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2020
届高三山东名校好题速递分项汇编（
1
）之读后续写
读后续写
【
2020
届山东省淄博
市高三下学期一模】
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开
头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为
150
左右。
There was a rich couple
who was throwing a big New Year party at their
house. So they went shopping at
the
market where everything was of high cost and fixed
price. They wanted to maintain their level of
standard
so they didn’t mind paying for
it. After purchasing all they needed, they called
a porter to carry everything
and drop
it at their home. The porter who came was of an
old age, and looked very unhealthy, and his
clothes
were torn, and he looked as if
he wasn’t even able to meet his daily
needs.
They asked the porter
about the charges for delivering their goods to
their home. The old porter quoted
just
$$20, well below the market price. Yet, the couple
argued and bargained with the porter and finally
settled
for $$15. The porter was
struggling to make even one time’s meal so he
needed anything he could earn.
The couple was very happy thinking how
well they bargained with the poor porter and paid
him $$15 in
advance and left after
giving the porter their address for delivery. They
reached their home and one hour
passed,
and two hours passed, but the porter still didn’t
deliver their stuff.
The
wife started to get angry at her husband, “I
always tell you
not to trust such
person, but you never
listen to me. I
am sure instead of delivering the goods to our
home, he must have disappeared with everything.
We must immediately go back to the
market to inquire and then to the police station
to file the complaint
against
him.”
They both left towards
the market. On their way near the market, they saw
another porter. They stopped
him to
inquire about the old porter and noticed that he
was carrying their goods in his cart! The angry
wife
asked him, “Where is that
old
thief? This is our goods and he was
supposed to deliver them. It seems you poor
thieves are stealing our goods and
going to sell them.”
Paragraph 1:
When
the porter heard the angry wife asking.
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Paragraph 2:
Upon
hearing this, the husband had tears in his eyes,
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【答案】
Paragraph 1:
When the porter heard the angry wife
asking, he turned back. The porter replied,
“Madam, please calm down.
I’m not a
thief. That poor old man was sick since last
month. He couldn’t earn enough to even have a
single meal of
the day.
Therefo
re, he fell down and handed me
$$15, saying, ‘I have taken an advance for this
delivery, and you
deliver the goods to
the couple’s home.’ Madam, he was poor and hungry,
but he was an honest man. I was just on the
way to completing the old man’s last
delivery to your home.”
Paragraph 2:
Upon hearing
this, the husband had tears in his eyes, and the
wife felt so ashamed that she had no courage to
look
her husband in the eyes. Suddenly
she rushed to the market. Half an hour later, the
wife came back with some food in
her
hand. She passed the food on to the porter, and
said sorry to the porter, saying that she
shouldn’t suspect them, and
took them
as thieves. At last, the porter took the goods to
their house, and the rich couple changed their
attitude to the
man like the porter.
【解析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。
通过阅读所给文章可知，一对富人夫妇为了准备新年聚会去市场不惜高价买了许多物品，
然后雇佣了一个
搬运工把这些物品运回家。搬运工是一个年老体弱生活拮据的人，他要价
$$20
低于市场价，而富人夫妇讨价
还
价后只给
$$15
。富人夫妇高兴地回家等着老人把物品送来，却
迟迟不见老人的身影。妻子认为上了老人的
当，一定老人把他们的物品卖掉了。回去找老
人时却发现他们的物品在另外一个搬运工的车上。
续写部分分
为两段，第一段开头是：当搬运工听到生气的妻子问题时……，所以应该写他讲述的实情，老
人病了又吃不上饭，这次摔倒了，他把
$$15
给了这个搬运
工，请求他把物品送到富人家。第二段开头是：丈
夫听了，眼里含着泪水，……。下文应
该写富人夫妇被老人感动，行动和态度都发生了改变。
最后还
要注意所续写短文的词数应为
150
左右。按要求完成写作任务
。
calm down, taken an
advance, Upon hearing, felt ashamed,
本文
描写详略得当，
使用了高级词汇和高级句子。
如：
changed their
attitude
等高级词汇；
Therefore, he
fell down and hand
ed me $$15, saying, ‘I
have taken an advance for
this delivery, and you deliver the
goods to the couple’s
home.’
和
She passed the food
on to the porter, and said sorry
to the
porter, saying that she shouldn’t suspect them,
and took them as
thieves.
运用了非谓语动词；
the wife
felt so
ashamed that she had no courage
to look her husband in the eyes.
