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届高考英语模拟题之书面表达精选精析（一）
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概要写作类
25
篇（一）
1.
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2020·
山东青岛市
·
高三期中）
阅读下面短文，
根据其内容写一篇
60
词左右的内容概要。
There are some important regulations
parents can take to make sure their kids use cell
phones
in
a
safe
and
responsible
way.
When
kids
know
what
the
consequences
are
when
rules
aren’t
followed, that makes life more
predictable for them.
Most
kids are not paying for their cell phones or their
cell phone plans, so if you pay for it,
you own it, which means you have the
right to take it away anytime if they disobey the
rules you
set up earlier.
After a kid has a cell phone, suddenly
parents discover data runs out half way through
the
month. This can get expensive and
your kids need to know how to monitor their use.
Also, teen
cell phone addiction should
be limited. Generally, it’s a good idea to have no
cell phone policy
while they are doing
homework and at bedtime. Come to agreement in
advance about what they
are and aren’t
allowed to download on their cell phone. There are
some really bad apps for kids
that you
don’t want on their phones.
Make
sure
your
kids
understand
how
to
set
up
their
privacy.
Talk
with
them
about
why
guarding their privacy is so important.
Many teens truly have no concept about everything
that a
cell phone can share about them
including personal information and their
location.
You
want
to
cover
what
is
and
isn’t
appropriate
to
share
via
a
cell
phone.
This
definitely
means photos and language used in
emails and on social media. But don’t forget
simpler things
like providing their
address, their age or what school they go to
online.
Lastly, there are
times and places when using one’s cell phone is
not appropriate. In movie
theaters or
during class time at school the phone should be on
silent and put away. Additionally,
when
someone
is
having
a
face
to
face
conversation
with
them,
they
need
to
be
looking
at
the
person, not their phone.
Parents can make rules to guide their
kids to use cell phones safely and responsibly.
(
要点
【答案】
1) First,
parents have the right to determine how to use
cellphones because they own them.
(
要点
2) Besides, parents
should teach kids to use cell phones wisely.
(
要点
3) Lastly, it is
important to
make sure they know how to
protect their privacy. Meanwhile, when and where
to use cell phones
should also be told.
(
要点
4)
【分析】
本文是一篇说明文。
文章介绍了父母可以采取一些重要的规定确保孩子安全、
负责地使用手
机。
【详解】
1
要点摘录
①There are
some important regulations parents can take to
make sure their kids use cell phones in
a safe and responsible way.
① so if you pay for it, you own it,
which means you have the right to take it away
anytime if they
disobey the rules you
set up earlier.
① This can
get expensive and your kids need to know how to
monitor their use. Generally, it’s a
good idea to have no cell phone policy
while they are doing homework and at bedtime. Come
to
agreement in advance about what they
are and aren’t allowed to download on their cell
phone.
① Make sure your
kids understand how to set up their
privacy.
①You want to cover
what is and isn’t appropriate to share via a cell
phone.
① Lastly, there are
times and places when using one’s cell phone is
not appropriate.
2.
缜密构思
将第
3
点进行整理概括，将第
4
、
5
两个要点进行重组
3.
遣词造句
①Parents can make rules to guide their
kids to use cell phones safely and
responsibly.
①Parents have
the right to determine how to use cellphones
because they own them.
①Parents should teach kids to use cell
phones wisely.
①It is
important to make sure they know how to protect
their privacy.
①When and
where to use cell phones should also be
told.
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1] It is
important to make sure they know how to protect
their privacy.
（
使用了
it
作形
式主语，概括第四段的内容，表达非常高级。
）
[
高分句型
2] When and
where to use cell phones should also be told.
（疑问词
+
不定式做主语，
概括了最后一段的内容，用法比较高级）
2.
（
2020·
上海师范大学附属外国语中学高三期
中）
Directions: Reading the following
passage.
Summarize the idea and the
main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60
words. Use your own
words as far as
possible.
The UN's
Millennium Development Goals included the ambition
that by 2015 all the world's
children
would complete primary school. This has largely
been achieved: nine out of ten children
are
now
enrolled.
Alas,
the
figure
is
not
as
impressive
as
it
sounds.
Even
though
most
of
the
world's children go to
school, an awful lot of them learn pretty much
nothing there. According to a
recent
World Bank
study
of
seven
sub
-
Saharan
African
countries,
half
of
nine
-
year
-
olds
cannot
read
a
simple
word
and
three
-
quarters
cannot
read
a
simple
sentence.
The
reason
is
terrible
teaching: only 7%
of teachers studied had the minimum knowledge
needed to teach reading and
writing
effectively.
Paying
teachers
more,
in
the
hope
of
recruiting
better
ones,
is
not
the
answer.
In
poor
countries,
teachers
are
well
paid
by
local
standards—annual
salaries
are
four
times
GDP
per
person in
India. Nor does raising or reducing pay seem to
make much difference: neither a sharp
cut in Pakistan in the late 1990s nor a
sharp increase in Indonesia after 2005 had any
impact on
learning outcomes.
Several recent studies suggest
ed
-
tech can help. It seems
to bring about big improvements in
poor
countries. In a study of a range of interventions
in poor countries—including smaller class
sizes, incentives for teachers and
pupils—tech had the biggest effect.
Some
of
the
scarce
resources
being
spent
on
teachers
could
therefore
be
better
spent
on
ed
-
tech.
That
does
not
mean
dumping
computers
on
schools
in
the
hope
that
children
will
understand how to use them, a
misconception on which plenty of money has been
wasted. Instead,
it means providing
schools with software that children can use with
minimal help from adults, that
gets
things right more often than the teachers do, that
adjusts itself to the children’s ability, that
sends teachers hints about what they
are supposed to be teaching.
Technology is no cure all. Good
traditional teacher are not out of date, and are
never likely to
be. And authorities
need to hold teachers to account. But
ed
-
tech can help greatly—by
assisting
the best teachers and, most
importantly, making up for the failings of the
worst.
【答案】
For
the ambition that by 2015 all the world's children
would complete primary school, it
has
largely been accomplished. But several recent
studies have shown that
ed
-
tech can help the
best teachers and make up for the
failings of the worst. Because the technology is
not everything,
the authorities should
make teachers bear the responsibility.
