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最新英语中考英语书面表达及答案
一、中考英语书面表达(含答案详细解析)
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书面表达
假如你是九年级学生李华,你的美国笔友
Billy
发来邮件询问你平时锻炼的情况。请你根据
以下信息,给
< br>Billy
回封电子邮件,并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。
写作要点:
1.
你最近正忙于为即将到来的体育测试(
physical
test
)做准备。
2.
介绍你平时锻炼的情况:
(
1
)每天锻炼的时间:不到一个半小时。
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(
2
)偶尔不锻炼的原因:作业多,没时间
。
(
3
)擅
长的体育运动:球类运动。
3.
谈谈锻炼给你带来了哪些好处。
写作要求:
1.
不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2.
可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
3.
字迹工整,语言精练,表达准确,条理清晰。
4.
至少
80
词。
Dear Billy,
It’s
my great pleasure to receive your
e
-mail.
____________________
_______________________________
______________________________________________
_________________________________
______
______
Best
wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Billy,
It’s my great pleasure to receive your
e
-
mail. You wanted to know
about my usual exercise. I’ll tell
it
to you.
I am busy preparing
for the coming physical test. So I take exercise
less than an hour every day.
Sometimes
I don’t do exercise, because I have so much
homework that I have no time to do it. I
do well in playing balls.
Doing exercise can help me keep a
strong body, and it is good for my health.
Besides, I think it can
make me relaxed
by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more
time doing exercise every
week.
Best
wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文,给<
/p>
Billy
回封电子邮件,介绍自己平时的锻炼情况,并建议他每
周都
要花些时间锻炼身体。
【详解】
结合所给材料,可知本文主
要考查一般现在时态,人称为单数第一,三人称,注意主谓一
致问题,句子结构主要为系
表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:
I am
busy……
,
because I
have……
,
Doing exercise can
help……
,
So I advise you to……<
/p>
等句式的应
用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写
作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关
系。
【点睛】
本文结构紧凑,语言简练。
开头表示很高兴收到
Billy
的来信,接下来介绍我平时的锻
炼情
况,最后指出锻炼给我带来的好处以及我建议
Billy<
/p>
要多锻炼。此处
be busy doing sth,
prepare for, do well in, be good for,
advise sb to do
sth
等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
2
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书面表达
随着电子时代的到来,西方文化如潮水般涌来,中国传统文化的传承面临着巨大的挑战。
有人认为学校应当开设传统文化课(
set up
traditional culture classes
),但也有人认为没有
p>
必要。假如你是
Mike,
请你用英语写一
封邮件,给你校英文报投稿写一篇短文,词数
80
左
右,谈谈你对开设传统文化课的看法。
Your
opinion
Your
reasons
Your
suggestion
necessary or
unnecessary
the root
(根)
of Chinese culture, know
more about,
spread,
develop
…
Dear editor,
As we all know, Chinese traditional
culture is facing a great challenge because of the
rapid
development if international
technology nowadays.
_____________________________________
<
/p>
________________________________________
_______________________________________
_______________________________________
________________________________________
_____________
Yours,
Mike
【答案】
Dear editor,
As we know, Chinese traditional culture
is facing a great challenge because of the rapid
development of international technology
nowadays. In my opinion, it’s necessary for
schools to
set up traditional culture
classes.
First,
traditiona
l culture is the root of
Chinese. As Chinese, we shouldn’t give up our
traditional
culture and run after
Western culture. Second, traditional culture
classes can give students
chances to
know more about our nation. They can raise their
sense of national pride. Last but not
least, setting up traditional culture
classes can spread and develop our Chinese
culture.
All in all, it is
of great importance to set up traditional culture
classes in schools. Let’s call on more
schools to set up traditional culture
classes!
Yours,
Mike
【解析】这是一篇给材料作
文,谈谈我对开设传统文化课的看法。结合所给材料,可知本
文主要考查一般现在时态,
人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系
表结构和动宾结构,注意一
些常见句式的应用,比如:
Chinese traditional culture
is
facing……
,
it’s
necessary for schools
to……
,
we
shouldn’t……
,
They can
raise……
,
it is of great
importance to……
等句式的应用。写作中注意运
用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注
意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。
点睛:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头介绍了中国传统文化面对的问题,接下
来介绍我认
为开设传统文化课的必要性的原因,最后号召更多的学校开设传统文化课。此
处
because
of
,
in
one’s opinion, give up, know about, last but not
least, set up, all in all, call on
等这些词组
的运用也让文章增色不少。
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临近毕业,学校在学习小组内开展了初中
阶段自评和组评活动,假设你是
Moonlight
小
组
的组长,请根据下面表格中的信息和提示,为你的组员
Tommy
进行综合素质的评价,
写一
份素质报告.
