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作文：英语作文
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人与自然和谐相处
英语作文
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人与自然和谐相处
人与自然和谐相处
can people live in harmony
with nature
man
and nature are interactive forces.
looking back along the river of
history, we may find that harmony
used
to
exist
between
people
and
nature.
at
that
time
nature
was
pure
field
to
be
ploughed,
sown
and
harvested.
man
respected
nature
and
was
one
part
of
nature.
it
seems
that
people
today
are
masters
of
natureg
nature
is
torn
into
pieces. while we are disrupting the
order of the natural world, we are
the
ultimate victims, for nature is seeking its
revenge. disappearing
forests,
drying
rivers,
polluted
soil
and
worsening
climate
have
punished
greedy human beings. we have taken too
much from nature, and given back
too
little.
looking forward
to the future, when we gain reasoning, when we
remember
the
deep
interdependent
relationship
between
people
and
nature,
when
citizens of the world work persistently to protect
nature, then
nature will be our friend
instead of our slave or servant. sure, people
can
live
in
harmony
with
nature,
with
mitment,
hard
work
and
new
technology.
核心剖析
按照提纲设计，本论述文的
表达结构是线性的。引占以公认的哲
学原理
man and
natureare interactive forces
开头，中间穿插了大量有
说服
力的细节，文章最后连用了三个“when
从句”强调人与
自然和谐相处的必要条
件。
整个展开提纲过程是以论据证明观点
正确的逻辑推理过程。
全文写作基于提
纲，但不拘泥于提纲，严
谨与灵活的把握使文章
‘脉相承、内容丰满。