运用了
so……that
句型。等高级句式。
读后续写
【
2020
届山东省济南市山东师范大学附属中学高三
3
月份在线检测】<
/p>
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构
成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为
150
左右。
The most delicious memories seem
to happen during the holidays. And like a squirrel
preparing for
winter, I put them away
to enjoy slowly during the long winter months.
Sometimes, I enjoy them for years.
Among them are sweetest recollections:
my little girls at the church play and the moment
they got their
first angel wings; a
pink dolly stroller(
手推车
)
wheeled into the bedroom with a tiny voice
declaring, ''Look
what Santa Claus
brought me! ''; or New Year's snowmen wearing
bright scarves borrowed from a grandma's
fragrant drawer.
But there is one memory that is a
little bittersweet -- sort of like 80% dark
chocolate, but still good for
you.
This story
brings to mind a colorful candy dish and a very
little boy. The occasion was somewhere
between Christmas and New Year's when a
few candies in a dish remained behind, a bright
spot in dull winter
gray.
Wrapped in December's chill, my then
3-year old grandson, Justin, and I had dashed from
the warmth of
my parked car into the
building where I planned to take care of a few
work-related tasks.
A
smiling secretary greeted us as we brushed the
snowflakes and rubbed our hands to chase the cold.
Then with my grandchild close to my
side, I busied myself, finishing the items of
business that had brought us
there. But
while his hand remained in mine, his eyes fell on
the candy dish sitting nearby.
As we turned to leave, the thoughtful
and very observant woman behind the desk asked the
question all
children wait to
hear.
''Honey, '' the kindly
woman said, peering over her glasses at Justin.
''Would you like a candy bar? '' she
asked, her hand pushing the dish close
for an easier reach.
The boy
looked up questioningly, his eyes meeting mine,
permission hanging in the air. A slight nod from
me and then a hurried beeline to the
candy dish followed. One candy bar was already in
his hand.
Para 1: ''Justin!
'' I said from the doorway.
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Para 2: In the
humor of the moment, I felt something hard to
swallow.
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【答案】
''Justin!'' I said from
the doorway. By this time his pudgy hands had
grabbed one -- and only one -- and he
made his way back to me. My voice was
somewhat serious as I realized manners had been
forgotten. ''What do you
say? ''
Hearing this, the little boy turned on his heel,
promptly returning to the candy dish. ''Get
Grandma one, too! '' I
laughed. The
secretary laughed. And even little Justin
innocently giggled at the fun we were having.
In the humor of the moment, I felt
something hard to swallow. There was a truth that
lingered long after the
strawberry
candy taste had disappeared. What example had I
set for this little one while often in my care?
Was he
learning more about ''getting''
and less about gratitude -- that heartfelt ''thank
you''? In the years since, I've always
loved to remember that moment. But one
gift I hope we all leave with our children is the
importance of a grateful
heart. Really,
what could be sweeter?
【解析】
这是一篇读后续写。文章主要讲述了作者和孙子的一次经历带给她苦中带乐的回忆。
续写分为两段。第一段的开头是：“
Ju
stin
！”我在走廊上说。这时他的手上抓着一颗糖，然后朝我走过来。
我的声音有点严肃，我意识到自己当时失态了。“你说什么？”。听到这话，小男孩转过身去，立刻跑
到
糖果盘那里。“给奶奶也拿一颗。”我笑了。秘书也笑了。小
Justin
也咯咯的笑了。第二段的开头是：在这
个幽默时刻
，我觉得有些东西难以下咽。在草莓味糖果的味道消失之后，有一个想法始种萦绕在我心头。
我给小家伙树立了什么榜样？他学到了更多关于得到，更少关于感激的东西吗（那种发自内心的感激）？
从那以后，我一直记得那一刻。我总是希望让孩子学会真正的感恩。没有什么比这更好了。<
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续写时应注意故事情节要符合逻辑，基础时态为一般过去时。
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑
关系。作者在范
文中使用了一些高级表达，
例如：
Hearing this, the little boy turned on his
heel, promptly returning to the candy
dish.
中使用了现在分词作状语；
There was a
truth that lingered long after the strawberry
candy taste had disappeared.
中
that
引导同位语从句；
What example
had I set for this little one while often in my ca
re?
中
what
引导主语从句。
这些表达的使用不仅给文章增色添彩，也展示了作者扎实的语言功底。
读后续写
【
2020
届山东省日照市高三校际联考】
阅读下面材料，根
据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
续写的词数应为
150
左右。
As a sixth grader, I began noticing how
other kids were separating into groups. I wasn't
sure where I belonged. I
found it hard
to fit in.