【分析】
这是一篇说明文。文章讲述
了，在
2015
年前，联合国让全世界所有儿童都能完成小学学
业
ed
-
tech
的雄心壮志的千年发展在很大程度上已经实现了。
但最近几项研究表明，
（
教学技术）
可以起到帮助作用，
帮助最好的老师和弥补最坏情况下的失败。
但技术不是万能的，
当局需
要让教师负起责任。
【详解】
1
要点摘录
①The UN's
Millennium
Development
Goals
included
the
ambition
that
by
2015
all
the
world's
children would complete primary school.
This has largely been achieved: nine out of ten
children
are now enrolled.
①Several recent studies suggest
ed
-
tech can help.
①Technology is no cure all. Good
traditional teacher are not out of date, and are
never likely to be.
And authorities
need to hold teachers to account.
①But ed
-
tech can
help greatly—by assisting the best teachers and,
most importantly, making up
for the
failings of the worst.
2.
缜密构思将
4
个要点进行重组整合。
3.
遣词造句
For
the
ambition
that
by
2015
all
the
world's
children
would
complete
primary
school,
it
has
largely been
accomplished.
But several recent studies have shown
that ed
-
tech can help the
best teachers and make up for the
failings of the worst. But technology
is not everything, the authorities should make
teachers bear
the
responsibility.
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1] But
several recent studies have shown
that
ed
-
tech can help the best
teachers and
make up for the failings
of the worst.
运用了
that
< br>引导的宾语从句，
对原文倒数第三段和最后一
段进行了概
括。
[
高分句型
2]Because
the technology is not everything, the authorities
should make teachers bear
the responsib
ility.
运用了
Because
引
导的原因状语从句，对原文最后一段进行了概括。
3.
（
2020·
山东青岛市
< br>·
高三期中）
阅读下面短文，
根
据其内容写一篇
60
词左右的内容概要。
Parents usually teach their children
how to cross the street safely—by looking both
ways for
cars. But do they also teach
them to put away their cellphones? According to
statistics from years
of studies, they
almost never say so. In view of this, the city of
Honolulu, Hawaii wants everyone
to
learn that lesson.
Texting
while crossing the street will soon be banned in
the city. Beginning on October
24
，
you can be fined from$$15
to$$99 if you step into a Honolulu street while
looking at your phone.
Honolulu is the
first major U.S. city to ban what is called
“distracted walking”. It recently passed a
law, which says no pedestrian shall
cross a street or highway while viewing a mobile
electronic
device.
The
law
includes
all
electronic
devices
with
screens,
from
cellphones,
tablets,
gaming
devices,
digital
cameras
to
laptop
computers.
However,
the
law
does
permit
an
exception:
pedestrians may
use such devices in the street to call emergency
services and rescue workers, such
as
firefighters and police officers.
Pedestrian deaths have been increasing
as the use of cellphones rises in the past few
years.
The Governors Highway Safety
Association, or GHSA, says pedestrian deaths in
the United States
increased 25 percent
between 2010 and 2015. That trend continued in
2016 with the number of
pedestrian
deaths rising to almost 6, 000,
11
％
higher than
in 2015.
Other
U.S.
cities
may
follow
Honolulu.
The
state
of
Washington
was
the
first
to
outlaw
distracted driving
back in 2007. Now, 46 other states as well as
Washington D. C.
，
Puerto
Rico,
Guam and the U.S. Virgin Islands,
have laws against texting while
driving.
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【答案】
One possible
version:
Despite
general
guidance
on
road
safety,
seldom
do
parents
ask
their
children
to
set
aside
their phones when they
need to cross a street. Honolulu has issued a ban
on distracted walking.
Whoever violates
it shall face fines of $$15 to $$99. However, the
law does allow emergency calls.
With
cellphones causing increasing pedestrian deaths,
more US cities may follow suit to improve
road safety.
【分析】
这是一篇新闻报道。文章讲
述了，檀香山已经颁布了禁止分心行走的禁令，违反者将面临
15
至
99
美元的罚款；但是，法律允许紧急呼叫。随着手机导致
越来越多的行人死亡，更多
的美国城市可能会效仿，以改善道路安全。
< br>
【详解】
1
要点摘录
①Parents
usually
teach
their
children
how
to
cross
the
street
safely—by
looking
both
ways
for
cars. But do they also teach them to
put away their cellphones?
①Texting while crossing the street will
soon be banned in the city. Beginning on October
24,you
can be fined from $$15 to $$99 if
you step into a Honolulu street while looking at
your phone.
①However, the
law does permit an exception: pedestrians may use
such devices in the street to
call
emergency services and rescue workers, such as
firefighters and police officers.
①Pedestrian deaths have been increasing
as the use of cellphones rises in the past few
years.
①Other U.S. cities
may follow Honolulu.
2.
缜密构思将
5
个要点进行重组整合。
3.
遣词造句
①Despite general guidance on road
safety, seldom do parents ask their children to
set aside their
phones when they need
to cross a street.
①Honolulu has issued a ban on
distracted walking.
①Whoever violates it shall face fines
of $$15 to $$99.
①However,
the law does allow emergency calls.
①With
cellphones
causing
increasing
pedestrian
deaths,
more
US
cities
may
follow
suit
to
improve road
safety.
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1] Despite
general guidance on road safety, seldom do parents
ask their children to set
aside their
phones when they need to cross a street.
用了
seldom
放句首，主谓部分倒装结构，
后面用了
when
引导的时间状语从句，对第一段
前半部分你进行概括。
[
高分句型
2] Whoever
violates it shall face fines of $$15 to $$99.
用了
Whoever
引导的主语从句
对第二段进行了概括，表达非常高级。
[
高分句型
3] With
cellphones causing increasing pedestrian deaths,
more US cities
may follow
suit to improve road safety.
用了
with
复合结构概括了最后两段内容。
4.
（
2020·
浙江湖州市
·
湖州中学高三月考）阅读下面短
文，根据其内容写一篇
60
词左右的
内
容概要
From
the
health
point
of
view,
we
are
living
in
a
wonderful
age,
immunized
from
birth
against many of the
most dangerous diseases and freed from the once
deadly illnesses thanks to
modern drugs
and surgery.
