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读后续写素材：
Holes
《别有洞天》细节
描写
88
句
熟练记诵，内化为自己的写作语言
人物外貌、性格描写
y
weighed three times as much
as
the other boy.
（人物，
肖像描写）
he started
a project he would work on it for years, often
going days without sleep.
（人物
性格）
3. Elya
blushed
(<
/p>
红脸
)
when Myra entered the room.
（人物，神态描写）
4.
His clothes were
soaked
(
被
…
浸湿的
)
with
sweat.
（人物描写）
5. He felt like he was digging his own
grave.
（心理描写，修辞）
the people looked broken, with their
worn-
out
(
疲惫不堪
) bodies
sprawled
(
四肢摊开懒散
地坐或躺
)
over the various chairs and sofas.
(
环境描写，人物描写
)
7. Every muscle and joint in his body
ached as he tried to get out of bed.
（病痛，人物描写）
8.
Now
he
had
such
a
huge
smile
it
almost
seemed
too
big
for
his
face,
like
the
smile
on
a
jack-o'-lantern
.
（笑容，人物描写）
9.
Zero's
mouth was shut tight.
As he
glared
at
(
怒视
)
Mr. Pendanski, his dark eyes seemed to
expand.
（生气，
人物描写）
10.
If he
jerked
(
猛的一动
) too quickly, he felt a
throbbing
(
阵阵的疼痛
) pain just above his neck
where
Zigzag's shovel had hit him
.
（疼痛，
人物描写）
11.
A big smile spread across
Zero's face
.
（人物描写）
12. Zero's
face looked like a jack-o'-lantern that had been
left out too many days past
Halloween
—
half
rotten
, with
sunken
eyes and a
drooping(
颓丧
)
smile.
（人物描写）
13.
Zero sat as still as a
statue
.
（人物描写）
14. His legs were sore from remaining
rigid for so long.
（人物描写）
15. He
had dark circles
under her eyes
from Jack of
sleep
(
因缺乏睡眠
).
（人物描写）
16.
Stanley was overcome by a rush of dizziness and
almost fell over.
（人物描写）
17. Stanley felt his ears redden.
（人物描写）
人物语言、动作描写
18.A
man was sitting
with his feet up on a
desk
.
（人物，动作描写）
y
could
see
some
kids
dressed
in
orange
and
carrying
shovels
dragging
themselves
toward the tents.
（人物，着装与动作描写）
20.
Theodore
whirled
(
急转
)
and
grabbed Stanley by his
collar
.
（冲突，动作描写）
21. He
ate it all, and used his slice of white bread to
mop up the juice.
（饥饿，动作描写）
22. As
he reached down to pick up his canteen, he felt a
sudden rush of dizziness and put his hands
on his knees to steady himself.
（动作描写）
y
got in line
behind Zero.
（排队，动作描写）
24.
preposterous
(
可笑的
)!
expelling
(
喷出
)
saliva as he spoke.
（语言与
动作描写）
25. Squid slid over to
make
room
as Stanley sat down.
（动作描写）
26. He
stopped writing as he became aware that somebody
was reading
over
his
shoulder.
（人物，
动作描写）
27. Magnet
helped Stanley to
his feet. (
动作描写
)
28. Stanley was half asleep as he got
in line for breakfast, but the sight of Mr. Sir
awakened him.
（人物，动作描写）
29. Kate
struggled to her
feet
.
（动作描写）
30.
leave me
alone
, okay? I don't want to talk to
you.
（冲突，语言描写）
31.
Sometimes she could hear
Sam's voice
echoing
across
the emptiness.
onions.
（语言描写）
32. His knees
crumpled(
崩溃
) beneath him. He
was unconscious before he hit the ground.
（动作
描写）
33. He
kept an eye out
for Zero, but Zero didn't come back.
（人物，动作描写）
人物情绪、心理描写
's just
been
in a bad mood
ever
since he
quit smoking
.
（情绪）
y
was relieved to
be left
alone, but he was so
thirsty
he
felt as if
he
would die if he
didn't get something to
drink soon.
（心理活动）
36.
The last thing he wanted
to do
after killing himself all day on
the lake was to get in a fight
with a
boy called the Caveman.
（心理描写）
37.
Stanley played the scene over and over again in
his mind.
（心理描写）
38. Whatever pain he felt was being
felt ten times worse by Derrick.
（痛苦，心理描写）
39. He
didn't feel like
going into
details
.
（心理描写）
40. He felt a jolt of
astonishment(
震惊
).
（心理）
41.
My blood boiled
.
（心理描写）
42. He
tried to
convince himself
it
wasn't impossible.
（心理描写）
43.
What if
Zero
was still alive, desperately
crawling
across the dirt
searching
for
water?
（心理
描写，动作描写）
44. He tried to
force the
image out of
his mind.
（心理描写）
45.
Death would be a relief
.
What worried him the most was the
thought of his parents not knowing
what
happened to him, not knowing whether he was dead
or alive
.
（心理描写）
46. An even crazier idea
kept popping
into
(
不断进入
) his
head.
（心理描写）
47.
Two nights later, Stanley lay awake staring up at
the star-filled sky. He was too happy to fall
asleep.
（动作描写，心理描写）
48.
They walked for
what
seemed
like a very long time, and still never
came across
....
(
时间漫
长，心中焦急
)
49.
A wave of terror rushed
over him
when he saw....
(
恐惧，心理描写
)
50.
The fear made him dizzy
. He
took a breath,
summoned his
courage
, and continued.
（恐惧，
克服恐惧，心理描写）
51.
He heard his own heart
heat
.
（激动，紧张，害怕等强烈的情绪）
52. He felt the scream explode inside
him. (
恐惧，心理描写
)
53. Stanley could hear his heart beat.
Each beat told him he was still alive, at least
for one more
second.
（恐惧，心理描写）
54.
He
felt
as
if
he
was
walking
in
a
dream,
not
quite
able
to
comprehend
what
was
going
on
around him
.
（心理描写）
55. Twitch
had been
arrested
for
stealing a car. He
claimed
he could
break
into
a car, disconnect the
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