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2021
年高考英语应用文写作必备素材与核心句式集锦
06
生态与环保
【真题再现】
（
2016
年，
北京卷）
假设你是红
星中学高三一班的学生李华。
你班同学参加了学校的
“
地
球日
”
系列活动。请
按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，以
“Actions for a Greener Ea
rth”
为题，给校
刊
“
英语角
”
写一篇英文稿件，介绍活动的全过程。
注意：词数不少于
60
< br>。
提示词：地球日
Earth
Day
[
参考范文
]
Actions for a Greener Earth
A week before Earth Day, posters were
put up around our school, calling upon us to join
in
the actions for a greener
earth.
Our
class
came
up
with
the
idea
to
make
better
use
of
used
materials.
We
brought
to
our
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classroom
worn
-
out clothes, pieces of
cardboard and empty plastic bottles and turned
those into
dolls, handbags, tissue
boxes and small vases. That weekend, we went to a
nearby neighborhood
and
gave
them
away
to
the
people
there.
All
were
very
happy
with
those
unexpected
gifts,
especially little kids and elderly
people. We did so well that we were invited to
share our idea and
experience with all
the students of our school.
We are very proud of ourselves and
believe we can do more for a better
world.
[
写作分析
]
话题比较常规，
整体难度适中。
“
地球日
”
系列活动属于保护环境的体裁内容，<
/p>
考生并不
陌生。内容主要包括：公告栏了解活动、分工制作、变废
为宝的宣传活动、主题讲座等。题
目要求按照四幅图的先后顺序，
以
“Actions for a Greener Earth”
< br>为题，
给校刊
“
英语角
”
写一篇
英文稿件，介绍活动的全过程。词数不
少于
60
词，参考词汇必须使用。使用一般过去时和
第一人称进行写作。
[
范文点评
]
范文使用了非谓语动词
calling
upon
us
to
join
in
the actio
ns
和
so...that
句型与宾语
从句
we can do more for a better
world
等，句式多样；还使用了固定词组
call
upon sb to do sth, join
in, come up
with, make use of, turn...into, give away, be
proud of
等，使作文内容变得丰富。
考点：情景作文
话题比较常规，
整体难度适中。
“
地球日
< br>”
系列活动属于保护环境的题材，
考生并不陌生。
内容主要包括：公告栏了解活动、分工制作、变废为宝的宣传活动、主题讲座等。一定要按
照四幅图的顺序来写，不可打乱顺序；注意行文的连贯性，适当使用一些连接词。
【经典演练
1
】
随着全球环境的恶化，越来越多的人选择过“低碳生活
(
low carbon life)
”
，即减少二氧
化碳的排放
,
低能量、低消耗低开支生活。请写一
篇
100
词左右的英语短文，倡议你
的同学
加入“低碳一族”
。
要点如下
:
1.
用手洗衣服；
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2.
多走楼梯，少乘电梯；
3.
逛超市自备购物袋；
4.
步行或者骑自行车上学。
注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[
高分范文
]
With the global warming getting worse,
more people choose to live a low carbon life for
the
purpose
of
reducing
greenhouse
gases.
As
students
we
have
the
responsibility
to
change
our
lifestyles
to
fit
the
world
better.
The
following
are
some
small
things
that
may
lead
to
improvement of the
environment.
Firstly, wash
your clothes by hand instead of using washing
machines. Secondly
，
don't
take
elevators
unless
it
is
necessary.
Climbing
stairs
does
good
to
your
health
and
the
environment.
Thirdly, remember to bring your own
shopping bags when you go to the supermarket.
Lastly, go to
school on foot or by
bicycle. Buses produce carbon dioxide,
too.
Let's take action and
be low carbon people from now on.
[
句子改写
]
用省略句改
写范文中划线的句子
Secondly, don't
take elevators unless necessary.
[
佳句临摹
]
佳句
1
：
Wi
th the global warming getting worse, more people
choose to live a low carbon
life for the purpose of reducing
greenhouse gases.
临摹
< br>1
：由于全班同学都盯着她看，她感到紧张。
She felt nervous with the whole class
staring at her.
佳句
2
：
Le's take action and be
low carbon people from now on.
< br>临摹
2
：如果你真的想要改变，你需要现在就采取行动。
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If you really want to
change, you need to take action at
present.
【经典演练
2
】
假若你是李华，
你班将举行一次
主题为
“
No White Pollution in Our
Campus
”
的班会，
你应邀写一篇发言稿。
注意
:1.
词数
1
00
左右；
2.
开头和结尾已给出
,
不计人总词数。
Good afternoon, everyone. I'm pleased
to have this chance to speak here.
Thank you for
listening.
[
高分范文
]
Good afternoon, everyone. I'm pleased
to have this chance to speak here.
As all of us can see, plastic and paper
bags are scattered everywhere in our school, such
as in
gardens,
in
building
corridors,
on
the
sports
ground,
and
even
under
the
trees,
which
makes
us
disgusted. It is hard to imagine how we
can study comfortably in this dirty
environment.
Obviously, it's
the bad habit of some students that contributes to
this embarrassment. Many
students buy
snacks wrapped in plastic or paper bags during the
class break. After eating the food,
they casually throw the bags away
regardless of where they are. If the present
situation continues,
so0n we might be
buried in an ocean of white rubbish. So let's take
action now to prevent it from
happening.
Thank
you for listening.
[
< br>句子改写
]
用
what
从句改写范文中划线的句子
Obviously, what contributes to this
embarrassment is the bad habit of some
students.
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[
佳句临摹
]
佳句
1
：
As
all of us can see, plastic and paper bags are
scattered everywhere. .. even
under the trees, which makes us
disgusted.
临摹
1
：使我感到遗憾的是，他没有说再见就走了。
He left without saying goodbye, which
made me regretful.
佳句
2
：
It
is hard to imagine how we can study comfortably in
this dirty environment.
临摹
2
：很难想象他一个人如何能在那座孤岛上生活二十年。
It
is
hard
to
imagine
how
he
managed
to
live
on
that
lonely
island
for
twenty
years
all
by
himself.
【写作宝典】
观点论证指的是在应用
文写作中，
需要根据题目的要求，
在提出自己的观点、
意见或建
议后，对自己所给的观点、意见或建议进行进一步地论证说明，
以让他人明白你的意思。
一、常见句式例析
1. Most
students agree that it helps them develop the
habits of reading aloud.
很多学生认为它有
助于培养朗读的习惯。
2.
Therefore, more attention should be given to
teaching and learning spoken English.
因此
要更加
注意教学英语口语。
3.
Second, some of the products sold online are
probably fake ones due to lack of supervision.
其
次
,
由于缺乏监督
,
有些网上出售的产品很可能是假货。
4. There is no doubt that it is very
convenient for us to have online
shopping.
毫无疑问
,
网上购物
很方便。
5.
Ｍ
any students
rely so much on the Internet that they have lost
their ability to create.
很多学生
过度依赖互联网
,
以致于失去了创新能力。
二、技巧点拨
1.
注意审题
,
避免缺漏信息点。
一般而言
,
观点论证的文章通常都是总～分或总～分～