But though the possibility
of living a long and happy life is greater,
every day we witness the unbelievable
killings of men, women and children on the roads.
It is a
never
-
ending
battle which man is losing against the car.
Thousands of people the world over are
killed each year and we are quietly
sitting back and letting it happen.
It has been rightly said that when a
man is sitting behind a steering wheel, his car
becomes
the extension of his
personality. There is no doubt that the car often
brings out a man’s very worst
qualities. People who are normally
quiet and pleasant may become unrecognizable when
they are
behind
a
wheel.
All
their
hidden
frustrations
and
disappointments
seem
to
be
brought
to
the
surface by the act of
driving.
The
surprising
thing
is
that
society
smiles
gently
on
the
driver
and
seems
to
forgive
his
behavior.
Everything
is
done
for
his
convenience.
Cities
are
allowed
to
become
almost
uni
nhabitable
（不宜居住的）
because of
heavy traffic; towns are made ugly by huge car
parks; the
countryside is ruined by
road networks; and the mass annual deaths becomes
nothing but a number,
to be
conveniently forgotten.
It
is high time rules were created to reduce this
senseless waste of human life. Here are a few
examples of some of the things that
might be done. The driving test should be
standardized and
made far more
difficult than it is; all vehicles should be put
through strict tests for safety; present
drinking
and
driving
laws
should
be
made
much
stricter;
maximum
and
minimum
speed
limits
should be required on
all roads. These measures may sound strict. But
surely nothing should be
considered as
too severe if it results in reducing the annual
loss of human life. After all, the world
is for human beings, not
cars.
______________________
__________________________________________________
_______
________________________________
_______________________________________________
__________________________________________
_____________________________________
__
_____________________________________________
【答案】
One possible
version:
Despite
the
fact
that
we
are
now
living
a
healthy
life,
we
should
in
no
case
ignore
car
accidents which kill a shockingly large
number of people annually. The reasons for the
tragedies
are drivers' disrespect for
human life and society’s tolerance for their
selfish behavior. To try to
avoid such
a meaningless waste of human life, severe measures
concerning drivers, vehicles and
traffic laws and rules should be taken
immediately.
【分析】
本文是一篇议论文。
由机动车带来的事故给社会带来了巨大的伤
亡和伤害，
文章认为导致这
一悲剧的原因是车辆驾驶员对生命的
不尊重以及社会对司机的容忍。
最后给出了一系列严格
的建议措
施。
【详解】
1.
要点摘录
①.From the health point of view, we are
living in a wonderful age
。
①.Thousands of people the world over
are killed each
year and we are quietly
sitting back and
letting it
happen.
①.It has been
rightly said that when a man is sitting behind a
steering wheel, his car becomes the
extension of his
personality.
①.The
surprising
thing
is
that
society
smiles
gently
on
the
driver
and
seems
to
forgive
his
behavior.
①.It is high time rules were created to
reduce this senseless waste of human
life.
①.The driving test
should be standardized and made far more difficult
than it is;
①.All vehicles
should be put through strict tests for
safety;
①.Present drinking
and driving laws should be made much
stricter;
①.Maximum and
minimum speed limits should be required on all
roads.
2.
缜密构思将第
1
、
2
两个要点进
行重组；
将第
3
、
4
两个要点进行整合重组；
将第
5
、
6
、
7
、
8
、
9
五个要点进行整合重组。
3.
遣词造句
① Despite the fact that we are now
living a healthy life, we should in no case ignore
car accidents
which kill a shockingly
large number of people annually.
① The reasons for the tragedies are
drivers' disrespect for human life and society’s
tolerance for
their selfish
behavior.
① To try to avoid
such a meaningless waste of human life, severe
measures concerning drivers,
vehicles
and traffic laws and rules should be taken
immediately.
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1]
：
Despite the fact that we
are now living a healthy life, we should in no
case ignore
car accidents which kill a
shockingly large number of people annually.
运用一个复杂的主从复
合句对原文第一段进行了概括。
that
引导的同位语从句概括了第一句的内容，
which
引导的
定语从句概括了第二、三句的内容。主句
“we should in no case ignore car accidents”
则对最后
一句的观点进行合理转化。
[
高分句型
2]
：<
/p>
To try to avoid such a meaningless waste
of human life, severe measures concerning
drivers, vehicles and traffic laws and
rules should be taken immediately.
一个复杂的
简单句概括
了原文最后一段的所有内容。首先，
用不定式作目的
状语概括了第一句的内容；其次，
用现
在分词结构
“concerning
drivers,
vehicles
and
traffic
laws
and
rules”
作后置定语修饰
“sev
ere
measures”
概括了本段剩余的全部内容。
5.
（
202
0·
浙江湖州市
·
湖州中学高三月考）
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇
60
词左右的
内容概要。
Which is more
environmentally friendly, paper or plastic? There
was a time when a trip to the
supermarket in the United States often
ended with a simple question from the
cashier:
plastic?
While all types of bags have some
influence on the environment, it has long been
supposed
that
paper
bags
are
kinder.
They
are
made
from
a
renewable
source,
break
down
easily,
burn
without giving off thick smoke and can
be recycled. However, the producing process behind
paper
bags uses more energy than that
of plastic ones.
Studies
show
that
paper
bag
production
requires
four
times
as
much
energy
as
plastic
bag
production.
And
the
amount
of
water
used
to
make
them
is
twenty
times
higher.
Besides,
the
influence
on
forests
is
very
serious.
It
takes
about
fourteen
million
trees
to
produce
ten
billion
paper bags, which
happens to be the number of bags used in the
United States yearly. In terms of
recycling,
the
idea
that
paper
bags
are
more
environmentally
friendly
than
plastic
ones
can
be
quickly
discarded. Research shows it requires about98%less
energy to recycle plastic than it does
paper.
Even
though paper bags might be more harmful than
plastic ones, plastic still seems to be
considered by governments as the more
harmful of the two. In Ireland, for example, a tax
has been
introduced to discourage the
use of plastic bags. People have to pay 22 cents
for every plastic bag,
and as a result,
their use has dropped quickly. There’s no doubt
that it makes more sense to reuse
these
bags. However, we don’t seem to be doing that at
present. That may be because they fall
apart
quickly.
