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2019
年中考真题英语分项汇编
专题
21
书面表达
考点
4
叙事描写类
（一）
【
2019
?
北京】
根据中文和英文提示，完成
一篇不少于
50
词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。
所给提示词
语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
自律，即自我约束，是自我提升的一种途径，有助于我们成长，促使我们不断前行。
某英文网站正在开展以“自律”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用
英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈
为了增强自律意识，你做过什么，以及这样做给你带来的好处
。
提示词语
: self-disc
iplined(
自律的
)
，
plan
，
goal
，
habit
，
improve
提示问题
: What did you do to be
self-disciplined?
What benefits have
you got from doing so?
Self-discipline
plays an important role in our life
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写作思路
】
这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份，用英语写一篇短文给某网站投稿，谈谈为了增强自律意
识，你做过
什么，以及这样做给你带来的好处。根据题目中给出的问题可知，短文应包括
以下内容：首先谈一谈为了
增强自律意识，你做过什么？然后谈谈这样做给你带来的好处
。第一个内容应主要使用一般过去时；第二
个内容应主要使用现在完成时。注意谓语动词
的正确形式。题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，学生们应
联系自己的实际生活，展开合
理的想象，将这些内容补充完整后，用正确的英语表达出来，这是写作中的
一个难点。写
作时应注意：首先注意内容的完整、充实，学生们可以结合自己的实际生活，写一写自己平
时的做法。注意叙述应有层次、有条理。其次应注意英语的表达问题，英语句式的结构与汉语是不同的，
因此不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应该从句式的整体考虑，先确定主干结构，然后添加修饰成分
。为提升
作文档次，应注意使用一些高级词汇、短语以及复合
句、非谓语动词等复杂结构。同时语句之间使用恰当
的连接成分，使文意上下连贯，表达
流畅。
【
参考范文
】
Self-discipline plays an important role
in our life. To be honest, I am a person who is
self-disciplined. I used to
follow all
kinds of rules and hand in the tasks appointed on
time at school. And I could not only respected all
my
teachers
but
also
get
on
well
with
my
classmates.
At
home,
I
was
able
to
balance
housework
and homework.
I
usually made a plan in
advance to make it easier to achieve my goal.
After finishing all the task, I developed the
habit of going to bed early and going
to bed early. In the
society
，
I spared no effort
to improve myself all the time.
In a
word. I have benefited a lot from being self-
discipline. First of all, I have had many good
habits, which
makes my life easier and
more regular. Secondly, my life and my study have
been to high efficiency so that a lot of
time has been saved. Thirdly, being
self-disciplined has prepared me for a better and
brighter future. In the future, I
will
continue to be a self-disciplined person.
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文，
短文作者根据题目要求，介绍了自己第自律的认识，结合自己的实际谈论了自
律的好处。
短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整、充实，短文主要分两段：第一段中作者介绍了自己
在家里、在学校以及在社会上是如何遵守规则，进行自我约束的。这一段的内容叙述很有条理，从
< p>at school,
At home, In the societ
y
三个方面进行介绍。第二段中作者主要阐述了自律给自己带来的好处，使用了
Firstly,
Secondly,
Th
irdly
，从三个方面进行介绍。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，谓语动词形式
准确，语法
规范，句式结构文章，且使用了较高级的词汇和复杂句式，提升了作文档次，
展现了作者扎实的写作功底。
文章中较好的句型有：
I
used to follow all kinds of rules and hand in the
tasks appointed on time at
school.
、
I
usually
made a plan in advance to make it easier to
achieve my goal.
、
First of
all
，
I have had many good
habits
，
which makes
my life easier and more
regular.
、
Thirdly, being
self-disciplined has prepared me for a better and
brighter
future.
等。
（二）
【
2019
?
湖北省宜昌市】
假定你是李华，你
的英国朋友
Mike
得知你们开展了“做生态小公民，建设美丽
家乡”的活动，他来信
表示很感兴趣并想了解具体细节，请给
M
ike
写一封回信向他描述你（们）曾经做过的一件事或参与的一次
活动。
要求：
(1)
内容应包括活动或事件的时间、地点、过程和你的感受；
(2)
文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；词数
80~100
。开头和结尾己给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Milk,
I'm glad to hear that you are
interested in our environment protection
activities. To be an ecological
eitizen(
生
态公民
), we
did a good job. Last _____________________________
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Now the environment around us
becomes better and better. Welcome to my hometown
one day.
