老师作文之我的英语老师外貌作文

我的英语老师外貌作文

【篇一：五年级上册英语作文：我的英语老师】

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优尼全能英语：五年级上册英语作文：我的英语

老师

my english teacher

miss tang is my english teacher. she’s very pretty. she is tall

and thin. she has two big eyes and a small mouth. her hair is

long. she likes cats very much. and she likes singing and

dancing, too. her english is very good. we often play games in

english classes. she is very kind to us. we all love her.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是

“

我的英语老师

”

，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作

者开门见山，直接点题，首先 介绍了英语老师的姓名，然后逐一介

绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及 师生情感等。

小朋友们在写作文时 ，要注意使用自己最熟悉的词

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，以免写出一

些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点 正确、书写清

晰、规范等。

my days of the week

i’m a student and i am in grade 5.i get up at six o’clock every

day. i have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven

o’clock. i have classes from monday to saturday. i have an

english class on friday and i have a pe class on tuesday. i

don’t have to go to schoo

l on school, and i like to go

swimming on that day.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是

“

我的一周

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，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自

己的亲身经历写起，叙述了自 己一周七天的所作所为，并特别强调

了星期天的喜好，写得自然、流畅。

小朋友们写作文时要注意人称

及谓语动词的变化， 要依据提示，结合自己的实际，写自己身边熟

悉的事情。

my favourite food

do you know what this is? guess! its colour is yel

low. it’s long

and thin. it looks like a small boat and crescent. oh, it is a

banana. do you know what that is? guess again! its colour is

orange. it’s round. it looks like a small ball and a small lantern.

oh, it is an orange. i like then a lot. i like ice- creams. i like to

chew gum. chocolates and candies are yummy. i like them very

much.

how about you? what’s your favourite food?

【要领点评】

my favourite food

是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举

出自己最喜欢的每

一种食物，而是有详有略 地进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流

畅、没有语法错误。另外，文章中出现了一些生 词，可见小作者是

用心查字典了。

i

am a girl. my name is li ling. i’m in class three, grade five. i’m

helpful at home. i can water the flowers, empty the trash and

sweep the floor. after meals, i can help my mother do the

dishes. on sunday, i can wash the clothes. what about you?

are you helpful, too?

【要领点评】

本篇作文的题目是

“

我可以帮助做家务

”

，作者主要叙述自己在家帮

助做的事情，介绍自己的名字，所在年级及在家能做的家务，很详

细， 到位。

小朋友们在写作时，应尽量 写一些亲自经历的事情，这样会避免在

作文时显得太空，因为只有自己经常做的事情印象 才会特别深刻。

写作时还要注意大小写和时态。

in the kitchen

this is the kitchen of my family. it’s big and nice. look! my

mother is cooking in it. this is a microwave and that is a stove.

there is a big table here. there are many things on it. what are

these? they look yummy! oh, they’re strawberries. and what

are those? they are grapes.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是

“

在厨房

”

里，作者根据自己家的厨房情况。介绍

厨房里有微波炉和电炉，有一 张大桌子和桌子上的物品等，以及妈

妈在做饭，非常真实。

小朋友们，可以从观察自己身边的事、物写起，利用所学的句 子，

描述身边熟悉的东西来训练习作。

my village

my village is very beautiful. there are many houses in the

village. near the village, there is a forest. a small river is in

front of the village. the water in it is very clean. we can see