If
so,
cloth
bags
are
a
better
choice,
but
still,
their
production
also
has
a
bad
influence on the environment. So what
to do? How should we answer the question of
plastic?
help the
environment?
_______________
__________________________________________________
______________
_________________________
__________________________________________________
____
___________________________________
____________________________________________
__________________
【答案】
Paper bags have long
been thought to be more environmentally friendly
than plastic ones
because of the
renewable advantage. But researches argue/indicate
that paper bags may consume
more
energy. Since more water is used to produce paper
bags and huge numbers of trees are cut
down to make paper bags, we are
reminded to think of more ways to protect the
environment.
【分析】
本文是一篇说明文。
本文将纸袋和塑料袋进行了一系列的对比，
发现纸袋并不环保。
众所周
知，
塑料袋对环境的危害很大，
而可循环利用的布袋子则是一个更好的方法
，
但布袋的生产
制作也不免对环境造成影响，最后作者提出一个
问题：我们该如何保护环境？
【详解】
1
要点摘录
①While all
types of bags have some influence on the
environment, it has long been supposed that
paper bags are kinder.
①They are made from a renewable source,
break down easily, burn without giving off thick
smoke
and can be recycled.
①Studies
show
that
paper
bag
production
requires
four
times
as
much
energy
as
plastic
bag
production.
①The
amount of water used to make them is twenty times
higher.
①It takes about
fourteen million trees to produce ten billion
paper bags.
①It seems that
we first need to ask ourselves one more general
question:
environment?
2.
缜密构思将第
1
、
2
两个要点进行重组，将第
4
、
5
两个要点进行整合。
3.
遣词造句
Paper bags have long been thought to be
more environmentally friendly than plastic ones
because
of the renewable advantage.
Researches argue/indicate
that paper bags may consume more
energy.
More water is used
to produce paper bags and huge numbers of trees
are cut down to make paper
bags.
We are
reminded to think of more ways to protect the
environment.
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1] Paper
bags have long been thought to be more
environmentally friendly than plastic
ones because of the renewable advantage
.
运用比较级形式对原文第一段和第二段进行了概括。
其中现在
完成时的被动语态表达高级。
[
高分
句型
2]
：
But
researches argue/indicate that paper bags may
consume more energy.
用
that
引导宾语从句对第四段进行了概括，表达高级。
6.
（
2020·
< br>浙江高三月考）阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇
60
词
左右的内容概要。
It's not just your
mom's arbitrary rule; across cultures and
throughout history,
elbows(
手肘）
on the table have
long been considered unacceptable behavior.
Indeed, the Bible warns of putting
your
elbows on the table, and in 1530, Dutch
philosopher Erasmus repeated the same rule. Even
the
etiquette(
礼节）
experts
don't
advise
it.
So,
why
have
elbows
on
the
table
always
been
considered rude?
For earlier civilizations, this rule
functioned to prevent possible violence at the
table.
manners prevented us from leaving
our space and starting a
people
saw you
-
as
considerate or trying hard,
place
setting's fork and knife already act as an
imaginary boundary for bur space at the table, so
ignoring
or
breaking
that
border
indicates
that
you
have
no
regard
for
order
and
are
therefore
potentially
mentally ill
-
who: knows what
else you're capable of!
Today,while
keeping
your
elbows
off
the
table
can't
be
traced
back'
to
a
single
culture
or
civilization, it more belongs to the
universal language of principle, which expresses
two ideas, that
at mealtime one
shouldn't do anything that inconveniences other
diners, and that a meal is a formal
occasion where' one shouldn't behave in
a casual way.
However,that's
not to say that in the here and now leaving
your' elbows on the
bring
dishonor upon your family. Manners develop with
the times to meet our needs and feelings.
In fact,some body language now suggests
that elbows on the table are a sign of appearing
engaged
and focused on the conversation
at hand.
Above all,being
considerate, respectful, 'and honest is more
important 'than knowing which
fork to
use. Whether it's a handshake or a hug, it's the
sincerity behind and good intentions of the
action that matter most
【答案】
Possible version
I
Putting elbows on the
table is always considered a taboo in different
cultures and historical
periods.
（要点一）
In
the past,the rule helped to avoid probable
conflicts at table as it left people's
space inviolate.
Today,as a
universal principle, it conveys the message that
one shouldn't
（
要点二）
trouble
other diners but behave
well.(
要点三）
Whereas,with
manners developing, placing elbows
on
the table equals showing interest and
concentration in some
situations.(
要点四）
Anyway,what
matters most is the underlying
sincerity and
consideration.(
要点五）
79
words
Possible version
II
It has long been regarded
improper to put elbows on the
table.(
要点一）
Actually, for
earlier
civilizations,people
did
so
to
avoid
possible
violence
during
the
meal.(
要点二）
Nowadays,as
a
universal principle, it indicates that
one shouldn't bother others or behave casually at
mealtime.(
要
点
三
）
Nevertheless,
it
isn't
always
considered
bad
-
mannered,
but
it
means
people
are
concentrated and
engaged.
（要点四）
All in all,
what matters most is people's good intention and <
/p>
genuineness.(
要点五）
7
3 words
【分析】
本篇书面表达是概要写作。
【详解】
读完所给文章后用不多于<
/p>
60
个词总结文章要点，要用自己的语言，不能用文章的原句。这
是一篇议论文，
文章主要讲述了礼节。胳膊肘放在桌子上总是被
认为是不礼貌的。
然而，随
着礼仪的发展，它并不总是被认为是
没礼貌的
,
在某些情况下，将肘部放在桌子上等于表示
出兴趣和注意力的集中。无论如何，最重要的是内在的真诚和体贴。
<
/p>
（
1
）确定体裁，本文是议论文。明确主
题（
why
have
elbows
on
the
table
always
been
considered
rude?
）及结构。
（
2
）划主题句，找关键信息。这篇概要写作是写全文概要，不是写某一部分
的概要，或
者就某些问题写出要点。本文各段主题句是：
1. For earlier civilizations, this rule
functioned to prevent possible violence at the
table.
2. Today,while
keeping your elbows off the table can't be traced
back to a single culture or
civilization, it more belongs to the
universal language of principle.
