human, not a duck.


注意


:


所续写短文的词数应为



l50


左右


;


至少使用



5


个短文中标有下划线的关键词语


;


续 写部分分为两段


,


每段的开头语已为你写好

;


续写完成后


,


请用下划线标出 你所使用的关键词语。



Paragraph 1


Everyone was sad when they left Pinky at the pond, even Sara’s



father.


____________________ __________________________________________________ _____


__________________________________ _____________________________________________

< p>
____________________________________________ ___________________________________


____ __________________________________________________ _________________________


______________ _____________________________________


Paragraph 2


The next morning, when looking out of the kitchen window,


Sara couldn’t believe her eyes!



______________________ __________________________________________________ ___


____________________________________ ___________________________________________


______________________________________________ _________________________________


______ ______________________________________________


答案:




Everyone


was


sad


when


they


left


Pinky


at


the


pond,


even


Sara’s


father.


But


he


tried


to


convince Sara that Pinky was fine. Walking towards the car, Sara looked over her shoulder and


saw Pinky standing alone. The other ducks were swimming around in circles, looking at Pinky. To


Sara, it seemed that they were trying to identify the strange animal. They didn’t recognize Pinky


as a duck. Worried about Pinky, Sara dreamed of Pinky being bullied by other ducks the whole


night .


The next morning, when looking out of the kit


chen window, Sara couldn’t believe her eyes!


There was Pinky, happily walking around on the grass. Thrilled at what she saw, she kept asking


herself,” How did she make it?” After all, it was


two miles away and he managed to walk back


through the city street. Incredible! But her parents drove Pinky back to the pond again regardless


of her request. The following morning, there was Pinky again on the grass! Seeing Pinky again,


her


father,


waving


his


arms


about


wildly,


moved


his


lips


without


saying


anything.


Meanwhile,


Sarah, overjoyed, hugged Pinky tightly, tears streaming down her cheeks.


解析:




【 分析】


这是一篇读后续写作文。


阅读部分主要阐述了故事的主人 公收到了一个圣诞节


的礼物



——


黄色的小鸭子


,


随着小鸭子的长大


,


父母认为小鸭子应该和其他正常的鸭子一样生活


,


于是决定放生小鸭子。



【详解】 第一步


:


把握文章主题。


< p>
仔细阅读所给短文


,


把握短文核心内容是完成续写 的前提。本文讲的是一个故事


,


故事的


主人公



Sara


收到了一个圣诞节 的礼物


——


黄色的小鸭子


,

< p>
随着小鸭子的长大


,


父母认为小鸭


子应该和其他正常的鸭子一样生活


,


于是决定放生小鸭 子。



第二步


:


预测故事的发展。根据已知人物、事件及续写段落的首句进行预测。根据



Paragraph 1


的首句


Everyone was sad when they left Pinky at the pond, even Sara’s father. < /p>


可预


测到一家人怀着不舍和担忧放走了小鸭子

,


再根据



Paragraph


2




The


next


morning,


when

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