Name
Characteristics
Hobbies
Honour
Problems
Your
suggestions
Tommy
聪明、大方(各举一例)
喜欢看书,认为看书有很多好处(请列举
2
个好处)
他在家帮助做家务。在学校
和同学相处融洽。上学途中遵守交通规则
(举
一例)。今年,学校授予了他优秀学生奖(
Award for
Best Student
)
面临考试,遭受压力痛苦,他没有充足的睡眠.
(根据实际情况提
2
点建议)
…
要求:
1
、表达清楚、语法正确、上下
文连贯;
2
、要点必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当
发挥;
3
、词数:
100
词左右;
4
、不得使用真实姓名、校名
和地名等
Tommy is a member of my
team called Moonlight.
【答案】
Tommy is a member of my
team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good
at all his
lessons. He is so generous
that he shares everything with his likes reading
because he
thinks he can get much
knowledge and learn more about the world by
reading. And reading has a
good effect
on children’s growth. At home, he can help his
parents do some housework. At school,
he gets on well with his classmates. On
the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He
crosses
the road when the light is
green. Our school presented him with Award for
Best Student this year.
However, Tommy
is stre
ssed when the exam comes. And he
doesn’t have enough sleep.
I think he should go over what he has
learned before exams. It’s better for him to
manage his
time wisely so that he can
have enough time to rest.
【解析】
这篇作文要求我们按照表格
里的内容介绍一下
Tommy
的情况,为
Tommy
写一篇综合素质
的评价报告。在表格中有非常详细
的关于
Tommy
各方面的内容,我们需要用正确的英语把
p>
这些内容有条理的表达出来。表格中涉及的内容较多,写作时要注意表达的条理性。这篇
p>
作文应主要使用第三人称来写。在最后要给
Tommy
提一些建议,这一部分应该用第一人
称。同时注意表达的准确性,尤其是表格
中的第五项和第六项内容。
【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的
范文。这篇作文内容完整,包含了表格中的所有内容,
没有遗漏要点。表达准确,注意了
被动形式的使用,如
He was rewarded by our school
this
year.
。写作时注意了条理性,使文章具有层次
感,条理清楚。短文注意到了长短句的结
合,并恰当的使用了一些连词,使文章表达的连
贯。如
He is always ready to help
others.
、
He not only likes
reading detective novels but also likes watching
programs about sports
news.
、
He is good at running.
He won the first place in our school sports
meeting this year.
等。
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书面表达
根据要求完成短文写作,请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。
每年春节,每个孩子都能收到来自长辈的压岁钱(
lucky
money
)。随着生活水平的提高,
大部分孩子得到越来越多
的压岁钱,有些甚至通过微信(
WeChat
)或支付宝(
p>
Alipay
)收
压岁钱。同学们该如何管
理自己的钱,让自己的钱用得更有意义?请结合自己的实际写一
篇文章,词数
80
词以上,文中不能出现真实校名和人名。内容包括如下:
1.
你的压岁钱的来源和用途;
2.
对合理使用压岁钱的建议(至少
3
点);
3.
< br>呼吁大家节约用钱,把自己的压岁钱用在最需要、最有意义的地方。
【答案】
Every Spring Festival I
receive a lot of lucky money from my parents and
relatives. Now I
even get it through
WeChat or Alipay. I usually buy some of my
favorite books, school things and
some
fancy clothes. Sometimes I also buy some gifts for
my parents.
In order to make
good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the
following things. First, we
should save
part of the money for our study instead of wasting
it on video games. Second, it is a
good
idea to buy something useful for our parents or
teachers so that we can show our love to
them. What is more, why not donate our
lucky money to the poor kids in need? Helping
others
makes us happy.
All in all, let us manage our lucky
money properly. We should use our money in a
meaningful way.
【解析】
【详解】
每年春节,每个孩子都能收
到来自长辈的压岁钱(
luckymoney
)。随着生活水平
的提高,
大部分孩子得到越来越多的压岁钱,有些甚至通过微信(
WeChat
)或支付宝(
Alipay
)收
压岁钱。同学们该如何管理自己的钱,让自己的钱用得更有意义?这是一篇给材
料作文,
本题所给材料比较详细,写作中注意将所给内容表达出来,不能逐字翻译。通过
阅读材料
可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称,时态为一般现在时态,注意谓语动
词的变
化。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲,写作中注意语义通顺,符合逻辑关系
。上下
文之间可以适当使用连接词。
【点睛】
文章使用了很好的短语和句子:
In order to
make good use of the lucky money, I think we can
do the following things. First, we
should save part of the money for our study
instead of wasting
it on video
games.