Our teacher had assigned
and threw them into a glass; then we
each closed our eyes and drew the name of a
classmate who we were to secretly
befriend and support over the next five
school days. By the middle of the week, everyone,
including me, had turned
this
assignment into a contest to see whose secret
friend could leave the best gift. We left cards,
pens and even money.
It seemed that
everyone was getting cool presents from their
friend except me.
On the last morning
of our assignment, I walked into my classroom and
noticed there was a package. I opened
the wrapping paper and inside was a box
of powder(
胭脂粉
).The girls
sitting near me laughed the gift I had received.
To make matters worse, the powder had
already been opened.
I tried to forget
about the embarrassing gift, but when I was in the
bathroom during the break, the girls who had
seen me open the powder started
speaking ill of my secret friend of giving it to
me. I quickly joined in
I heard myself
saying
even want it.
water
run through my fingers as I thought about what I
had just said. It wasn't normal like me to say
mean things like
that about someone.
Paragraph 1:
Then I saw my
classmate Janet come out of a bathroom booth(
厕所隔间
)
，
tears
streaming down her face.
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Paragraph 2:
Along with my
apologies, I explained the reason.
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【答案】
Paragraph 1:
Then I saw my classmate Janet come out
of a bathroom booth(
厕所隔间
),
tears streaming down her face. She
shouted at me with anger, “If you don’t
want my gift you can just leave it instead of
laughing at it. This is the best
powder
from my mum! “
Before I could say a
word, Janet dashed out, leaving me dumb with deep
regret. But soon I
clenched my fingers
and made up my mind to find Janet and say sorry to
her. There she was, sitting in a tree shadow
wiping her eyes.
Paragraph
2:
Along with my apolog
ies,
I explained the reason. I was not a mean girl by
judging people’s presents. The reason
why I complained in front of the girls
was that I wanted to fit in, having a sense of
belonging in the group. Hearing my
sincere words, Janet calmed herself
down af
ter constant sobs and said,
“True friendship comes from genuine care and
love for each other. I think that’s our
teacher’s intention of this ‘secret friend’
assignment”. That day, I learned to
cherish real friendship.
【解析
】
这是一篇记叙文。要求写续写。
[
写作步骤
]
1.
< br>精读文章，确定文章线索，如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等，这有利于“顺藤摸瓜”。本文以空
间为线索，根据提示语可知，故事的发展由教室转向洗手间。
2.
仔细审题，明确续写要求，如字数限制（
150
）
、续写段落的首句提示等，做到“心中有数”。本文
需续
写两个段落，每个段落均给出了段首句，可根据段首句完成续写。
< br>
3.
回扣原文，想象续写内容。快速回读短文，揣摩文
章的思路，结合段首的提示语，确定续写段落的内容。
4.<
/p>
拟写草稿，修改错词病句。结合提示语和文中划线的关键词拟写出草稿，注意句子结构的多
样性，语言
的丰富性，上下文的衔接。
本文写作
做到了：与原文的主题保持一致；要与原文的体裁写作手法保持一致；与主要人物的思想行为、
< br>性格特点要与原文保持一致。
文章写作中使用了
if
引导的状语从句
（
If you
don’t want my gift you can just leave
it instead of laughing at it.
）
；现在分词作伴随状语（
There she was,
sitting in a tree shadow wiping her eyes.
）
；定
语从句和表语从句（
The
reason why I complained in front of the girls was
that I wanted to fit in, having a sense of
belonging in the
group.
）
。
< br>读后续写
【
2020
届山东省泰
安市新高考模拟】
阅读下面材料，
根
据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，
使之构成一篇完整的短文。
续写的词数应为
150
左
右。
Kent was a manager of a furniture
agency. His establishment nearly went bankrupt
(
倒闭）
because of the wrong
decision he had made. He was so
regretful and depressed that he planned to drive
to a bar alone to release his
emotions.
It was near midnight in an extremely
cold winter, and the temperature was minus 9
degrees centigrade. There
were few
people in the street. Suddenly, a figure of an old
madam entered his line of sight. She was standing
sideways
near a platform, dressed in a
plain coat, dragging a suitcase, and holding a
plastic bag in the other hand. The slight old
lady was seemingly more than 80. She
was trembling in cutting wind. Now she kept
motioning Kent for a ride.
Although
Kent was somewhat angry about the old madam's
disturbing
，
he wouldn't like
to leave her in the cold night.
He
noticed she coughed violently and thought that she
might be ill and really needed help. So he braked
near her.
The madam said,
charge you nothing! Come
on!
car?
