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作文题型
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1.
提纲式作文——观点对比选择题
2.
图表式作文——观点论证题(例子:用于抽象题目,举学习)
3.
图画式作文——现象阐释题(正
面)
/
问题解决题(负面
:
国家,人民)
写作段落分析
(两点提纲可分三段)
:
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2
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、
3
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描述(两幅图
/
表)→原因
/
意义
/
例子→评价(问题解
决
/
现象阐释)
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例子
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句
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(3-5
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写作步骤:
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审题(
2
-3min
)
:确定所写内容和结构
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构思提纲
(3-4min)
:文中词写不出时,套用事物本质;列出词语套入文中
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写作(
22-23min
)
:
字数够
,整齐
不能抄情景句
?
审查(
2
-3min
)
:主谓、时态、冠词、固定搭配、拼写错误
一
负面图画作文
【环境问题
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1
图画描述段
:
What
the
drawing
is
trying
to
present
is
the phenomena of
environment
destroyed/greenhouse
effect/the
side
effects
of
Internet
abuse
/the
employment
pressure/Values
,
which
seems
to
be
humorous
and
preposterous,
but
thought-provoking on second thoughts.
As is shown in the first cartoon,
people are
fleeing from
voracious sand dunes because they cut down all the
trees.
On
the
contrary,
the
people have returned carrying tools water and
samplings for the reforestation of
the
land.
2
图表描述段:
What
is
shown
in
the
table/chart/graph
above
indicates
that
dramatic
changes have taken lace in
people’s daily expense
between
1999 and 2008 ,and
the us
population
grew/fall
from about
2 million to 4 billion
In contrast, at least
70
wildlife
species bid farewell
to
the country over the same
period of time
.
It
is
obvious
that
the
extinction
of
wildlife
resulted
from
the population
explosion
.
The
statistics
of
rise
and
fall
seem to exist in isolation but closely related to
one another.
3
意义阐述段:
Undoubtedly, the
symbolic meaning of the picture subtly conveyed
should be given deep
consideration
—
the purpose of
the pictures are to show us that
due
attention has to be paid to
the decline
of ocean resources/ the side effects of
Internet abuse /The employment
pressure/Values
. Owing to have no
rational use and
cherish our valuable
assets
. If we let this situation go as
it is. We do not know how
we
will
be
in
the
future.
By
that
time,
our
environment/we
will
suffer
a
great
destruction/failure.
4
原因阐述段:
Currently,
more
attention
has
been
attracted
to
this
thought-provoking
the
phenomenon. As the central task of our society is
to “build a well
-off society in
an all-
round way”, people in
mounting numbers of
improving the
living standards
. But
why is
(_)
so prevailing. There
are, to my mind, plenty of contributing causes,
among
which the following ones are
particularly worth mentioning. One of the most
serious
ones
is
that
(_).
Another
fundamental
reason
which
should
not
be
neglected
is
that
(_)
What is
more, the biggest harm
of
(_)
is that it is an
obstruct to our building
a harmonious
society.
5
建议措施段:
In
view
of
the
seriousness
of
this
problem,
it
is
essential/
vital
to
tackle
it. The first way to cope with it is to
appeal to the authorities to workout laws and
regulations to ban the
Wasted
resources
/
greenhouse
effect/the
side
effects
of
Internet
abuse
/The
employment
pressure/
A
waste
of
time.
Besides,
concerted
effort should be
made to eliminate the negative influence
of
Wasted
resources
/
greenhouse effect/the side effects of
Internet abuse /The employment pressure/ A
waste of time
.
As
for
people,
they
should
develop
conscience
to
resist
the
temptation
to
(_)
with proper laws and an alert public,
we can safely predict that it will only be
a matter of time before
(_)
becomes thing of the past. It is goes
without saying that
a more brilliant
future will be waiting for us.
环境措施段:
This simple picture is
a wake-up call for the whole of the human race.
If this vivid image of the grim future
of our planet is not to become a reality, we
must
take
positive
steps
right,
now
to
put
an
end
the
plundering
of
the
Earth’s
natural
resources. It is
clear that the drawer of the picture is urging us
to start with a
campaign to save the
forests, which is something all of us can join by
urging our local
authorities
to
take
positive
measures
to
save
the
trees.
If
the
sense
of
responsibility
is greatly
aroused, harmony between man and the environment
will not be far away.
二
利弊型图画作文
1
观点
/
现状说明
【假冒伪劣】
As the picture given
depicts, the socialist market-oriented economy in
our country is developing rapidly, just
like a truck running at a high seed. But the
general public is surprised to find
that there are more and more fake and inferior
products seriously hampering the
expansion of our market economy. Consumers have
to
be
very
careful
in
purchasing
goods
and
services
they
need;
otherwise
they
will
fall
into the traps set by the illegal
manufacturer
【汽车太多
】
As the
picture given depicts, the socialist market-
oriented economy in
our country is
developing rapidly, just like a truck running at a
high seed. But, the
picture
presents
a
real
traffic
scene
in
which
endless
columns
of
vehicles
have
jammed
the
road,
making
movement
impossible.
Much
valuable
time
is
wasted
and
many
important
businesses
are
delayed
in
the
helpless
waiting
for
progress.
It’s
no
exaggeration to say that the
inconvenience and losses caused by traffic jams
are
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