3. However,that's not to say that in
the here and now leaving your elbows on the table
will
bring dishonor upon your
family.
4. Above all,being
considerate, respectful, and honest is more
important than knowing which
fork to
use.
(3)
改写。注意要点之
间的衍接，要用适当的关联词语要通全文。
(4)
计算词数，看是否符合规定的词数要求。
从范文
中可以看出作者对原文要点的理解正确并呈现完整；应用语法结构和词汇准确；
上下文连
贯；要点表达独立；完全使用了自己的语言，语法结构准确，词汇应用丰富；所
写内容与
所提供内容密切相关，无文章原句。
【点睛】
文章思路清晰，
语言规范，
段落整齐，
语篇连贯，
层次清晰。
使用了较为高级的句式
:
that
引导的同位语从句
Today,as
a
universal
principle,
it
conveys
the
message
that
one
shouldn't
trouble
other
diners
but
behave
引导的主语从句
Anyway,what
matters
most
is
the
underlying sincerity and consideration.
高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出
了作者高水
平的英语表达能力。
7.
（
2020·
浙江宁波市
·
高三月考）
阅读下面短文，
根据其内容写一篇
60
词左右的内容概要。
Around the
world
，
music therapy
(
疗法）
is being used to treat
different medical conditions
and
illnesses. Some of the ways people use music
therapy are to reduce pain, such as in
childbirth
or during cancer
treatments, or to stimulate brain activity after
an injury. Music
therapy has
also
been successful in aiding children
to overcome disabilities. Children can
move their bodies with
the
music and stamp along to the beat.
Why is music a useful therapy? Being
comforting and
relaxing
，
music stimulates
our brains.
We
respond
to
the
sounds
of
music
emotionally
and
physically.
The
complexity
of
music
(the
different tempos,
rhythms
，
melodies and
harmonies) provokes (
激发）
the
biggest
response. Thus,
classical music is most typically used
for therapies due to complex sounds
and patterns. Although
rap
or hip hop might be fun to listen to, ifs unlikely
that such styles of
music
would produce the
same kind of
therapeutic effect. Playing a musical instrument
rather
than simply listening
to music
can also be therapeutic for
some people
，
helping relieve
stress
and
anxiety.
Have scientists
been able to prove that music can heal diseases?
Music has been shown to
reduce pain by
increasing the release of endorphins
(
内啡肽）
. Endorphins are
the
body's natural
painkillers, and when we listen to
music, our brains respond by releasing
these
natural painkillers.
It has also been known to contribute to
the brain development of the
babies who have just been
born and even babies still in the
mother's womb. Certain types of
music have also been found to
lower blood pressure and slow a
person’s heart rate. Many
people are hopeful that
music could
replace the need
for some medicines that are normally
used to treat certain illnesses. At
present,
music
therapy
is
used
in
a
variety
of
settings
such
as
hospitals,
rehabilitation
centers,
nursing
homes, day cares,
and schools.
Although music
therapy is not yet considered a mainstream
treatment, it is recognized more
and
more as a useful addition to traditional
treatment. So next time you are feeling
low
or stressed
out, put on some relaxing music and let
the music heal you.
________
__________________________________________________
_____________________
__________________
__________________________________________________
___________
____________________________
__________________________________________________
_
______________________________________
_________________________________________
__________
【答案】
One possible
version:
Music
therapy
is
a
useful
way
to
treat
various
illnesses
reason
is
that
comforting music or playing musical
instruments can activate our brain and help
ease
pressure and
anxiety. Music has already been proved
to generate positive effects of
reducing pain, developing
the
babies’
brain,
lowering blood
pressure
and
slowing
heart
rate.
Though
music
therapy
is
not
adopted widely, it is
regarded as an effective helper to traditional
treatment
【分析】
这是一篇说明文。
文章介绍说，
音乐的令人
舒适性和放松性能激发大脑的活跃性，
复杂的音
乐和弹奏乐器更
能起到这样的作用，
正因为这样，
音乐疗法已在全世界范围内被
用于治疗多
种疾病。音乐在缓解疼痛，婴儿的大脑发育，
降低血
压以及减缓心率方面有积极的影响。不
过，目前音乐疗法还不
被当作是主流的治疗方式，但是它仍然是一种有效的辅助治疗方法。
【详解】
1.
要点摘录
①Around
the
world
，
music
therapy
is
being
used
to
treat
different
medical
conditions
and
illnesses.
①
Being
comforting
and
relaxing
，
music
stimulates
our
brains.
Thus,
classical
music
is
most
typically
used
for
therapies
due
to
complex
sounds
and
patterns.
Playing
a
musical
instrument
rather
than
simply
listening
to
music
can
also
be
therapeutic
for
some
people
，
helping
relieve
stress and
anxiety.
①
Music
has
been
shown
to
reduce
pain.
It
has
also
been
known
to
contribute
to
the
brain
development of the
babies. Certain types of music have also been
found to lower blood pressure
and slow
a person’s heart rate.
①Although music therapy is not yet
considered a mainstream treatment, it is
recognized more and
more as a useful
addition to traditional treatment.
2.
缜密构思
将第
1
、
2
两个要点进行整合，将第
2
、
3
两个要点进行重组。
3.
遣词造句
The reason
why music therapy is of great use for treating
different illnesses is that comforting and
relaxing music can activate our brains,
especially classical music and playing musical
instruments.
Music
is
considered
highly
effective
in
reducing
pain,
developing
the
brains
of
the
babies,
lowering blood
pressure and slowing a person’s heart
rate.
Music therapy is
becoming more and more useful as a helper in the
traditional treatment.
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1]
：
The reason
is that comforting music or playing musical
instruments can activate our
brain and
help ease pressure and anxiety.
此句用到了
that
引导的表语从句概括了第二段的内
容，且表语从句中用到了两个并列的动名词作主语，表达很高级。
[
高分句型
2]
：
Though music therapy is not
adopted widely, it is regarded as an effective
helper
to
traditional
treatment.
此句用了主从复合句概括了第四段的内
容。其中
though
引导让步状
语从
句，
be regarded
as
短语的使用，非常高级。
8.
