2021届高考英语读后续写深度解读(四)

2021

届高考英语读后续写深度解读（四）

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的 故事。

It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to

take me on a trip to the Wild West.

We

took

a

plane

to

Albuquerque,

a

big

city

in

the

state

of

New

Mexico.

We

reached

Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul

, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and

drove us up to his farm in Pecos.

His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My

dad

and

I

spent

the

night

in

the

guestroom

of

the

farm

house

listening

to

the

frogs

and

water

rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast.

“

The day starts at dawn on my farm,

”

he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the

chickens,

while

my

dad

went

with

Uncle

Paul

to

take

the

sheep

out

to

graze

(

吃草

).

I

was

impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.

In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a hose ride, and he said yes, as long as my

dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on

our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains.

“Don’t be

late

for supper,

”

Uncle Paul cried,

“

and keep to the track

so that you don’t

get lost!

”

“OK!” my dad

cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and

quiet

and

the

colors

of

the

brown

rocks,

the

deep

green

pine

trees,

and

the

late

afternoon

sun

mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven (

编织的

) blanket spread out upon

the ground just for us.

续写要求：

1.

所续写短文的词数应为

150

左右；

2.

至少使用

5

个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.

续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.

续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph1:

Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.

Paragraph2:

We had no idea where we were and it got dark.

【思路点拨】

1.

文本细解读，确定续写结局

本文是记 叙文，讲述了

“

我

”

< br>和父亲来到叔叔的农场去骑马的故事。到达叔叔的农场后，

“

我

”

感受到宁静美丽的农场生活：夜半听到水声和蛙声，< /p>

清晨看到婶婶喂鸡，叔叔和爸爸骑

马。因为羡慕骑马很酷，下午时 候，在晚餐前，

“

我

”

也和父亲去骑马。叔叔嘱咐我们别迷路

了，尽早回来晚餐。

续写部分应为故事的结局，

即

“

我

”

们是如何会迷路以及迷路后如何重 新找到叔叔农场的

故事。

2.

段首句解读，确定续写方向

续写第一 段首句写道

“

突然间一只小兔子跳到了我的马前

”

，第二段首句写道

“

我们不 知

道我们在哪儿，而且天已经黑了

”

， 由此可知第一段内容应着重描写

“

我

”

的马受到惊吓失控

狂奔导致迷路的情形。可以设想：兔子惊吓到 我的马后，

导致它从路径上奔出，父亲因记挂

我的安全，

骑马也跟着我的马狂奔，

等马匹跑到河边时候，

我们发现自己到了个陌生的地方，

这与第二段段首

“