Kent proceeded to
drive. He stopped at a petrol station where he
wanted to purchase gallons of gasoline
(
汽油
).
During the
interval they waited in a
queue
，
the madam began her
narration,
house in the suburbs? I want
to send them something. I had been given help
there 50 years ago. The president and
workers were all good
guys.
，
we all
loved and cared about each other. I've held a
desire to be back there again for
long.
was recalling a section of the
good missing days. A complicated feeling
surrounded him, and he decided to cancel his
plan and stay with the old madam.
Paragraph 1
：
After a two-
hour drive
，
they came to the
gate of their destination.
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Paragraph 2
：
Hearing this,
Kent lapsed into silence, because he knew the rest
home was for patients with incurable diseases.
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【答案】
Paragraph 1
：
After a two-
hour drive, they carne to the gate of their
destination. It was quiet and dark. The door of
the charity
house was closed and a weak
light went through the guard room. Kent got off
the car and rang the bell. An old
doorkeeper came out. Making clear why
they came, they were invited in. The old madam
handed her suitcase over to
the
doorkeeper, inside it being clothes arid toys she
collected. Then they looked round the house and
left. On the way
back, the old madam
asked for another ride,
Paragraph 2
：
Hearing this,
Kent lapsed into silence, because he knew the rest
home was for patients with incurable diseases.
have been seriously ill for a long time
and will soon die of lung cancer. I come out to
say goodbye to my life. Now I
will have
no regrets before death. Thanks for your
help!
on her face. Kent remained silent
for a while. He was chewing over what the madam
said, and glad that he could help
her
realize the last desire.
【解析】
这是一篇读后续写。文章主要讲述了
Kent
在寒冷的夜晚遇
到了一个老人，并同意带她郊区慈善机
构的故事。
续写分为两段。第一段的开头是：两小时车程后，他们到达了目的地的大门。所以可以接着写：天色 很暗，
到处都很安静，大门里的建筑里透出了微弱的光。
Ken
t
下车给门卫说明情况后，门卫让他们进去。老人把
装满衣服和
玩具的箱子交给门卫。他们围着建筑四处转了一下，然后离开了。路上，女士要求
Ken
t
把她送
到市里的疗养院。
第二段的开头是：听了女士的话<
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Kent
陷入了沉思，因为他知道疗养院是专门为那些有不治之症
的病人准备
的。看到
Kent
的样子，
女士说:“我生了很严重病，已近是癌症晚期，很快就到生命的尽头了。今天我是去
和从
前的生活说再见的，现在，我没有遗憾了。非常感谢你。”女士说话的时候面带笑容，丝毫看不出悲
伤。
Kent
此刻觉得很感激，感激他能有机会帮助
这位女士实现最后的愿望。
续写时需注意情节要符合逻辑，基础时态为一般过去时。
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系
。作者在范
文中使用了一些高级表达，
例如：
< br>The old madam handed her suitcase over to the doorkeeper, inside it being clothes
arid toys she
collected.
中使用了独立主格；
The madam
made an explanation calmly, with a bright smile on
her face.
中使用了
with
复合结构；
He was chewing over what the madam
said, and glad that he could help her realize the
last
desire.
中
what
引导宾语从句。这些表达的使用使文章色彩纷呈。
读后续写
【
2020
届山
东省济宁市第一中学高三下学期二轮质量检测】
阅读下面材料
，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为
1
50
左右。
I always
prided myself on being a wise shopper and having a
good nose for bargains. So when I came
across a sporting goods store with a
sign “Going Out of Business Sale”, I marched into
the crowded store. Up
and down the
aisles (
通道
), I wandered,
humming to myself and enjoying the energy and
excitement of a sale.
All of
a sudden, there, at the back of the store sat a
canoe(
轻舟
) exactly like my
husban
d’s dream
Supremo
Numero-Uno, whose picture had been stuck on the
bathroom mirror for years.
My heart beat
wildly. I pushed my way
through the crowds, and nearly fell into the canoe
looking for the price tag. There it
was, with the manufacturer’s
suggeste
d price at $$6,750 plus tax
crossed out and a handwritten TO CLEAR
$$750 AS IS. Must be a mistake. $$6000
off? Salesman. I had to talk to a salesman. I
spotted a young fellow with
a “Hi. I’m
Mathew”. “Mathew. Tell me about this El Supremo
canoe. What’s wrong
with it? Why is it
only
$$750?”
“Oh.
There’s nothing wrong with it. It’s brand new.
We’re closing the store. It’s on clearance like
everything else. I’ll go check.” A few
minutes later he came back and said, “I’m sorry
ma’am. Someone made
a mistake on the
s
ale tag. It should be $$4,750 for the
whole package.”