（
2020·
上海市延安中学高三期中
）
Directions: Read
the
following
passage. Summarize
the
main idea and the main
point(s)of the passage in about 60 words. Use your
own words as far as
possible
One Person/ Multiple
Careers
In
an
art
show
at
a
gallery,
Gedvile
Bunikyte
is
among
the
crowd,
introducing
her
latest
works
on exhibit. However, her talents extend to far
more than her beautifully
geometric(
几何图
形的
)
artworks. Bunikyte is what is known as—someone who
has multiple talents, which she has
turned into professional careers, each
separated by a
It has become
common for people to have a hard time describing
what they do for a living,
with an
increasing number of
work
-
related labels attached
to each individual. The slasher culture
has
infiltrated(
渗透
)
every
industry.
The
fashion
blogger'
combination
may
seem
contradictory to some, but makes
perfect sense to
multi
-
passionate
millennials(
千禧一代
). Slash
careers are an interesting concept when
it comes to work
-
life
balance and satisfaction, which has
little to do with time spent in areas,
but more to do with fulfillment across various
areas that make
up feelings of balance
in one's life.
Slash
careers
can
also
make
you
more
desirable
to
an
employer.
They
give
you
greater
creativity and a broader skill set.
Companies are always looking for
self
-
starters and innovators
on
their teams to help them get to the
next level. People who have taken the initiative
to develop a
slash career are more
likely to bring those qualities into their
office.
Furthermore,
it's
no
secret
that
millennnials
are
struggling
with
money.
Americans
aged
between 18 and 34 had higher rates of
being late with mortgage payments, overdrawing
checking
accounts,and having trouble
with medical costs. A slash career might not help
with the financial
literacy, but it
could help pay some of those bills.
The
possibilities
of
slash
career
options
are
truly
limitless.
However,
However,
Marci
Alboher,
the
author
who
popularized
the
phrase
“slash
career,”
believes
it's
better
to
deeply
immerse
oneself
in
a
particular
career,
and
then
layer
in
another
slash.
Personally,
when
I
look
back on my own slash
career, I find this to be true as well. I began as
a mental health counselor,
which
led
to
consulting
opportunities.
Eventually,
I
made
money
from
my
blog
and
became
a
social media influencer.
__________________________________________
_____________________________________
__
__________________________________________________
___________________________
____________
__________________________________________________
_________________
______________________
__________________________________
【答案】
Since
it
has
been
common
for
people
to
find
it
difficult
to
describe
their
jobs,a
slash
career
is
an
interesting
concept.
Not
only
can
slash
careers
make
you
more
desirable
to
an
employer but also help pay some of
those bills. Although possibilities for slashing
career choices
are
indeed
limitless,
author
of
the
popular
term
thinks
it's
best
to
immerse
yourself
deeply
in
a
particular
career and then cut into another slash.
【分析】
本文是一篇说明文。文章介
绍说，由于人们发现很难描述自己的工作已经很普遍了，
“slash
career
（斜杠职业）
”
就成了一个有趣的概念。
“
斜杠职业
”
不仅能让你更受雇主的青睐，还能
帮你支付一些账单。
尽管斜杠职业选择的可能性确实是无限的，
但这一流行术语的作者认为，
最好让自己沉浸在一个特定的职业，然后再从事另一个。
【详解】
1.
要点摘录
①. It has become common for people to
have a hard time describing what they do for a
living,
with an increasing number of
work
-
related labels attached
to each individual.
①. Slash
careers are an interesting concept when it comes
to work
-
life balance and
satisfaction,
which has little to do
with time spent in areas, but more to do with
fulfillment across various areas
that
make up feelings of balance in one's
life.
①. Slash careers can
also make you more desirable to an employer. A
slash career might not help
with the
financial literacy, but it could help pay some of
those bills.
①.The
possibilities of slash career options are truly
limitless. However, Marci Alboher, the author
who
popularized
the
phrase
“slash
career,”
believes
it's
better
to
deeply
immerse
oneself
in
a
particular career, and then layer in
another slash.
2.
缜密构思
将第
1
、
2
两个要点进行重组，将第
3
、
4
两个要点进行整合。
3.
遣词造句
Since it has been common for people to
find it difficult to describe their jobs,a slash
career is an
interesting
concept.
Not only can slash
careers make
you
more
desirable to an employer but also help
pay some of
those
bills.
Although
possibilities for slashing career choices are
indeed limitless, author of the popular term
thinks it's best to immerse
yourself deeply in a particular career and then
cut into another slash.
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1]
Since it has been common
for people to find it difficult to describe their
jobs,a slash career is an
interesting c
oncept.
运用一个主从复合句对原文第一段和第二段进行了概括。
其中运用了
since
引导的原因状语从句。
[
高分句型
2]
Not only can slash careers
make
you
more desirable to
an employer but also help
pay some of
those
bills.
运用一个复
杂的主从复合句对原文第三段和第四段进行了概括，其中运用了倒装
句。
[
高分句型
3]
Although possibilities for
slashing career choices are indeed limitless,
author of the popular term
thinks it's best to immerse yourself
deeply in a particular career and then cut into
another slash.
运
用一个复杂的主从复合句概括
了最后一段内容。其中
although
引导让步状语从句。<
/p>
9.
Directions:
Read the following passage. Summarize the main
idea and the
（
2020·
上海杨浦区
·
）
main
point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words.
Use your own words as far as possible.
Virtual Fitness
Exercise
plays
a
very
important
role
in
a
healthy
lifestyle.
But
you
may
not
have
time
or
money to go to a gym on a
regular basis. The good news is that today's
technology lets you access
fitness
classes from the comfort of your home. A quick
Internet search will turn up thousands of
online
fitness
classes.
You
can
watch
videos
on
your
phone,
computer
or
tablet
and
do
the
exercises right where
you are. All you need is an Internet connection
and a space large enough to
move around
in.
Online
fitness
classes
take
a
wide
variety
of
forms.
Some
focus
on
stretches
and
slow
movements. Other
classes involve fast aerobic activity, while
others build muscle strength. Some
require equipment such as weights, but
others use only your body. This means that you can
choose
a class that does what you like.
And you can try a different one whenever you like.
Anyone can post a fitness
video on the Internet. Not everyone knows what
they are doing. So
it is important to
think about who is teaching the class. Try to find
teachers who are certified by an
organization
with
a
good
reputation.
