江苏省南京市部分区2020年中考英语一模解析版试卷精选汇编：书面表达专题

Yours

，

Li Hua

【分析】

【高分句型一】

You can communicate with them more

，

such as study

，

interests

，

hobbies

，

sports and so

on

． 你可以和他们多交流，比如学习，兴趣，爱好，运动等等．

communicate with

和

……

交流．

such as

例如

……

【高分句型二】

I

think

they'll

be

happy

to

talk

with

you

．

If

you

are

not

good

at

Chinese

，

you

will

have

difficulty communicating with them

你将有困难与他们沟 通．

I think+

宾语从句．

if

引导条件状语从句．

have difficulty doing sth

做某事有困难．

【解答】

Dear Amy

，

I am glad to learn that you're coming to China this summer

．

I'd be glad to give you some

advice

．

（ 点题）

In fact

，

Chinese students are very friendly and they will offer to help you

．

So

，

you don't

have to worry about getting along with them

．

You can communicate with them more

，

such as

study

，

interests

，

hobbies

，

sports and so on

．

【高分句型一】

I think they'll be happy to talk

with

you

．

If

you

are

not

good

at

Chinese

，

you

will

have

difficulty

communicating

with

them

．

【高分句型二】

I think you had better ask a student to help you

．

In addition

，

you should

learn everyday expressions from them as soon as possible

．

You should also know more about

Chinese customs

．

I'm sure you'll have a great time with them

．

（具体建议）

I hope my advice will help you

．

（希望）

Yours

，

Li Hua

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕 主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语

和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成 写作任务．

2020

年江苏省南京市 鼓楼区中考英语一模试卷

六、书面表达（满分

10

分）

34

．

（

10

分）

D aniel

写了一封邮件给青少年工作者

Anna

．请根据邮件内容，以

Anna

的名

义用英语给

Daniel

回一封电子邮件．

Dear Anna

，

I'm a Grade 9 student from Sunshine Middle School

．

My name is Daniel

．

My parents

want me to go on holiday with them this summer

．

They think it's safe for me to travel with

them and they can take care of me

．

But I prefer to travel with my friends because we can go

anywhere we like and we can play together

．

Do you think I should go with my

parents

？

What should I do

？

I'm looking forward to your reply

．

Yours sincerely

，

Daniel

注意：

1

． 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范．

2

．词数

80

左右（已给出的邮件开头和结尾不计入总词数）

．

3

．文中不得提及 有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名，人名等．

Dear Daniel

，

Thank you for your email

．

I know that you'll go on holiday this summer

．

．

Yours

，

Anna

【分析】

【高分句型一】

During

the

day

，

you

spend

so

much

time

at

school

that

your

parents

have

little

time

toget her

．白天，你在学校花了太多时间，你的父母很少有时间在一起．

< br>

spend…doing sth

花费

……

做某事．

【高分句型二】

If you travel with them on holidays

，

you can communicate with them better

．如果你在假期

和他们一起旅行，你可以更好地和他们交流．

if

引导条件状语从句．

【解答】

Dear Daniel

，

Thank you for your email

．

I know that you'll go on holiday this summer

．

I think you

should go on holiday with your parents

．

（表明观点）

During

the

day

，

you

spend

so

much

time

at

school

that

your

parents

have

little

time

toget her

．

【高分句型一】

So you communicate very little with them

．

If you travel with them on

holidays

，

you can communicate with them better

．

【高分句型二】

Not only will you spend

more time with them

，

but you'll make them know what you're thinking

．

We think it helps you

to get on well with your parents

．

（原因）

When you travel with them

，

you can talk about some lighthearted topics

．

You can take them

as

your good friends and express some of

your ideas to them

．

I think they will respect and

understand you

．

Yours

，

Anna

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题 准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语

和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作 任务．

2020

年江苏省南京市建邺 区中考英语一模试卷

六、书面表达（满分

15

分）

34

．

（

15

分）假如你是阳光中学的学生苏 华，你的美国笔友

David

给你 写了一封电子邮件，

想了解你对网课学习的看法和建议．请根据邮件内容，用英语给他写 一封回信．

Dear Su Hua

，

Glad to hear that everything goes well in Nanjing

，

and you have been back to school for

over two months

．

But now we have to stay home and study online because of the COVID

﹣

19

．