Yours,
Li Hua
【
写作思路
】
在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承
上启下的连
词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连
篇，严重跑题。
【
参考范文
】
Dear Mike,
I'm
glad to hear that you are interested in our
environment protection activities. To be an
ecological citizen, we
did a good job.
Last Sunday, I went to our community with my
friends to give the people there a speech. It was
about how to protect our environment.
After the speech, they knew they should take a bus
or ride a bike instead of
driving to
cut down air pollution. To cut down waste
pollution, they should take bags to go shopping.
And they also
knew
to
put
litter
in
different
bins.
Finally,
we
called
them
up/called
on
them
to
make
a
difference
to
our
environment together. We were tired but
happy that day.
Now the environment
around us becomes better and better. Welcome to my
hometown one day.
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如
be
glad to do
，
be interested
in
，
ecological
citizen
，
give a
speech
，
how to
do
，
take a
bus
，
ride a
bike
，
instead
of
，
cut
down
，
go
shopping
，
call them
up
，
make
a
difference
，
become
better
and
better
等。而
I'm
glad
to
hear
that
you
are
interested
in
our
environment
protection activities./ After the
speech, they knew they should take a bus or ride a
bike instead of driving to cut
down air
pollution.
等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文
的亮点。在学习中注意
总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表
达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
（三）
【
2019
?
湖北省咸宁市】
运动塑造健康，团
结凝聚力量。
5
月
10
日，学校举办了春季运动会。你和班上的许多同学参加了比赛
项目，战绩显著
。其他同学观看了比赛，并为选手们加油喝彩。请你根据下面四幅图片的提示，写一篇日
记，介绍运动会概况及班上同学参加的情况，并抒发自己的活动感受。
写作要求：
1
．文章中勿出现真实的姓名和校名；
2
．文章须包含图片所提供的主要信息，可适当发挥。行文连贯
，条理清晰；
3
．词数
80~100
个，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总字数。
参考词汇：
teamwork
Friday, May 11th, 2019
Sunny
It
was sunny yesterday. Our school held a spring
sports meet.
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/p>
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【
写作思路
】
这是一篇看图作文，根据图片中的相关内容介绍一下运动会概况及班上同学参加的情况，
并抒发自己
的活动感受。所提供的卡片中列举了跳远、跳高、
4
00
米接力和
100
米接力。主要从同
学们的参加情况和自
己的活动感受这个方面去写。时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。
注意日记中必须包含图片上的所有信
息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，
尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达
要符合英
语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧
< br>密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【
参考范文
】
Friday, May 11th, 2019
Sunny
It was
sunny yesterday. Our school held a spring sports
meet. There were 4 events for both boys and girls.
They were the long jump, the high jump,
the l00-meter race and the 400-meter relay race.
Everyone
in
our
class
felt
very
excited
because
we
got
a
wonderful
result.
Sixteen
of
us
took
part
in
the
activity and we got 4
first prizes, 2 second prizes and 3 third prizes.
My classmates Yuan Ying and Fang Dan won
the girls' long jump and the high jump
without difficulty. So did I in the boys'100-meter
race. In the boys' relay race,
three
boys and I ran very fast, coming out on top. In
the meantime, all other classmates watched the
matches, took
photos and cheered us on.
From this sports meet, know that sports can keep
us healthy. We should do sports every
day.
Meanwhile,
teamwork
plays
an
important
role
in
the
relay
race.
As
the
saying
goes,
one
tree
can't
make
a
forest. So it made us learn to help
each other in our daily life.
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
Everyone
in our class felt very excited because we got a
wonderful result.
我们班的每个人都很兴奋，因为
我们取得了一个很好的成绩。句子
because we got a
wonderful result.
是由
because
引导的原因状语从句。
【高分句型二】
My
classmates Yuan Ying and Fang Dan won the girls'
long jump and the high jump without difficulty. So
did
I in the boys'100-meter race.
我的同学袁颖和方丹轻松地获得了女子跳远和跳高的冠军。我也参加了男子
100
米赛跑。
So did I in the
boys'100-meter race.
是由
so
引起的倒装句。
（四）
【
2019
?
大庆市】
文娱、体育、户外等丰富
多彩的课外活动为我们的生活增添了生机和活力。请以“
After-class
Activities
Make My Life
Colorful
”为题，为校园专栏写一篇英文稿件。
内容包括：
1.
简要描述你参加过的一项课外活动；
2.
该课外活动给你带来的收获及
感受
(
交朋友；放松自我
)
。
写作要求：
1. <
/p>
词数
80
词左右；开头已写好，不记入总
词数；
2.
文章不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。
After-class Activities Make My Life
Colorful