这些给文章增色不少。
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书面表达
假如你是李明,你的英国笔友
Jack
来信询问你的家乡是否有雾霾天气,情况如何。请你按
照以下提示给他回一封
。
内容如下:
1.
由于大气污染程度十分严重,去年已发生数次雾霾天气;
2.
人们已经意识到雾霾天气的危害,正在采取各种措施减少
其发生;
3.
你在日常生活中打算为此做些什么。
参考词汇:雾霾
haze
注意:
1.
文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2.
语言通顺,句子连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
3.
词数
80
左右,信件的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear
Jack,
I’m glad to receive
your letter, and thank you for your caring for the
weather and my health. Now
I’d like to
tell you something about the haze.
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__________________________________________________
_________________________
______________
__________________________________________________
_______________
________________________
__________________________________________________
_____
__________________________________
_____________________________________________
____________________________________________ ___________________________________
____
__________________________________________________
________________________
Yours,
Li
Ming
【答案】
Dear
Jack,
I’m glad to receive
your letter, and thank you for your caring for the
weather and my health. Now
I’d like to
tell you something about the haze.
The hazy weather has occurred a lot of
times in my hometown since last year. It was bad
for our
daily life. More and more
people have to go to see the doctor due to the
serious diseases caused
by the haze. A
great number of people have to stay at home
.
People all over the
country are taking measures to reduce the hazy
weather now. The
government suggests
that people go to work or school by public
transport, such as the bus and
the
subway.
As for me, I will go
to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will
tell the people I meet to protect
the
environment. Would you like to tell me some good
ideas?
I’m looking forward to your
reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以李明的
身份给自己的英国笔友写信,告诉他关于家乡雾霾的情况。题
目中列出了三个要点,我们
应根据这些要点提示,来组织语言,充实内容。首先介绍去年
家乡的雾霾情况严重;然后
介绍为减少雾霾人们采取了一些措施;最后介绍一下你自己在
日常生活中应该怎么做。因
此文章应主要分成三段,一个内容一段。文章内容中叙述的情
况不一,时态不能统一,根
据表达的需要使用正确的时态,注意谓语动词的正确形式。写
作时,应注意英语句式表达
习惯和汉语是不同的,不能逐词翻译,应从句子的整体考虑,
写完整的句子,利用简单句
的基本句型,使用恰当的词汇和短语。为提升文章档次,可以
穿插使用并列句和复合句;
语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使文意连贯,表达流畅。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文,短文
中作者根据题目要求介绍了自己家乡治理雾霾的情况,并结合
自身的实际情况,讲述了自
己日常生活中是如何做的。首先短文内容完整,包含了题目中
要求的所有信息,没有遗漏
要点;且文章结构清晰,分成了三段,每一段的中心明确,意
思表达清楚、明了。其次短
文中使用了正确的时态和人称,作者根据表达需要使用了一般
过去时、一般将来时态和一
般将来时态,动词形式变化准确,语法规范。短文中语言得
体,句式表达符合英语的习惯
。句子结构以简单句为主,也使用了一些并列句和复合句,
长短句结合,使文章富有节奏
。短文中较好的句式有
More and more people have to
go to
see the doctor due to the serious
diseases caused by the
haze
、
People all over the
country are
taking measures to reduce
the hazy weather now.
、
The
government suggests that people go to
work or school by public transport,
such as the bus and the
subway
、
In addition, I will
tell the
people I meet to protect the
environment.
等。
6
.
书面表达
某英文报举办
“
家乡的变化
”
主题征文活动。请根据下表提示,以
“The
Changes in My
Hometown”
为题,用英
语写一篇
100
词左右的短文,不必逐字逐句翻译。
生活条件差,道路狭窄,房屋破旧。
过去
污染严重,垃圾遍地。
......
(适当发挥一至两点)
环境:政府采取措施来改善污染,城市变得越来越整洁。
p>
生活:住房宽敞明亮;许多人搬进了新公寓。越来越多的人
现在
p>
有自己的汽车;生活舒适。
交通:新的飞机场已投入使用多年。
be in
use
(投入使用);
旅游:每年有成千上万来自各地的游客。
将来
希望
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(两点)
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