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短文改错记叙文——

< br>2020


年高考英语专题训练与练习系列




假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同 桌写的以下作文。文中共有


10


处语言错


误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。


< p>
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号


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)


,并在其下面写出该加的词。


< br>删除:把多余的词用斜线


()


划掉。


修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。



注意:


1.


每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;



2.


只允许修改


10


处,多者


(


从第


11


处起

< p>
)


不计分。





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)


During May Day, I went to the zoo to see



lovely animals and went to the sea world to see beautiful fishes.


That was very


much


interesting. I also went with my parents to visit my grandparents and to eat


minority


foods.


We rode


horses



on



the


grassland


and


had


fun


local


children.


It was


very


excited.


After


that,


I


hold



a


party


and


invited some of my best


friend


to visit my house.


His


mother bought a lot of tasty foods for us,


so


we also took


many


photos


on


the


party.


We


played


very


happy.



I


also


watched


lots


of


cartoon


films


at


home,


that


were


wonderful.



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)


Last year my brother and I went to Beijing


for vacation


. After our plane


landing


, we went to the hotel. We had


made our reservation six


month


earlier, but the woman at the service counter said


they


had been a mistake. We


are



told that our rooms hadn’t been reserved for that week, but for the week after. I didn’t understand


what


this


would happen and my credit card had already been charged


with



the reservation. What’s


bad


, the hotel had been


fully booked. When we were wondering what to do


with


, the manager came out. She apologized and gave


them


a


spare VIP room on the top floor.



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)


Mary


has


been


award


the


title


of


“Star


Student


of


the


Week”


for


what


she


did


for


our


class.


In



the


hot


afternoon of last Saturday, Mary went downtown and walked from one store to another,


looked


for the costumes


we


would


wear


in


the


singing


contest.


While


the


rest


of


us


were


enjoying


our


leisure


times



in


comfortable


classrooms, she spent the whole afternoon searching


for


and selecting. Finally, she


finds


the right clothes.


Deep



moved by her efforts, we tried our best and won


first


prize in the contest. Mary is warm-hearted


so


cares about


the class. She deserves the honor and we should learn from


him


.



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)


Today is my father’s birthday. I got o


n the subway train after I


have


bought the present. And when I was on


the subway train, I imagined the situation


which


I gave the present to my father, and my father would be very


happily


.


On the next station, there


is


a lady who had no seat in the front of me. She also had two heavy


bag


. After a


minute, I


stood


and offered the seat to


him


. She was quite happy and grateful


to



my help. She said “Thank you!’’


to me, which made me


to


feel proud.


Today is best. I felt


a


fun to help other people.





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)


I wanted to visit Hangzhou before returning


back


to London. One of my tasks


were


to decide where to go. I


took out my guidebook


which


there was lots of


informations



about the city’s famous sights. At that moment,


the



attractive young lady came up to me and introduced


himself


. She offered to show


me the


city. She suggested we


first


go


to


the


West


Lake


and


walk


along


the


Broken


Bridge.


I


liked


the


idea.


Therefore


,


I


was


worried


about


crossing


the


Broken


Bridge.


If


it


were


broken,


I


would fell


in


and


drown.


It


was


probable



not


a


good


idea,


so


I


politely refused her invitation,


closing


my book and walked away.



(



)


I still remember one of my


experience


of hiking on the Mount Tai. Before the trip, I


think


it a piece of cake to


get the


top of the mountain. However, after


reached


the middle of it, I started to feel tired


from


. I was thirsty and


my legs


was


so painful. Although I faced such a great difficulty,


but


I was determined to finish the trip as I was


full


convinced that nothing is impossible. So I must


moved


on! Finally, I reached the top of the mountain. How happy I


was and


how


a beautiful view I could enjoy on the mountain!



(



)


Today is Mother’s Day. We


wake


up very early in the morning. My sister Jane and I planned to do


anything


for


our mother to give


her surprise


. First, I put a bunch of


flower


on her desk and Jane went to the kitchen to


made



breakfast.


After


mother


got


up,


she


was


surprising



to


see


the


beautiful


flowers.


Then,


we


said


to


her,


“Happy


Mother’s Day, Mum! Thank you


to


everything that you have done for


me


. We love you forever.”


