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英语考试作文
雅思写作范文：青少年犯罪类问题
考鸭们都知道，
雅思写作话题有一个历史
题库。
本文就为大家梳理历年雅思写作真题范文：
A
recent
newspaper
article
reports
that
a
14-year-
old
boy
who
seriously
destroyed
his school got a punishment to clean
streets instead of sent
to
the
prison,
do
you
think
this
is
right,
or
the
young
criminals should be sent to the jail?
——
2016
年
1
月
14
日青
少
年犯罪类雅思写作真题
雅思写作题目讲解
分析：
作为
16
年首个换题月的第二场
考试，这个题目着实是达到了它应有的难度。首先，问法比较新颖，
先是就题干
中的观点进行提问，
然后又提问考生对另外一个观点的看
法。所
以这道题，其实就是对两个观点的讨论，可以转换成
: Some
people think that a 14-year-old boy who
seriously destroyed
his school should
get a punishment to clean streets, while
others think that young criminals
should be sent to the jail.
Discuss
both
views
and
give
your
own
opinions.
那么这样一来，
这个题目对我们而言就非常熟悉了。
对于
“打扫街道卫生”
这个立场，
我
们应该是支持的态度，
因为题目中所提到的罪犯年仅
14
岁，在大多数国家的法律当中，未
成年人犯罪都是需要从轻处罚的。因
此，我么可以用
“
1.
小孩子心
智不成熟
;2.
小
孩子的可塑性比较强，应当以教育惩罚为主”这两个
观点来支持。对于“送进监狱”这个
立场，我们则是不支持的态度，
那么我们的写法就是先让步：
监
狱可以使孩子明白犯罪的严重性，
之
后针对让步进行反驳：
但是孩子可能会受到监狱中其他罪犯的不良影
响，不利于心理发育。
雅思写作大作文参考范文
Children
nowadays
are
exposed
in
a
diversified
environment
where
they
have
absolute
access to internet,
being able to befriend with people from
a
variety
of
backgrounds.
This
may
result
in
children
’
s
antisocial behavior and there is a beat
debate on whether
teenagers
who
commit
serious
crimes
should
be
punished
by
doing
some volunteering jobs or being
imprisoned.
Contributing to
their community can be an effective
way
to tell them that they are victimizing other
people. One
argument in its favor is
that they are immature. It would be
a
difficult
thing
to
predict
the
consequences
of
their
behavior
and law knowledge not be sufficiently
acquired at that young
age.
Another
important
factor
in
this
respect
is
that
they
are