I
tried
some
virtual
fitness
classes
several
years
reason
was
simple:
convenience.
I
could
do
a
fitness
class
at
any
time
of
day.
I
didn't
need
to
travel to
a gym and back, which saved me a lot of time. But
being able to work out any time meant
I
kept putting it off. I'd do everything else first
and then the day would be over. I’d never actually
get around to exercising.
Having
to
exercise
at
a
definite
time
means
I
have
to
put
it
on
my
schedule.
So
for
me,
scheduled classes such as those at a
gym are helpful.
Anyhow,if
the gym isn't for you, you may want to give an
online fitness class a try.
__________________________________________________
_____________________________
__________
__________________________________________________
___________________
____________________
________________________________________
【答案】
Modern technology
makes online fitness classes possible for you to
workout right where
you are. With
various forms to choose , you can try whichever
class you like. It’s vital to find a
certified
teacher
with
a
good
reputation.
When
trying
appreciating
the
convenience
that
online
fitness classes bring , you’d better
schedule them ahead of time.
【分析】
这是一篇说明文。
文章介绍了现代科技使在线健身课程成为可能，
让你在原地锻炼。
有各种
形式可供选择，
你可以尝试任何一个类
你喜欢。
找到一个有良好声誉的认证教师是至关重要
的。当你尝
试欣赏在线健身课程带来的便利时，你最好提前安排。
【详解】
1
要点摘录
①Today's technology lets
you access fitness classes from the comfort of
your home.
Online fitness
classes
、
do the
exercises right where you are.
①
Online fitness
classes take a wide variety of forms. You can
choose a class that does what you
like.
① Try to
find teachers who are certified by an organization
with a good reputation.
①The
reason was simple:
convenience
。
I
have to put it on my
schedule
；
give an
online fitness
class a try.
2.
缜密构思第一段为一个要点，第二段为第二个要点，第三段
前半段单独一个要点，后半段
与第四五段合并整合成一个要点。
3.
遣词造句
①Modern
technology
makes online fitness classes
possible for
you to workout right
where you are.
①With various forms to choose , you can
try whichever class you like.
①It’s vital to find a certified teacher
with a good reputation.
①When
trying
appreciating
the
convenience
that
online
fitness
classes
bring
,
you’d
better
schedule them ahead of time.
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1] With
various forms to choose , you can try whichever
class you like.
运用
with
复合
结构。
[
高分句型
2]When
trying appreciating the convenience that online
fitness classes bring , you’d
better
schedule them ahead of
time.
状语从句的
省略。
10.
（
2020·
上海市七宝中学高三期中）
< br>Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize in no
more than 60 words the
main idea of the passage and how it is
illustrated. Use your own words as
far
as possible.
Envy
It’s a familiar but uncomfortable
feeling. Your best friend will marry a handsome
doctor, and
the
congratulatory
hug
you
offer
lacks
genuine
warmth.
Your
friend
is
made
the
team
for
Saturday’s big game, and
you take a certain pleasure in telling him you
can’t be there to watch
him play. You
smile but a voice in your head asks, why them and
not you?
Envy is a
shortcoming of character we like to keep in our
heart secretly. How shameful is it
not
to be looking forward with delight to your day as
your best friend’s bridesmaid! Who would
hope your friend might suffer some
injury, so you can take his place on the
team?
Envy
is
everywhere.
It
seems
to
be
in
our
nature
to
hate
others’
gifts
and
good
fortune,
especially if we
see them as advantages they shouldn’t
have.
Envy raises its ugly
head when we focus on what we want but we don’t
possess now. Worse
still, we may even
wish for and take pleasure in someone’s losing
what we have always desired.
When you
compare yourself and your life unfavorably with
your friend or your colleague, you can
only keep your darker
emotions.
So,
is
there
a
solution?
Is
there
anything
you
can
do
to
get
rid
of
this
most
ungenerous
emotion?
Well,
why
not
make
envy
the
motivation
you
need
for
self
-
improvement?
The
best
weapon
against envy is not to compete where you can’t
shine, but to do your absolute best where
you can.
Start by
making peace with yourself, and accept the gifts
which make you unique. Make an
agreement with yourself to be the best
you can be. Then find the qualities in others that
cause your
envy.
Is
it
someone’s
singing
voice,
their
work
promotion,
their
new
car?
Envy
shows
us
the
things we’d like to have. So, make a
plan to earn what’s important to you.
And aim for genuine pleasure in the
achievements and good fortune of others. Cheer on
your
friend
when
he
scores
that
goal.
Enjoy
your
best
friend’s
wedding
day.
Then
go
out
and
do
something special, and
make yourself wonderfully proud of you.
_______________________________________
________________________________________
_________________________________________________
______________________________
_________
__________________________________________________
_
【答案】
Envy is a
common but unpleasant feeling, which is a secret
hidden in our heart. This
nature
usually arises when we can’t get what we want and
even take delight in others’ losing it. To
avoid
this
negative
feeling,
firstly
try
to
transform
envy
into
motivation
to
improve
ourselves.
Besides, accept
your unique talents gladly. Finally, appreciate
others’ achievements sincerely.
【分析】
本文是一篇议论文。
主要论述嫉妒是一种常见的不愉快的感觉，
它隐藏在我们心里，
讨厌别
人有好运是人的天性，
尤其是当我们认
为别人不该有那样的好运时。
这是一种消极情绪，
要
把嫉妒作为自我提升的动力，
接受自己独特的才能，
出去做点让自己为自己感到无比自豪的
事情，真诚地欣赏别人的成就。
【详解】
1.
要点摘录
①It’s a
familiar but uncomfortable feeling.
①Envy is a shortcoming of character we
like to keep in our heart secretly.
①It seems to be in our nature to hate
others’gifts and good fortune, especially if we
see them as
advantages they shouldn’t
have.
①Well, why not make
envy the motivation you need for
self
-
improvement?
①Start by making peace with yourself,
and accept the gifts which make you unique.
①And aim for genuine
pleasure in the achievements and good fortune of
others.
2.
缜密构思将第<
/p>
1
、
2
、两个要
点进行重组，将第
3
、
4
、
5
、
6
< br>要点进行整合。
3.
