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雅思大作文常见论点




考生们都知道雅思考官在评判一篇大作文时,除了看文章的结构和语言之外,还


很重视 这篇文章的主体内容。


而中国考生在写


essay


时常见的一个问题恰恰是考前


准备了语言,临场读懂了题目,很快形成了观点 ,但是却不知该从哪些角度来支


持自己的


thesis sta tement


。所以主体段落观点单调,思维陈旧,内容空洞,为达到

< br>字数而把一个观点写了再写等问题常常会充斥在文章的


body


part


。这极大地影响


了考生的作文成绩。在此,笔 者将多年积累的雅思大作文常见论点总结为一首打


油诗,以飨读者。



论文观点角度多;科技经济常切磋;肉体灵魂不放过; 权利平等要把握;



个人国家多权衡;文化道德思路扩;结合话 题多思索;主体论证不难说。





一、科技和经济





在雅思论文主体部分写作中,


科技角 度


是使用频率最高的角度。绝大多数作


文的话题都可以从


科技发展对人的生活带来的影响


这个角度来加以分析。例如:





讨论是否将动物用于科学实验:





Some scientists claim that experiments carried out on animals would be crucial for


potential breakthroughs in treating some of the most-feared incurable diseases.




讨论社会道德下滑:





Development


of


science


and


technology


has


given


birth


to


materialism


and


capitalism


which


favor


the


research


for


economic


growth


and


freedom


of


men.


Consequently, no spiritual, moral, and traditional values are taken into account




压力大的原因:





The


rapid


development


of


science


and


technology


makes


work


today


more


demanding than it used to be.




亲情淡漠的原因:





The availability of a great variety of high-tech recreational facilities also diverts


people from enjoying chats with the members of their families.




环保全球化的原因:





Developing


countries


lack


sufficient


numbers


of


qualified


scientists


and


other


skilled personnel to cope with the increasingly serious environmental problems, such as


the ozone depletion, the marine pollution and the like.




如果说科技的发展是人类社会进步的助推器,那么经济的影响 就是社会前进


的方向标。经济的强弱通常会导致某一现象的出现或某种结果的产生。比如 在讨


论什么是最伟大的发明时,考生可能想到电话。那么如何来支持这一观点呢?试


看下面的句子:





The


development


of


the


telephone


created


a


new


market


for


the


employment


of


women. The position of telephone operators was most often filled by women, creating a


new world of opportunities for females to struggle for the equal rights to males.




通过说明电话的发明使女性获得工 作更多的工作机会,从而在经济是更加独


力,这对于她们争取平等的权利起到了巨大的推 动作用。





二、肉体和灵魂





雅思大作文常会出一些


有关科技发明 或娱乐方式的利与弊


话题。那么不管是


写好处还是坏处,考生应 该从该发明或娱乐对人的肉体和灵魂这两方面去组织自


己的分支观点。比如电脑对肉体的 影响:





You don


kids get little exercise, which makes them obese.




Another


common


disadvantage


is


that


playing


too


much


on


the


computer


can


cause bad eyesight.




发明或娱乐对肉体的影响主要表现在削弱势力和增加肥胖两个 方面,而其对


灵魂的影响则涉及一下多个方面。





1.


高频 率的信息切换影响孩子们的耐性。





There is not deny in that with the advent of technology, our patience grows thin.




2.


媒体 中的暴力节目扭曲孩子们的灵魂。





Media


violence


affects


children


by:


increasing


aggressiveness


and


anti-social


behavior;


intensifying


their


fear


of


becoming


victims;


making


them


less


sensitive


to


violence


and


to


victims


of


violence;


encouraging


their


appetite


for


more


violence


in


entertainment and in real life.




3.


对媒体过多关注使孩子们变的孤僻而脱离现实生活。





For


lack


of


face-to-face


contact,


modern


children


tend


to


be


more


introverted,


unsocial, isolated and indifferent than those kids in last century.




三、权利和平等





四方的文化在一定程度上可以浓缩为:权利、平等和自由。中 国考生在人们


该不该做什么事情或行为的时候应该多从这个方面去说服考官。

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如果写到动物的保护问题时,可以说:


Animals are not created for humans any


more than women are created for men, black for white.




在写到政府是否该花钱来发展武器时,可以说:


There


is


no


doubt


that


the


advancement of military technologies is one of the greatest dangers to all human rights,


including the most basic right to life itself.




在写到环境的重要性时,可以说:





All human beings have the fundamental right to an environment adequate for their


health and well-being.




在写到小孩子是否应该对自己犯的罪负责时,可以说:





When someone turns 18, he or she should be tried as an adult because they have


adult


rights.


Children,


however,


do


not


have


the


same


rights


as


adults


do.


Then,


if


a


five-year-old child killing someone has been sentenced the death penalty, the trial that


determines whether or not someone should be tried as an adult are absurd.




在写到传统的西方道德中对私有财产的尊重时,可以说:





Respect for property is no less important than respect for person. Indeed, respect


for


property


is


one


species


of


respect


for


person.


Property


is


the


stuff


of


personal


independence. It is, therefore, an economic foundation of freedom. A society in which


respect for property diminishes is one in which freedom diminishes.




四、个人国家





有时候,一个现象或问题的出现是 由于个人的努力和汗水或个人的疏忽,以


及社会国家重视或政府的政策不恰当而导致的。 例如:





运动员是否应该拿高薪:





Athletes sweat and sacrifice physically and psychologically more than the average


people, which can justify their high salary.




青少年犯罪的原因:



Young people



s inexperience and gullibility easily lead then into traps. (


个人的原因


)




The government failing to establish supporting system to offer help to adolescents


can explain this social issue. (


国家的原因


)




在男女平等的意义上使用个人和国家的分析角度也是很有效的:





Every woman is worthy to be respected, educated, and safe from exploitation. It is

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