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一、文章结构用词表达
1
、分点一：分层论证
Basic to any understanding of the
benefits we can get from_______ is that__________/
First and
foremost
；
On one hand_________, On the other
hand_________
；
Besides/ What’s more/ In
addition
；
First
of all/to begin with/above
all
；
In the
second place/in the second
instance
；
Last
but not least/in summary
；
这一段主要说理，在分论点里可以加一些小的例子细节，重点是要用一些精华句子！
。
2
、分点二：举例论证
Further lending credence to my position
is that____________
（
简单阐述
/
例子字不够就多讲点废
话）
< br>
/I can think of no better
illustration than the example
of
（典型例子）
/ A case
in point is
that
（不是很典型）
________,…..some
expert pionts out that...
/take ... in instance...
/according to the investigation
conducted this year indicates that.../(
推荐，为神马，因为句子长，
废话多
…
…)
some statistics expose
that...
一句话总结例子：
As a result,
< br>强调句
/
倒装句
/
表利弊的句型
/
反面论证如果没有会怎样
。
3
、让步段：
Agree or disagree: Admittedly,_____,to
some extent, may directly or indirectly ____ /has
its
undeniable detriments.
For instance, _______
However, the valuable merits of_______
considerably overshadow the drawbacks/ on no
account________./
（经典正反对比结构）
二选一：
Admittedly, BB also has
certain merits which deserve some words here. For
example,
____(
字数不够就多讲点
)
However
，
BB
的缺点或
AA
也可以做到
. Compared with AA,
（
which
可以总结所有优点或针
对
BB
的一方面
,
）
it pales.
。
4
、结尾段：
Therefore, due to the above mentioned
reasons, which sometimes correlate with each other
to
form an organic whole and thus
become more persuasive than any single one of
them(
字不够了
用
), I
reinforce my stand point that
。
5
、改写题目
Only via(by/through /with/when/after)
___can we__________;
only
via(by/through /with/when/after) ___can
we________;
and only
via(by/through /with/when/after)___can
we_______
Or
It
is A that...;it is A that...;and it is A
that...
（不好写或显得累赘就不要了）
二、语言结构用词表达
1
、基本句型
A.
因果
On account of/owing to/due to+
N
For the reason
that/as/since+
句子
.
It is due
to____that
eg:It is due to
his persistence and perseverance that he
eventually reached his
acme.(
强调句
)
.
derive/arise/stem
from
来源于
eg:His success derives from his
persistence and perseverance.
.
ascribe A to
B
归结于
eg: His
success can be ascribed/attributed to his
persistence and perseverance
.
B.
条件
A
serves as a catalyst for B(our further
success)
If/on condition
that/provided that/as long as________
.
C.
让步
Despite the fact that/regardless
of
.
2
、经典句型
A.
倒装
Only via(by/through /with/when/after)
__do/did/can we__
eg: Only
after going to the beach of Hawaii will I know
aboutAmerican typical type of spending
leisure time.
.
Hardly/Seldom/Scarcely can__
eg: Hardly can we imagine a world/our
life without/devoid of
So
+adj+
主谓倒装
+that__
Not only
主谓倒装
but also...
eg:
Not only should education prepare children to
compete
Not
only do people care their economic needs,they but
also want to meet their spiritual
needs.
On no account
主谓倒装（决不
< br>....
）
.
B.
强调
It is/was....that/who(m)....
.
限定性副词
probably/directly or
indirectly/to some(a large) extent
.
3
、经典中的经典
A.
排比
1
、
It is tourism
that gives me the opportunity to know the culture
of this dynamic, robust and alive
country.
2
、
It is computers
that make our life diverse,convenient,dynamic/
vibrant, without which our life
would
probably pale.
3
、
A/which needs
to be/In this way, A can be readily accepted,
respected,appreciated and
advocated.
4
、
Only via
university education can we have systematic
knowledge concerning arts and science.
Only via university
education can we know the essence of symbiosis and
collaboration.
And
Only via university education can we meet the
demands of society and make our future
success inevitable.
三、作文中的部分新颖表达及部分垃圾词汇的替代
作文中想要拿到高分，
就必须有一些与众不同的词汇或表达方式，
笔者在这里所说的“垃圾
词汇”并没有贬低这些表达的意思，
大家可以想象一个阅卷老师在阅几千份试卷的过程中就
看到几千次相同表达
，分数可想而知，所以如何取舍你懂的。
.
A
、认为
（尽量避免的表达，以下例句同，不再重复说明：
I
think/I believe/As
far
as
I
am
concerned
）
1.
别人认为：
assume,
argue, contend, maitain, hold the perspective
that…
2.
我认为：
I am inclined to the view
that…(
开头引入自己观点
)
convinced
that…
I aware that…
(
比较弱
)
I cling to a belief
that…
.
B
、不同人有不同看法
（
Diff
erent people have different
opinions
）
People’s perspective diverge on this
controversial issue.
There
is no consensus among people concerning this
controversial issue.
.
C
、举例
（
for example/for
instance/let me give you an
example
）
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