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2019
年高考英语赢在微点书面表达
审题谋篇
范例：
(2016
·课标全国Ⅲ
)
假定
你是李华，
与留学生朋友
Bob
约好一
起去书店，
因故不能赴约。
请给他写封
邮件，内容包括：
1
．表示歉意；<
/p>
2.
说明原因；
3.
另约时间。
注意：
1.
词数
100
左右；
2.
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
第一步
认真审题，确定要点
体裁
道歉信
人称
第一
/
二
人称
时态
一般现
在时
结构
写信目的→具体
内容→表达期望
要点
①表达歉意；②说明失约
原因；③另约时间；④再
次表示歉意。
第二步
遣词造句，构建亮点
1
．我不能守约，因为我要参加重要的班会。
①高级词汇：
I
fail
to
keep
the
appointment,
because
I
have
to
attend
an
important class meeting.
②高级
句式
(
表语从句＋非谓语动词
)
：
The
reason
why
I
fail
to
keep
the
appointment is that I have an important
class meeting to attend.
2
．如
果不这样的话，告诉我什么时间最适合你。
高级句式
(
省略句＋非谓语动词
)
：
If not,_please keep me informed of
what time
suits you best.
第三步
美化成文，誊写清楚
范文
Dear
Bob
，
I'm
sorry
to
tell
you
that
I
cannot
go
to
the
bookstore
together
with
you
this
Friday afternoon. I
have just found that I have to attend an important
conference that
afternoon. I don’t hope
the sudden change will cause you too much
trouble.
What about going on
Saturday morning? We can set out early so that
we'll have
more
time
to
read
and
select
books.
If
it's
convenient
for
you,
let's
meet
at
8:30
outside the school gate. If not, please
let me know what time suits you best. I should
be available any time after school next
week.
Yours
，
Li Hua
一、不可不记的书信类常用词汇
1
．常用单词
1
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8
①
activity n.
活动
②
volunteer n.
志愿者
③
information n.
信息
④
preparation n.
准备
⑤
sincerely adv.
诚挚地
⑥
appreciate v.
感激
⑦
grateful adj.
感激的
⑧
convenient adj.
方便的
⑨
invitation n.
邀请
⑩
introduction n.
介绍
2
．常用短语
①
get along with sb.
和某人相处
②
be grateful / thankful to
sb. for (doing) sth
感激某人
③
be helpful / beneficial to
...
对
……
有帮助
/
有益
④
at one's earliest
convenience
在某人方便的时候
⑤
look forward to (doing)
sth
期待
⑥
give/lend sb. a hand
帮某人忙
⑦
take sth. into account /
consideration
考虑某事
⑧
promote the friendship
促进友谊
⑨
express warm
welcome/sincere gratitude to sb.
对某人表达热
烈欢迎
/
诚挚的感谢
⑩
develop sb.'s interest
培养某人的兴趣
?
as
planned/scheduled/arranged
按照计划
< br>/
安排
?
be qualified for
有资格
二、
9
组不可不记的书信类万用句式
1
．
道歉信
(1)
吸引阅卷人开头句
①
I'm
writing
to
apologize
for
...
/
I
am
writing
to
say
sorry
for ...
/
I’m
writing to make an
apology to you for …
我写这封信是因
……
道歉。
②
I am writing to
express/convey my heartfelt apology to you.
我写信向你表达真切的歉意。
(2)
吸引阅卷人篇中句
③
I am sorry for my not being
able to
attend your party
due to the fact that ...
我非常抱歉不能参加晚会是因为
……
④
The reason why
I
fail to show up
is that
I
have something urgent to attend to.
我未能出现的原因是我有急事要处理。
2
．
求助信
(1)
吸引阅卷人开头句
①
I'm writing to you to ask
whether you could do me a favor.
我写信是想问
您能否帮助我。
②
I'm sorry to bother you,
but I have some difficulties here and I need your
help.
很抱歉打扰您，但我有些困难需要得到您的帮助。
2
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8
③
I
have
some
difficulty
in
doing ...which
bothers
me
a
lot.
So
I
have
no
choice
but to turn to you for help.
我在做
……
方面有困难，这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能向
您求助。
(2)
吸引阅卷人篇中句
④
I can't
concentrate on
my
lessons these days, and
I
failed in
the last exam,
which worries me a lot.
