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概要写作写作指导

篇一：周永鹏

概要写作

教学设计

概要写作

教学设计

台州一中

周永鹏

Learning Goals:

1. Learn about the main features of an

exposition

2. Learn how to find the main points

in each paragraph

3.

Learn

to

use

various

ways

to

express the main points

4. Learn to use transition to make the

summary coherent

5.

Learn

to

use

checklist

to

make

comment on a summary

6. Learn about the importance of safe

driving

Teaching Procedure:

Step 1 Lead-in

T:

First,

I

want

to

show

you

some

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pictures. What do you think of these traffic

accidents?

S: Traffic accidents are dangerous.

T:

Yes,

they

are

not

only

dangerous

but

also

very

common.

According

to

a

survey, most causes of traffic accidents are

related

with

drivers.

Can

you

list

some

reasons?

S:

Speeding;

Tired

driving;

Drunk

driving;

Careless

driving;

Using

cell

phones while driving

Step2

Determine

the

text

type

and

main aspect of each paragraph

T: Today we will focus on a passage

on

a

social

phenomenon,

which

is

using

cell

phones

while

driving.

Do

you

think

what

aspects

will

be

mentioned

in

the

passage?

S: cause; effect; solution; opinion and

so on.

Cause: Not mentioned

Negative effect: Para2

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Solution: Para3/4

Opinion: Para1/5

T: What is the style of the passage?

S:

A.

Narration

B.

Exposition

C.

Argumentation

Step3

Display

the

basic

requirement

of a summary

A

Summary

Writing

on

Using

cell

phones while driving should be:

1. Complete

It includes all the main & supporting

points using your own words.

2. Concise

It

omits

unnecessary

details

like

examples,

explanations

and

other

unimportant information;

3. Coherent

It

is

a

paragraph

with

necessary

transitions to make it flow.

4. Correct

It

should

be

written

in

a

grammatically correct way

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5. Objective

It

doesn’t

contain

your

own

ideas

or

emotions on the topic.

Step4 Find the main points and make

the outline

[Para 1&5: author’s opinion]

Para1

Cell

phones

are

used

everywhere,

but

John

Andretti

says,

“Driving

safely

is

your

first

responsibility.”

[Para 2: negative effect]

Para2

The

New

England

Journal

of

Medicine

reported

that

“”

The

major

problem is that the driver is not focused on

the

road,

but

on

his

or

her

conversation.

Cell phone drivers are very unpredictable:

they

drive

too

fast

or

too

slow,

make

improper

turns,

run

red

lights,

and

even

stop at green ones. It

’

s not only annoying;

it

’

s

dangerous.

Accidents

related

to

cell

phones include rear-ending other vehicles,

running off a road and crashing into trees,

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fences,

and

buildings,

and

even

turning

over.

[Para 3&4: solution]

Para3

In

October

at

the

California

Traffic

Safety

Summit,

experts

showed

that “cell phones used by drivers lead to at

least 1,000 deaths per year in Califo

rnia.”

These

are

the

same

problems

that

occur

with

drunk

driving,

which

is

against

the

law

and

strictly

enforced

a

dangerous

distraction to:

1. distract the drivers’ attention

2.

cause/contribute

to/bring

about

harmful distraction to

3. drivers tend to be distracted

using

cell

phones

while

driving

should be forbidden:

1. phones shouldn’t be allowed on the

road

2.

put

a

ban

on

using

phones

on

the

road

3.

should

be

prevented

from

using

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phones

Cell

phones

used

on

the

road

are

a

dangerous distraction to drivers and should

be forbidden.

1.

Using

cell

phones

while

driving

can

distract

the

drivers’

attention

and

should be banned.

2.

Cell

phones

shouldn’t

be

allowed

on

the

road

because

they

cause

harmful

distraction to drivers.

3.

Drivers

should

be

prevented

from

using

cellphones

while

driving

because

they tend to be distracted.

Step6 Have a try to write a summary

Step7 Learn to use transition to make

the summary coherent

Using

cell

phones

while

driving

can

distract the drivers’ attention and should be

banned.

Drivers

have

a

higher

rate

of

accidents due to a lack of concentration on

the road. 1__________________, we need

law

to

limit

the

cell

phones

use.

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