遣词造句
①Envy is a shortcoming of character
that is secretly kept in our heart.
①Why do not we make envy the motivation
that we need for
self
-
improvement?
①We should take pleasure in the
achievements and good fortune of
others.
①Learn to appreciate
your strengths and try to do what you are proud
of.
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1]
Envy is a common but
unpleasant feeling, which is a secret hidden in
our heart.
运用一个复杂的
which
引导非限制性定语从句，
主从复合句对原文第二段进行了概括，
其中，
表达非常高级。
[
高分句型
2]
This nature usually arises
when we can’t get what we want and even take
delight in others’ losing
it.
运用一个复杂的主从复合句对原文第四段进行了概括。
其中
w
hen
引导的是时间状语从句，
表达非常高级。
11.
（
2020·
上海市向明中学高三期中）
Directions: Read
the following passage. Summarize the
main idea and the main point(s) of the
passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own
words as
far as possible.
My Sporting Hero: Roger
Federer
Almost every
sportsperson who has reached the top of their
field was inspired by an athlete
who
came before them. Often, it is one from their own
sport, but sometimes that inspiration can
come
from
an
entirely
different
discipline.
Scotland
footballer
Jen
Beattie
tells
us
about
her
sporting hero: Roger
Federer.
From an early age,
I have been a big tennis fan. I have always loved
watching Wimbledon,
and
when
I
was
growing
up,
Roger
Federer
was
the
men’s
champion
every
year.
He
had
some
impressive
finals
--
the one against Andy
Roddick in 2009 in
particular
--
but he always
seemed to
prevail. Federer was
ridiculous at the time, winning 12 Grand Slams
between 2003 and 2007. And
I could just
watch that backhand of his in action over and over
again.
I love the way
Federer carries himself on the court. His calmness
is something I have always
admired.
In
my
football
career,
I
have
played
in
big,
important
matches
for
my
club
and
particularly for my
country. When I am walking onto a football pitch,
I know I have the full team
behind me.
I always have ten other players who have my back
to help me find solutions. Federer
just
has to figure them out on his own, which is very
different.
There are any
number of variables you can throw into the mix
when examining what makes a
sporting
legend. A big one for me is the quality of the
opponents you have to overcome. To win 20
Grand Slam titles in the arguably
greatest era of men’s tennis, as well as reaching
another 11 finals,
marks Federer out as
a legend.
After Federer won
Wimbledon in 2012, the Slams started to dry up for
him. He lost the 2015
U.S. Open final
to Novak Djokovic. In 2016, time seemed to be
catching up with him, with knee
and
back injuries ruining his season. At that stage,
the chances of Federer returning to top form
seemed remote. And yet there he was in
2017, winning the Australian Open and Wimbledon,
and
then as the defending champion in
Melbourne in 2018.
That
belief and confidence he must have had within
himself to deep going, and even change
little
aspects
of
his
game
to
not
just
prolong
his
career
but
actually
improve
as
a
player,
is
so
impressive.
Not many people look to do that when the end is in
sight.
Perhaps
that
is
a natural
thing
some
top
athletes
will
figure
out
as
they
go
along.
Federer,
however, has done that on an
unbelievable level. To be 40 and still able to
operate at the level he is
now is a
testament to his greatness.
__________________________________________________
_____________________________
__________
__________________________________________________
___________________
____________________
________________________________________
【答案】
Roger Federer is my
sporting hero. I admire his calmness on the court,
which is difficult
for individual
athletes. Considering his great rivals, Federer is
arguably a tennis legend. I am also
impressed by his courage to make
adjustments at the end of his career, which
enabled him to make
a successful
comeback in 2017 and 2018. (57words)
【分析】
本文是一篇说明文。文章主
要介绍苏格兰足球运动员珍
·
贝蒂向我们讲述了她的体育英雄：
罗杰
·
费德勒，并说明了喜欢他的原因
以及对自己的影响。
【详解】
1
要点摘录
①My Sporting Hero: Roger
Federer
①His calmness is
something I have always admired.
①Federer just has to figure
them out on his own, which is very
different.
①To win 20 Grand
Slam titles in the arguably greatest
era of men’s tennis, as well as
reaching
another 11 finals, marks
Federer out as a legend.
①And yet there he was in
2017, winning the Australian Open and
Wimbledon, and then as the
defending
champion in Melbourne in 2018.
①That
belief
and
confidence
he
must
have
had
within
himself
to
deep
going,
and
even
change
little
aspects
of
his
game
to
not
just
prolong
his
career
but
actually
improve
as
a
player,
is
so
impressive.
2.
缜密构思将第
2
、
3
两个要点进行重组，将第
5
、
6
两个要点进行整合。
3.
遣词造句
Roger Federer is my sporting
hero.
I admire
his calmness on the court, which is difficult for
individual athletes.
Considering his great rivals, Federer
is arguably a tennis legend.
I am also impressed by his courage to
make adjustments at the end of his career, which
enabled
him to make a successful
comeback in 2017 and 2018.
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1]
：
I admire
his calmness on the court, which is difficult for
individual athletes.
运用一
个复杂的主
从复合句对原文第二段和第三段进行了概括。
其中
which<
/p>
引导非限定性定语从句
等表达高级。
<
/p>
[
高分句型
2]
：
Considering his great rivals, Federer
is arguably a tennis legend.
用现在分词作状
语对第四段进行了概括，表达非常高级。
[<
/p>
高分句型
3]
：
I am also impressed by his courage to make
adjustments at the end of his career,
which enabled him to make a successful
comeback in 2017 and 2018.
概括了最后几段内容。
其中
用一个
which
引导的非限定性定语从句的用法比较高级。
12.
（
2020·
浙江湖州市
·
湖州中学高三一模）
阅读下面短文，
根据其内容写一篇
60
词左右的
内
容概要。
Once upon a time,
eating alone was just that: sitting down in a
restaurant on one’s own and
eating a
meal. Everyone did it sometimes, and when they did
so they might be a little embarrassed.
To eat alone might suggest that you
didn’t have any family or friends, or didn’t like
people. There
was a kind of shame
attached to it. Nowadays, however, there is more
and more solitary(
独自的
)
eating.
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