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如何用英语介绍一种濒危动物
【写作任务】
假定某英语杂志最近正
在征集关于保护濒危动物的文章。
请你根据所给提示
写一篇关于
保护长江江豚（
Yangtze finless
porpoise
）的英语短文并投稿。
分布区域
外形特征
物种现状
濒危原因
措施
中国长江中下游、鄱阳湖及洞庭湖
貌
似海豚（
dolphin
），面带微笑，体长一般在
1.2
米左右
目前
1000
多头
水质污染，非法捕捞导致栖息地减少
……
注意：
1.
词数
100
左右；
2.
可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【写作指导】
一、审题定调
本写作要求介绍一种濒危动物
——
长江江豚，
体裁是说明文。介绍动物时，
要从动物自身的特征、习性、现状等方面描述。如果介绍濒
危动物，要说明其濒
临灭绝的原因并提出保护建议。人称以第三人称为主，时态以一般现
在时为主。
二、谋篇布局
本写作可分为三部分：
第一部分：简要介绍长江江豚的外形特征及现状；
第二部分：说明长江江豚濒临灭绝的原因；
第三部分：提出拯救长江江豚的措施。
三、组织语言
第一部分：简要介绍长江江豚的外形特征及现状。
普
通
表
达
·
... looks like a dolphin.
·
It has a smile
on its face.
·
It
is about ... tall / long.
·
There are only about ...
left in ... now.
高
级
表
达
·
..., looking like a
dolphin, is a kind of small whale with a lovely
smile on its
face.
·
An adult ... can reach an
average height / length of around ...
·
Only about ... remain in
... at present.
第二部分：说明长江江豚濒临灭绝的原因。
普
通
表
达
高
级
表
达
第三部分：提出拯救长江江豚的措施。
普
通
表
达
高
级
表
达
·
We should take some
measures to protect ...
·
The
government should build more nature reserves and
put a strict ban on
illegal fishing
there.
·
Public
awareness about protecting animals is also very
important.
·
Effective
measures should be taken to protect ...
·
More nature reserves should
be established and stricter laws should be passed
to stop illegal fishing there.
·
Public awareness about
protecting animals also plays an important role.
The reason why ... are endangered is
that their habitats are disappearing due to
water pollution and illegal fishing.
·
Because the water is
polluted and people catch fish illegally, their
habitats are
disappearing.
·
All this has put ... in a
dangerous situation.
【范文展示】
普通范文
The Yangtze
finless porpoise looks like a dolphin. It has a
smile on its face. It is
about 120 cm
long. There are only about 1,000 Yangtze finless
porpoises left in the
Yangtze River,
Poyang Lake and Dongting Lake now.
Because the water is polluted and
people catch fish illegally, their habitats are
disappearing. All these has put Yangtze
finless porpoises in a dangerous situation.
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