这些日子我不能专心学习，上次考试我没有及格，这使我很着急。
⑤
Faced with / Facing so many
difficulties, I have to turn to you for
help.
面对如此多的问题，我不得不向您求助。
3
．
感谢信
(1)
吸引阅卷人开头句
①
I'm
extremely
grateful/thankful
to
you
for
your
unselfish
assistance
during ...
感谢你在<
/p>
……
期间给予我无私的帮助。
②
I'm
writing
to
convey/express
my
gratitude
for
your
kind/generous
help
during ...
我写信感谢您在
……
期间对我友好
/
慷慨的帮助。
③
I would like to take this
opportunity to express my great appreciation for
your timely help and assistance.
我想，借此机会表达对您给予我们及时的帮助
和支持的感谢。
(2)
吸引阅卷人篇中句
④
Many thanks for all the
things you have done in helping us to ...
非常感
谢您为帮助我们
……
所做的一切。
⑤
Thanks
to
/
With
your
generous
/
selfless
/
kind
help,
I
have
made
great
progress.
多亏你慷慨的
/
无私的
/
友好的帮助，我取得了巨大的
进步。
Without your generous /
selfless / kind help,
I wouldn't have
made such great
progress.
如果
没有你慷慨的
/
无私的
/
友好的帮助，我不会取得这么大的进步。
Thank you for your generous / selfless
/ kind help, without which
I wouldn't
have made such great progress.
< br>多谢你慷慨的
/
无私的
/
友好的帮助，如果没有你的
帮助，我不会取得这么大的进步
(3)
吸引阅卷人结尾句
⑥
It
was
kind
and
generous
of
you
to
do
this
for
me,
and
I
appreciate
it
more than I can say.
你对我如此慷慨，我真是感激不尽。
⑦
I wish there were a better
word than “thanks” to express my appreciation
for your generous help.
任何语言都不能表达我的真挚谢意。
⑧
I
will
be
more
than
pleased
if
I
have
the
opportunity
to
repay
your
kindness by ...
如果我有机会通过
……
报答你的好意，我会非常高兴。
4
．
建议信
3
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8
(1)
吸引阅卷人开头句
①
I have learned that you
have some trouble in .... and I would like to give
/
offer you the following suggestions.
我知道你在
……
方面有困难，
因此我想给你
提如下一些建议。
②
You've asked me for
advice with regard to / regarding / on ... and
I'll try
to make some useful / helpful
/ practical suggestions here.
关于
……
你向我征求建议，在此，我尽量提出一些有用的
/
有帮助的
/
实用的
建议。
③
When
it
comes
to
/
As
for ...,
the
following
are
my
suggestions.
/
my
suggestions are as
follows.
当涉及
/
关于
……
，我的建议如下。
< br>
④
I'm writing to give you
some suggestions / give you a hand.
我写这
封信的目的是给你一些建议
/
帮助。
(2)
吸引阅卷人篇中句
⑤
In my opinion / As far as
I'm concerned / Personally, it would be wise to
take
the following action.
在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。
⑥
When it comes to / As for
..., I would like to suggest /advise / recommend
you
should ...
当
涉及
/
关于
……
，我建议你应该
……
⑦
I think it would be of
benefit / beneficial if you ...
我认为如果
……
，将会受益。
⑧
Doing ... is a good / great
/ better choice.
做
……
< br>是一个好的
/
棒的
/
更好的选择
(3)
吸引阅卷人结尾句
⑨
I will be glad if you will
take my advice / suggestions into consideration.
如果你能考虑我的建议我将非常高兴。
⑩
I
hope
you
will
find
my
suggestions
/
advice
helpful
/
useful
/
practical
/
beneficial.
我希望你
认为我的建议有帮助
/
有用
/
实用
/
有益。
5
．
邀请信
(1)
吸引阅卷人开头句
①
It's my pleasure // a great
honour / privilege for me to invite you to join
us.
非常荣幸地邀请你加入我们。
②
I wonder if I / we have the
honor to invite you to the party.
我想知道我
/
我们是否能有幸邀请你参加派对。
③
I'd
like
to
invite
you
to
join
us
for
a
visit
to
the
nearby
nursing
home
next
Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival.
我想邀请您一起去参观
……
It was a privilege to work with him.
和他在一起工作是一项殊荣。
I hope to have the privilege of working
with him again.
但愿有幸与他再度合作
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