Heard


this, mother


was moved to tears. Finally, we served her breakfast. She was proud of what her daughters had


been


done for her.



(



)


One day a guide dog and a blind man got on


the


bus together. The bus was


full people


and there were no spare


seats. One man, however, soon got up and left. The dog took the blind man to the seat


and


there was


a


little space.


The dog


begin


to push the people on each side with his nose. He pushed and pushed


when


the people moved down


and finally there


were


enough space for two. The blind man then sat down and the dog got on the seat beside the


blind man. He lay and soon


fallen



asleep. Everyone on the bus smiled at the dog’s


clever


in making space for the


blind man and for


herself.




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)




About 9 o


’clock last night, I


am


doing my homework.


Sudden


I heard my neighbor


shout


and laughing loudly. He


was watching


the


football game on TV. I


couldn’t go on studying and


become


impatient. I covered my


ear


, trying to


keep the noise out,


and


it was no use. So


I had to go to my neighbor’s house.







I knocked at


door



and said, “Good evening, Mr Yang! Could you please turn down your TV a bit? I am doing


my homework.”







“Oh, I’m really sorry to have disturbed


with



you. We’ll do


like



you say.” My neighbor said po


litely.






“Thank you very much.” I said and went back to continue my study.






(



)


A few months after


returning the


US from Germany, I took part in a college course in French. Since I


have


learned


to


say


German well in Germany, I thought it might be


interested


to begin studying


other


language. At the


first class, the teacher asked us to do a pronunciation exercise in


it


he would say a word or two in French, and each


student would do


their


best to copy. When he got to me, he kept having me


to


say more words, and I finally asked


him why. “I find it great fun”,


she


explained


it


. “In 25 years of teaching at school, it’s the first time I’ve heard an


American speak French with a German accent.”








参考答案



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本文讲述作者如何庆祝五一假期。



1.


去掉


interesting< /p>


前的


much



此处


very


是副词,可修饰


int eresting


,因此


much


显然 是多余的。



2. minority→minority’s



此处指的是



少数民族的



,故要用其所有格形式。



3.



fun

< br>后加


with



由固定短语


have fun with


意为




……


玩得开心



可知,


fun

< p>
是不可数名词。



4. excited→exciting






作主语要用


-ing


。类似的词有很多,如:


surprise, embarrass, amaze


等。



5. hold→held



这是一篇记叙文,主体时态要用一般过去时。



6. friend→friends





some of

< br>后应用可数名词的复数形式,表示



一些好朋友





7. His→My



根据上一句文意可知,此处理应是指



我的妈妈





8. so→and


< br>表



联合


关系要用并列连词


and




9. happy→happily



修饰动词


played


要用副词。



10. that→which



非 限制行定语从句不能用


that


引导。



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)


本文讲 述去年我和哥哥去北京度假的时候在旅馆发生的一个误会,最后旅馆经理出面解决了误会。



1.



vacation


前加


a



由固定搭配


for a vacation

意为



度假


可知,且


vacation


是可数名词,故要加

< p>
a




2. landing→landed



此处


land(


着陆


)


作谓语,根据全文 语境可知要用过去式。



3. month→months



由前面的


six

可知要用复数形式。



4. they→there



此处是


there be


句型。



5. are→were



本文是记叙文,主体时态是一般过去时。



6. what→why



引导宾语 从句,


由语境逻辑可知,


此处应该是指



为什么会发生这种事



< p>
故用


why


合适。



7. with→for



由固定短语


charge sb. for sth.


意为



因某事向某人收费



可知。



8. bad→worse



由常用连接性词语


What’s worse

< br>意为



更糟糕的是


< p>
可知。



9.


去掉


what to do


后的


with



此处


what to do


作宾语,意 为



该怎么办




with


显然是多余的。



10. them→us



由文意可 知,


gave


的对象应该是我们,而不是他们。



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本文报道了玛丽成为班级



每周之星



的事迹。



1. award→awarded



此处显然是

< br>Mary


被授予每周之星的头衔,故要用被动。



2. In→On





具体的某一天上下午



要 用介词


on




3. looked→looking


此处


look


是非谓语,与逻辑主语


Mary


存在主动关系,故要用现在分词,作伴随状


语。


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