-运动员
环境描写分为客观和主观两种角度
:
客观为从环
境事物本身入手
,
主观则从观察
者角度
描写。通常在描写时主客观交替进行
,
主观描写比重稍大。
客观环境描写
:
Part 1
环境描写的
adj
要求
:
有声
,
有色
,
有质感
,<
/p>
有味道
the blue
sky(
蓝天
)the songs of
birds(
鸟鸣
)the thundering clou
ds(
电光闪
雷鸣
)
< br>
the fragile flowers
(
娇嫩的花
);(the dark, raining
evening
雨夜交加的夜
晚
)the
green
grass(
青
草
)
the
fragrant
roses(
艳<
/p>
丽
的
玫
瑰
);
the
setting/rising sun(
落日
/
冉冉升起的太阳)…
Part 2
环境描写的
verb
(vi&vt)
要求
一
).Wind
(blow/click/howl/wail/roar)
gust
of
wind
blew
and
parted
the
drooping
branches
of
the
weeping
willow
like a curtain,…一阵风吹<
/p>
,
吹起了弯柳的低垂枝条
,
就像卷起的窗帘。
wind,
soft
and
cold,
clicked
through
tree
branches
and
stirred
the
bushes
that
sprinkled
the
slo
pe.
风
,
轻柔却寒冷
,
轻点着树枝
,
搅动着斜坡下
的灌木丛。
cool breeze blew
through the quiet
park.
凉爽的微风吹拂着寂静的公园。
cold breeze wafted through my hair.
(
冷风吹拂过我的头发
)
The wind was perfect for kite flying,
blowing just hard enough to give
some
lift.
(
今日正是放风筝的好天
气
,
强劲的风力带动了风筝的上升。
)
二
).Water
(flow/travel/move/meander/enter)
声音
: one point, the faint
sound of water tumbling through the
valley.
在某处
,
潺潺的的水声在山谷中奏响。
颜色
water
was
deep
blue
and
sunlight
glittered
on
its
looking
glass-clear
surface.
< br>水是深蓝色的
,
阳光在透明的玻璃表面闪闪发光。
little way off was a small
brook, rushing and sparkling along between
green bank.
离此不远<
/p>
,
有一条小溪
,
在绿色的河岸间奔腾闪耀。
4. It murmured
in a soft voice like a little innocent girl
whispered to
her loving mother.
似乎它在温柔低语
,
就一位天真少女对着她那慈爱的母
亲细
细私语。
(action, sound,
colour)
三
).Sky
(stand/ appear/turn)
sky
was a curdled gray burdened with lumps of
clouds.
天空是浓浓的灰色
,
伴着拥挤的朵朵云
skies
stood tall and far
蓝蓝的天空高高耸立
主观环境描写
:
found sth adj/doing/done
某人发
现某物
(
状态
/
动作
/
被
)...
< br>
saw/heard/felt/smelt sth
doing/done
某人看到
/
听
到
/
感到
/
闻
到某物
(
状态
/
动作
/
被
)
was so adj that we find/feel
它是如此
....
以至于
kept sb spellbound/amazed/
景
物使我如此陶醉
/
惊讶
/
sth held sb entirely in their
power
景物让我完全惊呆了
looked/seemed/appeared/felt like
…景物看起来像…
二、场景描写的素材
(
来自原著
:
追风筝的人
)
1. At least two
dozen kites already hung in the sky, like paper
sharks
roaming for prey. Within an
hour, the number doubled, and red, blue, and
yellow kites glided and spun in the
sky. A cold breeze wafted through my
hair. The wind was perfect for kite
flying, blowing just hard enough to
give some lift, make the sweeps
easier.
(
放风筝的场景描写
,
从各个角度
,
立体描述
)
空中已经挂着至少二十
来只风筝
,
如同纸制的鲨鱼
,
巡游搜猎食物。
不到一个钟头
,
这个数字翻了一番
,
红色的、蓝色的、黄色的风筝在苍
穹来回飞舞
,
熠熠生辉。寒
冷的微风吹
过我的头发。这风正适宜放风筝
,
风速不大
,
恰好能让风筝飘浮起来
,
也便于
操控。
water was a deep blue
and sunlight glittered on its looking glass-clear
surface.
湖水澄蓝
,
波平如镜
,
阳光照在湖上熠熠生辉。
3. Then I glanced up and saw a
pair of kites, red with long blue tails,
soaring in the sky. They danced high
above the trees on the west end of
the
park, over the windmills, floating side by side
like a pair of eyes
looking down on San
Francisco, the city I now call home.
(
场景、比喻
)
我抬起头
,
望见两只红色的风筝
,
带着长长的蓝色尾巴
,
在天空中冉冉升
起。它们
舞动着
,
飞越公园西边的树林
,
飞越风车
,
并排飘浮着
,
如同一双眼睛俯视着旧金
山
,
这个我现在当成家园的城市。
4. Blue skies stood tall and far, the
sun l ike a branding iron searing
the
back
of
your
neck.
Creeks
where
Hassan
and
I
skipped
stones
all
spring
turned
dry, and rickshaws stirred dust when they
sputtered by.(
场景、
比喻
)
天空一碧如洗
,
阳光像烙铁般灼痛后颈。
整个春天我和哈桑在溪流打水漂
,
到了夏
天它们也干涸了。黄包车嗒嗒走过
,
扬起阵阵灰尘。
5.
Somewhere, a branch snapped, an owl hooted. The
wind, soft and cold,
clicked through
tree branches and stirred the bushes that
sprinkled the
slope. And from below,
the faint sound of water tumbling through the
valley.
在某个地方传来树枝
劈啪作响的声音
,
还有猫头鹰的叫声。
寒风微微拂动树枝
,
吹
过山坡上的灌木
丛。而下面
,
水流在山谷淌动
,
传来阵阵微弱的声音。
6. By
three o'clock, the rain had stopped and the sky
was a curdled gray
burdened with lumps
of clouds. A cool breeze blew through the park.(
天
气
)
到三点时
,
雨停了
,<
/p>
铅灰色的天空阴云密布
,
一阵寒风吹过公
园。
7.
The
sun
was
beginning
to
set,
glittering
red
through
the
cracks
between
the ramshackle
buildings.(
景象
)
太阳开始下山
,
那些摇摇欲坠的房子的裂缝
中
,
渗出闪闪的红色斜晖。
三、描写时间
,
动作
,
心理和情感
一
)
、情感好词
:
1.
喜乐
①
The smile on her face shone like a
diamond.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪
闪发光。
② A smile of understanding flashed
across his face.他脸上露出了一种理