I felt tears
well up in my eyes. “Oh well”, I said sadly. “Of
course, it was too good to be true. This is
exactly like my husband’s dreamboat. I
guess I started to dream myself when I saw that
price tag.
He’s going
to be 62 years old Friday. Had to
retire early for his health. It’s been hard on
just the pension but the stubborn
old fool has been saving
$$10 every week for years to buy one just like
this. I promise I won’t buy anything, but
it’s just an old
man’s silly dream, you know. Always
said he wanted to fish in a canoe after he
retired,” my
voice lowered and I turned
and walked away.
Paragraph
1:
I was already at the mall
door when Mathew caught up with me. “Do you have
$$750 plus $$25 for delivery,
ma
’am?”
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Paragraph 2:
“Ma’am. There’s something you should
know. This store was my Grandpa’s and the canoe
had been
ordered by him.
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【答案】
Paragraph 1:
I was already at the mall door when
Mathew caught up with me. “Do you have $$750 plus
$$25 for delivery,
ma’am?” “Yes. Yes.
That's about all I have,” “Well then, you just
have your
husband sitting at the front
gate on Friday
morning around
1
0 o’clock so he can be there when my
Dad and I come to unload his new
canoe
. We’ll even put a
bow
on it for his birthday.” I started to cry. My old
hand shook as I wrote out my cheque.
Paragraph 2:
“Ma’am. There’s
something you should know. This store was my
Grandpa’s and the canoe had been ordered by
him. He always promised to retire
one day and said he wanted to spend
time relaxing and out fishing in a canoe.” He
swallowed hard. “My Grandpa died,
sudden
-like, just last week. He was
only 68 years old. I th
ink he’d be
mighty
happy that your husband will get
this canoe. You just have to make sure he uses it
a lot, okay? Promise?” “I
promise
,”
I said
as I dashed off to look for my dear sweet husband.
【解析】
本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一篇读后续写。
第
1
步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一篇读后续写：阅读下面材料，根据其内
容和所给段落开头语续写两
段，使之构成一篇完整的短文，注意续写的词数为
150
左右，时态应为一般过去时。
第
2
步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）
，如；
unload
（卸）
，
bow
（蝴蝶结）
，
cheque
（支票）
，
shake
（颤
抖）
，
retire
（退休）
，
swallow
（吞咽）
，
promise(
承诺
)
及
relax
（放松）等。
第
3
步：根据提示
及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第
4
步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过
渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的
整洁美观。
范文语言地道，
语篇连贯，
词数适当。
作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，
高级词汇有
start to do
（开
始做……）
< br>，
write
out
（写出）
，
dash off
(
匆忙完成
)
，
look
for
（寻找）
，
spend
time doing
（花时间做某事）以
及
< br>make sure
（确保）
，而且还使用了状语从句“
Well then, you just have your husband
sitting at the front gate on
Friday
morning around 10 o’clock so he
ca
n be there when my Dad and I come to
unload his new canoe.
”，“
I
said
as I dashed off to look for my
dear sweet husband.
”及“
My old
hand shook as I wrote out my
cheque.
”，宾语从
句“
I
think he’d be mighty happy that your husband will
get this canoe.
”及“
He always
promised to retire one day
and said he
wanted to spend time relaxing and out fishing in a
canoe.
”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流
畅。<
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读后续写
【
2
020
届山东省部分学校联考模拟】
阅读下面材料
,
根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段
,
使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为
150
左
右。
The first thing
Eileen Korey noticed when she got into the car
that Wednesday afternoon in early May was a
small diamond ring in the
tray(
托盘
)between the front
seats. It hadn't been there before. Weeks earlier,
she had taken
the car in to have the
airbag replaced. The car belonged to her daughter
and son-in-law and she was helping them out.
Now she was picking it up. That's when
she saw the ring. Korey, 64, of Lake Oswego
quickly contacted her daughter
and son-
in-law to ask if they were missing a diamond ring
or if any of their friends had reported losing a
ring. They
both wrote back, saying they
had no idea what she was talking about.
Korey took the ring to the service desk
at the garage to ask if any women technicians
might have left a ring in the
car while
they were working on it. The woman behind the
counter said only men worked on the cars.
Korey asked if the desk clerk could get
information from the guy who had replaced the
airbag. Over a two-way
radio(
对讲机
), Helbt
said he'd placed the ring in the tray when it
dropped to the car's floor after he opened up the
steering column to replace the airbag.
He was not sure how it got there.