托福写作范文：社会规则是否太严格

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北美托福独立写作题目为：

The rules that the whole societies today expect to young people to

follow and obey are too strict.(

这个社会要求年轻人遵守的规则太严格吗

?)

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2012.10.12NA The rules that the whole societies today expect to young people to follow and

obey are too strict.

When

it

comes

to

various

rules

that

young

people

have

to

follow,

some

people

claim

that

those

rules

are

too

stringent[A1]

,

therefore

stifling

individuality[A2]

.

But

others

argue

that

rules

are vital[A3] for the youngsters[A4] , and I am one of them.

In

the

family,

young

people

must

follow

some

rules

made

by

parents.

For

example,

many

children

are required to go back home immediately after school. Despite[A5] the strictness of the rule,

it is not unnecessary considering the fact that children may encounter[A6] various unexpected

dangers wandering in the street. Besides, I heard some of my friend complain that their parents

ask

them

to save money.

This complaint

is even more

unreasonable because

all

too often[A7] young

people

are

impulsive

buyers[A8]

and

family

rules

about

saving

money

cannot

be

ignored[A9]

.

Family

rules

do

not

end

up

here.

Probably

some

of

us

are

asked

to

respect

the

old

and

cherish

the

young.[A10]

This rule is also of vital importance for a harmonious[A11] family.

Schools and companies are also places where rules are miscellaneous[A12] . Take my school

rules as an example. The first rule, and probably the most controversial rule, is that students

must wear school

uniforms. Some

students

hate this rule, for

they believe

the

rule

stifles their

individuality. Nevertheless, there are good reasons for the rule: students in our school coming

from

different

family

backgrounds,

which

means

we

have

students

who

are

well-off[A13]

and

students

who have to rely on school loans[A14] to finish schooling. Under this circumstance, it is not

unreasonable that students are forced to wear school uniform. The abolition [A15] of the rule

will

lead

to

comparison

among

students,

which

may

cause

declining

test

scores

[A16]

and

degradation

of morality[A17] .

Last

but

not

least,

there

are

laws

that

young

people

have

to

obey

for

the

sake

of

[A18]

their

well-being[A19]

.

Laws

about

legal

drinking

age

are

advantageous

to

young

adults

’

physical

health.

It is a common knowledge that drinking at an early age is detrimental: it may cause mental

incapacity and excessive reliance on alcohol. Worse, some crimes are triggered[A20] by drinking

excessively, for drunken people always lack rational thinking and are easily irritated.

From

the

above

discussion

I

firmly

believe

that

rules,

no

matter

in

family,

schools

or

society,

are necessary and should be obeyed by young people. Only rule- abiding[A21] citizens are capable

of living a secure and prosperous life.

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