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母题十六
短文改错
【母题来源一】
【
201
8·
全国
I
】
【母题原题】
【
2018·
全国
I
】
短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改
作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有
10
处语言错误
，
每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
< br>
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
Λ
< br>）
，并在其下面写出该加的次。
删除：把多余的用斜线（
）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
(1).
每处错误及其修改均仅
限一词；
(2).
只允许修改
10
处，多者（从第
l1
处起）不计分。
71. During my last
winter holiday, I went to countryside with my
father to visit my grandparents. I find a change
there.
The first time I went there,
they were living in a small house with dogs,
ducks, and another animals. Last winter when
I went here again, they had a big
separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They
also Iwent here again,they had a big
separnte house to raise dozens of also
had a small pond,which they raised fish. My
grandpa said last
summer they earned
quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that
their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I
told
my father that I planned to return
for every two years, but he agreed.
【答案】
During my last winter
holiday, I went to
countryside with my
father to visit my grandparents. I
a
change there. The first
time I went there, they were living in a small
house with dogs, ducks, and
Last winter
when I went
pond
again, they had a big separate house to
raise dozens of
animals.
. They also had a small
the fish. I felt
every two years,
they raised fish. My grandpa said last
summer they earned quite a lot by
that
their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I
told my father that I planned to return
he agreed.
3.
another
改成
other
<
/p>
考查形容词的用法。他们住在一个小房子里，院子里有狗、鸭子和其他牲畜。根据句
意可知，将
another
改成
other
。
4.
here
改成
there
考查副词及语意理解。去年冬天我又一次去了那里。故将
here
改成
there
。
5.
chicken
改成
chickens
考查名词复数。
他们拥有一个大的独
立住宅，
还养了许多只鸡。
根据前文的
dozens
of
可知，其后用名词复数形式。
7.
sell
改成
selling
考查动名词。
去年夏天他们通过卖鱼
挣了一大笔钱。
此处介词
by
后用动名
词，
故用
selling
。
8. happily
改成
happy
考查形容词作表语。
他们的生活有了很大提高，
我感到很高兴。
此处形容
词作表语，
故将
happily
改成<
/p>
happy
。学科
~
网
9.
删除
for
考查介词的用法。时间名词有
every
，
each
，
last
等词修饰时，其前不用介词。故删除
for
。
10.
but
改成
and
考查并列连词的用法。我计划每两年回来一次，他同意了。此
处是并列关系，故将
but
改成
and
。
点睛：本文中第
< br>9
处改错是学生容易忽视的考点。时间名词有
every
，
each
，
last
，
this
，
that
等词修饰时，其
前不用介词。
例：
We are going to fish
this morning.
I finished the course
last winter holiday.
【母题来源二】
【
< br>2018·
全国
II
】
【母题原题】
【<
/p>
2018
·全国
II
】
短文改错
假定英语课上老师要
求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有
10
处语言错误，
每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删改或修改
。学
@
科网
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
Λ
）
，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（
）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
（
1
）
.
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；<
/p>
(2).
只允许修改
< br>10
处，多者（从第
11
处起）
不计分。
71.
When I
was little, Friday’s night was our family game
night. After supper, we would play card games of
all sort in
the sitting room. As the
kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how
many times I asked to watching them, my
parents would not to let me. They would
say to us that playing card games would help my
brain. Still I unwilling to
play the
games for them sometimes. I didn’t realize how
right my
parents are until I entered
high school. The games
my parents
taught me where I was a child turned out to be
very useful later in my life.
【答案】
When I was little,
in the sitting room. As
night was our family game
night. After supper, we would play card games of
all
kid, I loved to watch
cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to
them, my parents would not
let me. They would say to
unwilling to play the games
that playing card games
would help my brain. Still I
until I entered
them sometimes. I didn’t realize how
right my parents
high school. The games
my parents taught me
I was
a child turned out to be very useful later in my
life.
第二处：考查名词单复数。
all
表示三者或三者以上，后用名词复数。故把
sort
改为
sorts
。
第三处：考查冠词。这里表示
“
作为一个孩子
”
，
a
< br>用在表示泛指的单数名词前，
the
表示特指。故把
the
改为
a
。<
/p>
第四处：考查动词不定式。句意：无论我要求多少次要去看（卡
通片）
。用不定式表示目的。故把
watching
改为
watch
。
第五处：考查情态动词。
would
后跟动
词原形，故把
to
删除。学科！网
<
/p>
第六处：考查代词。句意：他们会对我说玩纸牌有助于大脑。偷换人称代词，是对
“
我
”
说，前面提到的
I
，
而不是
w
e
。故把
us
改为
me
。
第十处：考查宾语从句的连接词。句意：当我是个孩子的时候我父母教给我的纸牌游戏在我日后的生活中
证明非常有用。宾语从句连接词并不是表示地点状语，而是时间状语。故把
where
改为
when
。
点晴：名词作定语与名词所有格作定语的区别。一般来说，名词作定
语通常说明被修饰的词的性质，而名
词所有格作定语则强调对被修饰的词的所有（权）关
系或表示逻辑上的谓语关系。
“
the Party memb
ers
（党
员）
”
中，名词定语表示
members
的性质；
“the Party’s calls
（党的号召）
”
中，
Party
具有动作发出者的作
用，
calls
虽然是名词，却具有动作的含义。
a student teacher
实习教师，
a
student’s teacher
一位学生的老师。
【命题意图】
本类题通常主要考查学生对英语基本语言的准确掌握程度，
为以后的校对和准确表达
做准备。
【考试方向】
这类试题主要考查学生的基本的语法知识，主要是时态、非谓语动词、从句等的用法。还有
句子间的的连接成分，有时涉及篇章和逻辑关系。
【得分要点】熟练掌握中学阶段重要的语法项目，注意文章语句间的的逻辑关系。对每个句子进行逐一诊
断，对常见的错误类型成竹在胸。
【母题
1
】
【湖北省黄冈中学
2018
届高三
5
月适应性考试】
假定英语课上老师要求同
桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改
你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有
10
处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删
除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号
(
∧
)
，并在其下面
写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线
(
)
划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1
．每处错误及其修改均仅限一
词；
2
．只允许修改
10
处，多者
(
从第
11
处起
)
不计分。<
/p>
Good morning! I’m LiHua from
Hongxing Middle School. I’d like to give brief
introduction about myself. I’m
easy-
going and have various
hobby. I love sports, especial playing basketball
with my friends. I’m also keen on
listening to music to relax myself in
my spare time.
Between all the
subjects, English was my favourite and I’m good
at it. If it comes to my ideal major,
I’m quite interesting in international business
because I like meeting the people